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New Post 12/12/2007 4:28 PM
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Take my hand tonight (new ff) 
I opened my door to my '67 mustang and stepped out onto the hard pavement. It was the first day of school. I was somewhat terrified to be an upperclassman but my fear was slightly reduced because I soon met up with my best friend Brooke.
 
“Hey Valerie, how do you feel on your first day as a junior in high school?” she said excitedly.
“Nervous but excited, how about you?” I replied.
“I’m not nervous at all, I was listening to the radio and the song S.O.S by the Jonas Brothers came on and it calmed me down. Something about Joe’s soft voice calms me down.” She said smiling.
 
I thought to myself, that song was a really great song. But soon my thoughts were interrupted by Brooke who was holding the door open. Suddenly a gust of wind came and tossled my hair out of place. I immediately went into the restroom and stood in front of the full length mirror brushing my perfectly straight brown hair. I thought I look really cute today. I examined my star earrings, my cross necklace that I wore every day, and then my purity ring. The ring was a claddah ring. My mom had gotten me it for my birthday. When the heart is facing out it means you are single and when it is facing in it means your heart is taken and when worn on your left finger it means you are staying abstinent until marriage. I looked really nice in my pink and black checkered vans, dark wash straight leg jeans, and my black pink and green Switchfoot t-shirt. After taking some time to fix my hair I walked quickly to my first period class. All day I seemed to be day dreaming of someone but couldn’t make out a face. All I heard was singing, beautiful singing. The day went on and before I knew it school was over. Since it was only a half day, Brooke and I decided to go out to lunch. We choose to eat at In-n-Out Burger. We piled into my car and drove off. Arriving soon after this we walked into the resturaunt. In front of us were three boys. They seemed to be taking forever to order. But we didn’t mind because they were really cute. They were all fairly old looking, wearing hats and sunglasses. It seemed weird that they were all wearing shades but I understood since it was California. As I was deciding on what I was going to order I heard a clank of a coin on the ground. I saw all of the boys bend down to pick it up, hitting their heads together, their hats all falling off.
 
“Good going guys now our cover up is ruined.” –said a boy with curly brown hair and brown eyes.
“OMG IT’S THE JONAS BROTHERS!!!”-screamed a young girl.
 
All of a sudden a huge mob of girls showed up, crowding around the boys. But we didn’t mind because now we could finally order. I ordered and took my change and cup and turned around to see the same boy with curly hair and brown eyes looking straight at me. I couldn’t help but notice he was whispering to another boy who looked to be about 18 with straight brown hair.
 
 
Jonas Brothers POW
“Switchfoot, I love them. What a great band.”-Nick said
“Nick what are you talking about?”- Joe asked
“I couldn’t help but notice that girl that was behind us in line. She has these amazing eyes. She’s wearing a Switchfoot t-shirt. But why isn’t she coming up to us swarming us?”-said Nick
“Some girls just don’t like to swarm celebrities. Some of them are different and actually want to hold a conversation with us instead of just attacking us.” Kevin said laughing.
“Oh well we should go up to her and her friend and complement her on her shirt.”-Nick said.
“Alright, let’s do it.”-Kevin and Joe said together.
 
Valeries POW
Omg she thought to herself. Are those cute guys really going to come and talk to me?
 
“Don’t look now but I think that those boys are coming to talk to us.”-Brooke said.
“They are really cute, I don’t mind. I just hope that I don’t get too shy.”-I replied.
“Hi I’m Joe, this are my brothers Nick and Kevin.”-Joe said to Brooke and myself
“Wait a second. Are you guys the Jonas Brothers?”-Brooke asked.
“Yup we are. I’m surprised you didn’t already know that. We noticed that you two didn’t attack us when our disguises were revealed.” –Kevin said.
“Well my name is Brooke and this is Valerie. She is shy sometimes. She hates meeting new people. Your guys’ music is amazing by the way.”- Brooke said.
“Thanks. And Nick hates meeting new people too. But me and Kevin are up to it. We just gotta get your friend Valerie to open up then.”-joe said.
 
The boys sat down with us and chatted for a while. I kept looking up at Nick. He looked up at me and smiled. He smiled and got his phone out suggesting that I give him my number he handed me his phone. I typed my number into his phone. This was weird. Why didn’t he just talk to me in person. Brooke seemed to be getting along well with Joe and Kevin. Then all of a sudden I received a text message. It said this “Sorry I’m not talking much. I get akward around girls I think are cute. But I was wondering do you  and Brooke maybe wanna hangout with me and my brothers later on tonight?”
 
 
 

 

 

 

thats all for right now. do you like it?


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New Post 12/13/2007 4:32 PM
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Re: Take my hand tonight (new ff) 

please tell me if you like it.if you do ill continue the story!


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New Post 12/13/2007 4:50 PM
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I love this! It sounds like its going to be one of the huge ones that go on with like 200 pages, GREAT!

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New Post 12/13/2007 5:14 PM
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Wow this sounds good post more soon! =]

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New Post 12/13/2007 9:58 PM
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Re: Take my hand tonight (new ff) 

i should be posting more tonight or sometime between friday and saturday.ive got practice saturday 10 to 6 but after that im all free.im pullin an all nighter tonight so ill prolly write some laterr.way laterr.im glad you guys like it.and do you know where i can get a cool siggy or whatever its called?


