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Is Age Just A Number? [My firs JB FF] 
Modified By Getcha Good♥[[Iron Girl Lauren Code name Double inferno!Operation: Garbo is our boy]]  on 12/1/2007 3:27:42 PM)

 This is my first story so tell me what you think and if I should write more!

Chapter 1

 

 

 

"Thank you! Goodnight everybody!" Nick says. They didn't have a meet and greet so they just chilled for a little bit then headed twords the tour bus. As they were about to get onto the tour bus, Nick sees a girl, about 13 or 14 with blonde hair and blue eyes sitting on the floor sobbing with tear stains on her cheeks. "Hey guys I'll be right back." Nick said as he ran over to the girl. "Hey what's wrong?" Nick said. "I wanted to go see the jonas brothers and I had tickets but but..." The girl said and bursted out in tears. "What happened to your tickets?" Nick said with a heartfelt look in his eye. "My sister stole them and when I told my parents what she did she denied it and she drove me down here to make it look like she never stole my tickets. But why am I crying it will keep on happening," the girl said. "I feel so bad for you. I want to do something. Want to meet my brothers?" Nick said. The girl turned around and realized who it was. "Nick? Why did you come over to talk to me?" said the girl. "Because I saw you crying. I wanted to see if you were alright. I never caught your name," Nick said helping the girl up. " My name is Lauren. I'm 13 and my birthday is tomorrow so I'm about 14," she said. "Hey you want to hang out?" Nick said. He was noticing all of her features. She had blonde hair with brownish highlights that seemed to be natrual. She had blue eyes that were so pretty that you could look at them and see that she was sweet and kind. It was like one look at her and you would know everything you need to know about her. She wasn't the as skinny as a stick but she was just the right size. "Sure let me tell my mom" Lauren said and called her mom."My mom said yes!" She said. "Cool let's go I'll show you our tour bus. Then we can go hang out."Nick said. "Cool. I'm gonna sound stupid but is this like a date?" Lauren asked. "I want it to be! Do you want it to be a date cause I do!" Nick said not realizing what he said and Lauren blushes. "I do too." She replied. "Ok let's go!" Nick said grabbing Lauren's hand and running to the tour bus.

 

-What will happen on Lauren and Nick's date?

 

-How will Joe and Kevin React?

 

-What will Lauren's older sister say when she finds out?

 

- How is Lauren going to react when she meets Nick's brothers?

 

- Will you want me to write chapter 2?


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New Post 12/1/2007 3:30 PM
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Re: Is Age Just A Number? [My firs JB FF] 

 _xX_Take_A_Breath wrote

 

Chapter 1

 

"Thank you! Goodnight everybody!" Nick says. They didn't have a meet and greet so they just chilled for a little bit then headed twords the tour bus. As they were about to get onto the tour bus, Nick sees a girl, about 13 or 14 with blonde hair and blue eyes sitting on the floor sobbing with tear stains on her cheeks. "Hey guys I'll be right back." Nick said as he ran over to the girl. "Hey what's wrong?" Nick said. "I wanted to go see the jonas brothers and I had tickets but but..." The girl said and bursted out in tears. "What happened to your tickets?" Nick said with a heartfelt look in his eye. "My sister stole them and when I told my parents what she did she denied it and she drove me down here to make it look like she never stole my tickets. But why am I crying it will keep on happening," the girl said. "I feel so bad for you. I want to do something. Want to meet my brothers?" Nick said. The girl turned around and realized who it was. "Nick? Why did you come over to talk to me?" said the girl. "Because I saw you crying. I wanted to see if you were alright. I never caught your name," Nick said helping the girl up. " My name is Lauren. I'm 13 and my birthday is tomorrow so I'm about 14," she said. "Hey you want to hang out?" Nick said. He was noticing all of her features. She had blonde hair with brownish highlights that seemed to be natrual. She had blue eyes that were so pretty that you could look at them and see that she was sweet and kind. It was like one look at her and you would know everything you need to know about her. She wasn't the as skinny as a stick but she was just the right size. "Sure let me tell my mom" Lauren said and called her mom."My mom said yes!" She said. "Cool let's go I'll show you our tour bus. Then we can go hang out."Nick said. "Cool. I'm gonna sound stupid but is this like a date?" Lauren asked. "I want it to be! Do you want it to be a date cause I do!" Nick said not realizing what he said and Lauren blushes. "I do too." She replied. "Ok let's go!" Nick said grabbing Lauren's hand and running to the tour bus.

-What will happen on Lauren and Nick's date?

-How will Joe and Kevin React?

-What will Lauren's older sister say when she finds out?

- How is Lauren going to react when she meets Nick's brothers?

- Will you want me to write more?

Yes i want u to write more so POOOOOOOOOOST PMSPMS

 
New Post 12/1/2007 3:50 PM
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yes please... PMS ASAP... ♥hannahbanana


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New Post 12/1/2007 4:36 PM
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I LOVE This!!!! PMS!!!!!

this is so good please right chappy 2!!


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New Post 12/1/2007 4:36 PM
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I LOVE This!!!! PMS!!!!!

this is so good please right chappy 2!!


