so this is my very first FF
ive been fantasizing about it so i decide to write i think theres a good plot to it
but its just my writing skills thats a little rusty or just plain bad but i should stop ranting now so here is...
Chapter 1
Ms. O’Connell and Mrs. Grossman waved goodbye, rushing into the taxi. Angie, Andrea, and Janine waved goodbye to their mothers. They felt bad for being excited that their mothers are going to be in Europe for 2 months, leaving them alone in the house. Janine was to stay in Wyckoff, New Jersey with her cousins. She loved staying at their house. Andrea the oldest of the three, was left in charge. She’s 18 years old and a VERY responsible young adult. Angie, who’s 16 years old, is also very responsible and mature for her age. Angie is probably closer to Janine than Andrea is. Janine and Angie were inseparable, well they’re not always together, only on off school days since Janine lives in New York.
“Ah! This is going to be so much fun! I CANNOT believe they’re actually gone for the WHOLE summer! ” Angie exclaimed, obviously very excited.
“I know, right?!” Janine said, also grinning with excitement. Andrea chuckled, “C’mon, let’s go inside, guys.”
They walked straight into the dining room, where Andrea and Angie’s mom, Mrs. Grossman, had already prepared dinner for the three of them.
After they finished eating and washing the dishes, they all went up to their rooms. Janine followed Angie since she was staying with her. Mrs. Grossman insisted that Janine should stay in her room but Angie opposed and insisted Janine should stay with her, instead.
“Ugh, I have to baby-sit tomorrow! I wish we can hang out!” Amy complained, closing the door behind her.
“Aw that’s okay. We still have the whole summer to hang out!”
“True…” They walked over to Angie’s sofa bunk bed, which she purposely got so Janine didn’t have to sleep in her sleeping bag every time she’s over.
“Are you going to hang out with John tomorrow?” Angie asked.
“Possibly,” Janine said, smiling at the thought of finally seeing her boyfriend after 3 months. Janine has been with John for more than a year. Janine never thought it’d work because of the whole distance thing but its actually working. He’s 2 years older than her, so her mom, Ms. O’Connell doesn’t really approve of him. But she knows she can’t do anything about it and she just let it go.
“Aw, look at you. You practically look like a clown with that huge grin on your face,” Angie joked. Janine, a huge smile still plastered on her face, just looked at her not saying anything.
Angie unfolded the sofa bed, and walked into her closet, rummaging to find a blanket for Janine. She found her old SpongeBob SquarePants sheet and handed it to Janine. “Sorry, I have no clue where my other bed sheets went.”
“Hah it’s okay. You know I love SpongeBob!” Janine said, hugging the soft blanket.
“Hah, right. I’m gonna go change. You can go change in my bathroom; I’ll use the one outside.”
“Okay.” As soon as Janine walked out of the bathroom, she pulled out her iPhone to text John.
From: Janine<3
Guess whos in nj! :)
9:53pm 6/22/08
From: My Heart Belongs To John<3
U r! I cant wait to c u babe<3
9:54pm 6/22/08
From: Janine<3
I kno! I cant wait either! R we meetin up 2moro?
9:56pm 6/22/08
From: My Heart Belongs To John<3
No i hav work full time all week :(
9:56pm 6/22/08
From: Janine<3
Aw r u serious? But i wanna c u :’(
9:57pm 6/22/08
From: My Heart Belongs To John<3
Im srry<3 i wish i could ask 4 a day off but i kinda havta its for not goin to work 4 a long tym 4 bein sick
9:59pm 6/22/08
Angie walked back in and found Janine already in bed texting on her cell phone. She didn’t bother asking since she figured it was John.
From: Janine<3
Oh :( its ok well just have 2 wait i guess i have to go now tho ill ttyl<3
10:00pm 6/22/08
From: My Heart Belongs To John<3
Ok im srry again night<3
10:01 6/22/08
From: Janine<3
Its ok don’t worry nighty night<3
10:01 6/22/08
“Alrighty then…I have to leave early tomorrow so, I’m gonna go to sleep.”
“Okay, goodnight, Ang,” Janine said, setting her iPhone on the bedside table.
“Night, Jay,” Angie climbed onto the ladder and got in bed. Janine hit the lights and as soon as Angie closed her eyes, she fell deep asleep. Janine was too troubled to sleep. She was upset that she couldn’t see her boyfriend sooner than she thought. But it didn’t take her very long to fall asleep for excitement had kept her awake the night before.
so thats the first chapter im gonna try to post more tonight but i have to get off in less than 30 minutes
blame my brother
anyway how do you guys like it?