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New Post 12/13/2007 11:24 PM
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Re: Take my hand tonight (new ff) 

valeries pow

omg hes so cute.i dont know what to do.well of course i should say yes.she texted him back.

yes we would love to hangout with you all.but what are we going to do?

they didnt realize that the time had flown by.and it was almost 4 hours later.wow we talked for that long.i looked at the time.omg 4:30.i have to meet my parents at 5.they said they needed to tell me something important.

"we need to leave.now brooke.my parents have something important to tell me."

"alright.well it was good to meet you three.and we have each others numbers and are going to be hanging out tomorrow so we will call you later."

they exchanged hugs.and then it was time for nick and valerie to hug.they hugged.but it was something different.it felt like warmth.like love.like everythin she wanted.wow.she was wowed.

"omg brooke nick is so cute.i cant wait to hangout with them."

i dropped brooke off at her house which was across the street.then i arrived home.all i could think of was when i would be able to see.or even hear nicks voice again.she couldnt stop thinking of him.

"valerie.we have some terrible news to tell you.sit down."

omg this doesnt sound good.what does this mean?bad.good.what.oh no.

"ok so we know that it was your first day of school.but we are going to withdraw you from school and start homeschooling you.we think it will be better for you to focus and to keep you on track.we both think it is for the best."

"omg how could you do this too me.why.i can focus better at school than at home alone.you guys are never home.i have to cook all my own meals.do my own laundry.and now teach myself my own schoolwork?thanks mom and dad thanks"

she ran up the stairs.and then slammed her door shut.all she wanted to do was call brooke of course.but most of all call nick.she needed to see him now.somehow she thought that he could really help her get through this.they barely knew each other.but still there was something there.trust.she got her phone out.and texted nick.

hey.i need to talk to you now.can we meet somewhere?please.i need someone to talk to.

she called brooke and explained it all to her quickly.seeing as she was waiting for a reply back from nick.brooke was upset but not too much since they lived across the street.they would be seeing each other anyways.suddenly her bright yellow sidekick phone lit up.new message.omg yes ive been waiting for this.

yes i can.call me.i can leave as soon as i have directions.btw i think you are really cute.

she picked up the phone and dialed his number.they exchanged info.it seemed that as soon as she hung up the phone with him the doorbell rang.she sprinted down the stairs.opened the door to see a familiar head of curls.he looked into her eyes and saw that they were red and swollen.

"hey are you ok.is everything alright?whats going on?"

"my parents are stupid.can i get out of my house.please.i need to."

"sure anything for someone as beautiful as you."

he opened his arms and she just stood there.smelling him.taking it all in.then their faces got closer...

 

 

thats all for tonight.do you like?please comment!


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New Post 12/14/2007 12:35 AM
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U R AN AMAZING WRITER!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! IT'S GREAT!! hehe I am homeschooled...... it's not that bad...... There is a place to take classes so I see all my friends on a daily basis just like everyone else.... anyways

POST MORE SOON!!

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New Post 12/14/2007 5:44 AM
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Re: Take my hand tonight (new ff) 

new update tonight!!!but for now ive got school.


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New Post 12/15/2007 11:37 PM
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Re: Take my hand tonight (new ff) 

sorry it took so long for me to repost.ive been busy.and its been really snowy.we are supposed to get up to 17 inches!!! anyways heres somemore of the story.

their faces got closer together.but then right before their lips met valerie pulled away."nick i have to two things to tell you.its important and no one else knows so far." she then led him out the door and grabbed his hand.even though kevin and joe and his mom were still in the car waiting for his return he just went ahead with val.mouth the words hang ona  sec to them in the car.she led im down the street to a park.with a playground.she sat down on a swing and he sat down in one next to her."ok val what did you want to tell me?"

"ok nick.no one else knows this first thing im goin to tell you.so you cant say a word to anyone.alright.im trusting you." nick nodded his head looking very concerned. "about a year ago i was very depressed.i was hurting my self physically."she pulled away the bracelet she had on her wrist showing him the scars."i did it because my parents are so horrible to me.they kind of abuse me.and it helped to get rid of the pain.but dont worry.im better now.and im happier than ever now that i finally have someone by my side to help me and talk to me.i know that brooke is my best friend.but i just cant talk to her about this stuff."

"omg val.im so glad you told me.i really am.and just know im here to support you through anything and everything you need.i will always be here for you.okay." he grabbed her pulling her into a tight hug.she just sat there drawing in the sent of his cologne.

"but wait nick i have one more thing to tell you.i know who the jonas brothers are.i have loved you guys ever since before your first cd came out.i have every single cd that you guys have made.and i just.i went to the first concert you guys ever played in california.when there used to be like 30 people in the crowd.and i saw you face and i knew somehow we would find each other.i felt something toawrds you that i have never felt before.i knew i loved you right then and there."

"omg val.i remember that.iremember during soundcheck i was like smiling at you and we would meet eyes and then you would look away.haha wow.that was so long ago.and to think now we are sitting here.talking.wow.fate is so amazing."

"yeah nick.i know.i totally believe in fate.totally.did you have anything to tell me.do you need to talk about anything?"

"yeah actually i wanted to ask you something."

 

hmmmm what is going to happen?will val and nick end up dating.is he going to ask her to be his boyfriend.or not.hmmm.comment on it!!!!thanks!!!!!


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New Post 12/16/2007 12:08 AM
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I like it.

I'd just like to say, you have some grammar mistakes, and it's kinda a pet peeve of mine.

I like the story, but I was just saying.

PMS!

PS. Don't take it offsenivly or anything by the way..


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