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New Post 12/1/2007 4:59 PM
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Re: Is Age Just A Number? [My firs JB FF] 
Modified By Getcha Good♥[[Iron Girl Lauren Code name Double inferno!Operation: Garbo is our boy]]  on 12/1/2007 5:00:13 PM)
ok but I am going 2 my bff's lil bro's 5th bday party so I will write chapter 2 when I get back. I will be back in like an hour or 2!

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New Post 12/1/2007 5:47 PM
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Okay can't wait!!!!!!!!


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New Post 12/1/2007 8:34 PM
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Re: Is Age Just A Number? [My firs JB FF] 

Chapter 2

 

  "Oh my gosh the tour bus is amazing!" Lauren said. "Thanks we got to decorate it ourselfs," Nick replied. "Nick why do you have a girl in here? Or do you not know there is a girl right next to you?" Joe said. "I know there is a girl right next to me. We are gonna hang out at disneyland," Nick said. "Disneyland?!?!?! No way!!"Lauren screamed."Ya. It's so fun there and I want you to have fun with me,"Nick said. "That is so awesome!"Lauren said looking really excited. Nick was starring at her smiling and Lauren stared back smiling. "Nick? Niiicck? NICK!" Joe said hitting Nick. "Huh what?" Nick said. "Hey I'm Joe, Nick's brother," Joe said shaking Lauren's hand. "I know. I'm Lauren. I'm a huge fan of you guys," Lauren said. "Have you ever been to one of ou-" Joe said being elbowed by Nick. Nick told Joe about how Lauren was crying because of what happened at the concert. Then Kevin walks in. "Hey guys. Who's this?" Kevin said. "I'm Lauren. You're Kevin huh?" Lauren said. "Yep! I'm guessing your a fan?" Kevin asked joking. "Yep! Sweet you guys have guitar hero III?" Lauren said running over to where she saw the game. "Ya I'll play you," Nick said. "You are going down Nick J!" Lauren joked. "Oh it's on now girl!" Nick said joking with Lauren. They played and Lauren won. "Oh yeah! I won! I won! Yeeaaah!" Lauren said doing a little happy dance then tripped on the couch and fell on the couch. "You are such a dork!" Nick said laughing. "I know but I would give myself a 10!" Lauren said laughing. "We're heeerrree!!" Frankie yelled jumping out of the bus. "Ok I gotta put on a hat and sunglasses," Nick said. "Us too come on Frankie people know who you are," Said Joe. "Ya Frankie you have fans. Girls will chase you," Nick said joking. They put on the hats and sunglasses and got on the train to go to into disneyland.

-What will happen on Nick and Lauren's date?

-How will Lauren's sister react?

-Will they ever be alone?

-Will they kiss?

-Will you stick around to find out?

Find out in chapter 3.


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BR>thx laura 4 da animation! :D
 
New Post 12/2/2007 12:23 AM
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That was really awesome!!!

PMS!!!!!
must read mooore!! lol


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New Post 12/2/2007 1:59 AM
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Re: Is Age Just A Number? [My firs JB FF] 
Modified By Getcha Good♥[[Iron Girl Lauren Code name Double inferno!Operation: Garbo is our boy]]  on 12/2/2007 2:00:10 AM)

Chapter 3

   Lauren was bouncing up and down on the tram. "Lauren why are you bouncing?" Nick asked Lauren laughing at her. "Hey I'm excited. I have only been here once when I was  like 5 I think. See I don't even remember how old I was it's been so long," Lauren said laughing. They got off of the tram and Lauren ran off being so excited. She felt like she was 5 again and it was her first time to disneyland again. "So where should we go?" Lauren asked. "I think California Adventures," Nick said grabbing Lauren's hand and then she starts to blush. Nick looks at her and says,"You are so cute when you blush." Nick covers his mouth and looks embarrassed while Joe and Kevin crack up. "Boy Nick think before you speak," Joe said cracking up. "Yeah dude that was stupid," Kevin said bursting our into laughter. "I think that was really  sweet Nick, not stupid," Lauren said quietly. Nick smiles and puts his arm around her. Just as Lauren and Nick were about to kiss Lauren yells,  "Oh God no!!" Lauren  hid her face by forcing Nick's hand to cover Lauren's face. "What's wrong Lauren?" Nick asked confused. "My sister I was talking about is here. She will do anything to make you like her then dump you to break my heart and make me misreble," Lauren said. "Ok let's run. Frankie let me have your sunglasses!" Nick said grabbing Frankie's sunglasses and giving them to Lauren. They all walked and Lauren was putting on her sunglasses. "Lauren?" Lauren's sister Cassie said looking at Lauren.

- What will Cassie say to Lauren?

- What will Cassie say when she finds out who Lauren is with?

- Will Cassie try to break up Lauren and Nick?

- Will Joe or Kevin fall for Cassie?

- Will Nick and Lauren ever be alone?

- Will they ever get to kiss?

- Will Cassie be her evil self or put on an act?

- Will you stick around to find out?

Find out in Chapter 4


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