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New Post 12/3/2007 9:39 PM
User is offline EmiLy [[I guess i alway knew that i had all the strength i needed to.]]
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concrete angel(new ff) 

concrete angel

prologe

so this is how it ends?with him snading above me laughing hs menacing laugh with no one around to save me?is this the guy i thought he was?well DUH hes not. the guy i pictured was nice sweet and funny not mean,cruel and well not funny.

my name is tess and this is my story .i am a 15 year old girl that is the captian of the cher leading team i havestraight,dark brown hair that goes a little past my shoulders with side swept bangs across  my right eye. My eyes are brown with green and copper colored accents. A light tan and a few freckles across the bridge of my nose and my cheeks. im Slender. 5"6ish

i have been abused by this same guy scince i was 13 i always wanted to break up wih him but if i do he says hell kill me the only people tha believe me is my sister shawnee and my best friend ,angela,

why did this happen to me. why? my dream of becoming famous is downt the drain cause he says everytime i go to singing or acting lessons ill pay a punishment. i hide my cuts and bruises because they will think my parents did it.

what did i do to deserve this?


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New Post 12/5/2007 5:55 PM
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Re: concrete angel(new ff) 

is it really that bad

 


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New Post 12/5/2007 6:10 PM
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Re: concrete angel(new ff) 

omg no, no its not bad at all!!

its fantastic so far!

i actually read it like 4 days ago,

but i couldnt reply since i wasnt signed in hhaha

then i forgot...

 

(i dont have a good memory)

but seriously you have to pmasap!



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New Post 12/5/2007 6:12 PM
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Re: concrete angel(new ff) 

 Twilight - Princess wrote

omg no, no its not bad at all!!

its fantastic so far!

i actually read it like 4 days ago,

but i couldnt reply since i wasnt signed in hhaha

then i forgot...

 

(i dont have a good memory)

but seriously you have to pmasap!

haha

thnks!

dont worry i do too


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New Post 12/5/2007 6:38 PM
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this is so awesome so farRe: concrete angel(new ff) 

This is so awesome so far. Please PMS!


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New Post 12/6/2007 11:18 PM
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Re: this is so awesome so farRe: concrete angel(new ff) 

OMG!

it's not bad at all!

you deff need to post more!

omg, cheerleading captain. reminds me of Bring it on!

Oh gosh, shabooya roll call!

sha-sha-shabooya, sha-sha-shabooya roll call!

my name is tess

yeahhhh

i'm so fine

yeahhh

and when i shake it

yeahhhh

i blow their mind

(totally not mine, someone made it up for me!)

haha

PMASAP

much luv,

tess


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New Post 12/7/2007 8:53 PM
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Re: this is so awesome so farRe: concrete angel(new ff) 

"get up"he yelled

when i didnt he hit me across the face making me grab my cheek

"i said get UP!"

when i got up he threw me against the wall

"stop your hurting me!!"

"ohh really" he teased puching me in the stomache

when he was finally done i ran to the studio to make up a dance when i got there i heard singing coming from the other room but i couldnt see who it was scince the door the was locked

"thats wierd"

i walked off to the other studio and started singing:

She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel"

i heard clapping down the isle but i couldnt se who it was.

my body started shaking with fear and i took off i heard the faint sound of

"WAIT"

"COME BACK"

but i didnt dare turn around it could of been him. by him i mean shawn.the guy ive been going out with for 2 years and was too afriad to break up with him because he said hed kill me if i did

obviously i wasnt paying attention cause i ran into something or someone but i was to dizy to find out

"are you ok?"a sweet voice asked

but before i could answer the light went out. it was to much for my body to take


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New Post 12/7/2007 9:18 PM
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Re: this is so awesome so farRe: concrete angel(new ff) 

OMG! YOU NEED TO ADD MORE NOW!!!!!


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Re: this is so awesome so farRe: concrete angel(new ff) 

POST MOREEEE

I <3 Martina McBride, and this song makes me cry

now I gotta go listen to More Than  A Memory by Garth Brooks

^^I'm weird, right? That song makes me HAPPY.


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New Post 12/7/2007 9:53 PM
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Re: concrete angel(new ff) 

thank you

yeah i cried the first time

thanks 4 the support

emily


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