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New Post 7/20/2007 1:47 AM
User is offline jonasbrospone
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purity 

            Kevin strummed away at his guitar, humming a tune that he had written.  The rain was pouring on his window giving him a metronome to work with.  Tat, tat, tat.  He found it easier to write songs on rainy days like this one.  It gave him a feeling he couldn’t explain.  A feeling only he knew.

            The day Kevin first started guitar was the rainiest day of the year.  He had gone to school that day hoping he could forget about the weather when he was finally with his girlfriend, Anne. 

Anne was not the most popular girl in school, nor the smartest, nor the most athletic, nor the most talented.  She was just a girl.  Kevin had seen her the first day of high school looking extremely lost so he helped her out.  Ever since then they had been friends.

It was his last year of high school when he found it.  The feeling.

Mandy was running down the hall.  “Kevin!”  She yelled out. 

Kevin turned around and smiled.  “Hey Mandy, what’s up?”

“Not much.”  Mandy laughed.  “Just thought you needed some company.  The weather’s pretty awful don’t you think?”  Kevin looked over at Mandy and saw that she was only wearing a tank top with a small sweater.  “What?”  Mandy said, staring at Kevin.

“Here, take my jacket.”  Kevin took off his jacket revealing that he himself only had a tank on under as well.  He handed his jacket to Mandy.

Mandy refused.  “No, you’ll catch a cold.”

“You’re one to talk.”  Kevin laughed.  They paused for a moment staring at each other.  Kevin noticed for the first time how beautiful Mandy was.  Mandy and Kevin had been friends ever since childhood.  In fact, Mandy had been best friends with his brothers Nick and Joe too.  But Kevin would never date Mandy.  She was a best friend that he couldn’t afford to lose.

“Fine, I’ll take it.  Just stop the staring it’s kind of freaking me out.”

Kevin laughed.  “Alright then.”

They continued to walk down the school hallway.  It was still raining like crazy.  Since it was early, there weren’t that many students around.  “So, where are Nick and Joe?”  Mandy asked, breaking the silence.

“They’re not coming until a bit later.  They were still getting ready when I left.  I think my mom is gonna bring ‘em school.” 

Then Mandy stopped walking.  “What’s wrong?”  Kevin asked, stopping next to her.  Something in the hallway caught Mandy’s eye.  “Earth to Mandy…”  Kevin said waving his hands in front of her face.

Kevin looked ahead of him to try and figure out what had caught Mandy’s attention.  Before he could pinpoint it though, Mandy grabbed his arm and dragged him the opposite way.  “Whoa!  Mandy, what’s up?”  Kevin said, almost tripping over himself.

“Nothing, I just don’t feel like walking that way.  Let’s go wait for Nick and Joe at the front of the school.”  Mandy said walking a little faster.  This is the first time Kevin had seen Mandy act so weird.

“Mandy, can you slow down a little?  Why are you in such a rush?  What happened over there?”  Kevin said trying to look back.  Mandy ignored him and walked even faster.  Kevin thought he saw tears well up in her eyes.  “Mandy.”  Kevin said, stopping in the hall.  Mandy looked up at Kevin and started to cry. 

“I’m sorry.”  She said.  “I just didn’t want you to get hurt.”  Kevin pulled Mandy in closer to him.  Get hurt?  He had no idea what Mandy was talking about but he held her close anyway.

“You know Mandy… seeing you cry hurts me the most.”  Mandy wiped away her tears and smiled.

“Sorry.”  She said looking behind Kevin.  “I’m going to go wait for Nick and Joe.  Catch you later Kev.”  Mandy turned around and started walking.

“Wait Mandy.  I’ll come with…”  Kevin felt someone hug him from behind.  He turned around.  It was Anne.

“Oh hey babe, what’s up?”  Kevin said hugging her back.  “It’s nice to see you but I have to catch up with—

“You look cold.”  Mary said rubbing Kevin’s arm.  “Don’t you have a jacket?”

“Oh, well yeah I kind of gave it to…”

“Mandy.  Right.  I saw you.  And I saw you with her just a while ago.  Here.”  She said looking at Kevin.  Kevin felt a little awkward but he knew he had to get to Mandy.  He knew that she wasn’t feeling too well or else why would she just run away like that?  It wasn’t like her.

“Well yeah.  You know she is my best—

“Why do you always have to hang out with her?”  Anne interrupted.

“Because she’s my best—

“Mandy…Mandy…Mandy…”  Anne said.  Kevin couldn’t stop thinking about what happened to Mandy so he turned around and started walking.  “Kevin.  Don’t go.”  Anne said.  Kevin stopped but he didn’t turn around.  The wind blew and Kevin felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand up.  “Choose.”  Anne said.  “It’s either me or Mandy.  I’m sick of it.  You’re always with her.  You’re never with me.  I’m your girlfriend.  I love you Kevin.”  Those three words.  Kevin had never heard them from Anne until today.  He was shocked but he still didn’t turn around.  “I want you to choose.  Forever.”

Kevin didn’t hesitate.  “Mandy.”  He said and then started to walk away. 

The rain was still pouring.  Kevin had to look for Mandy.  He couldn’t let his best friend just run away like that.  He wanted to know what happened.  He was surprised to hear that Anne said she loved him.  He had never really given it much thought before but now he realized they had been going out for over a year now.  He didn’t regret choosing Mandy, even if Anne really did love him.

After a minute of walking, Kevin started to run.  He passed by some people who said hi to him but he ran past them.  He finally got to the front of the school and looked around for Mandy.  He saw her with Nick and Joe.  “She’ll be fine now.”  He thought to himself. 

All of a sudden, he felt the need to cough.  It was small at first but then he felt as though he was suffocating.  He put his hands over his mouth and tried to control his breathing by taking in air through his nostrils but it still didn’t stop.  He took his hands away from his mouth and saw blood.  He panicked.  There was blood on the ground, on his shoes, and on his clothes.  He picked up whatever strength he had left and found a pillar to lean against.  He raised his arm to cover his coughing and so his arm became covered in blood.  He felt light headed, fell backwards, closed his eyes and heard nothing but the pouring rain.


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"Once I was in the bathroom at a Fall Out Boy concert and some guy comes in, sees the syringe and goes, 'Cool.' He had no idea." - Nick Jonas

I thought I woke up one day and saw Nick with sideburns... It was just Kevin at Arthur Ashe Kids Day.

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New Post 7/20/2007 2:31 AM
User is offline ♥Sara Jo.
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Re: purity 

Wow... this is REALLY good.... Keep it coming and UPDATTEEE!! :)

--> Sara <3



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New Post 7/20/2007 8:15 AM
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Re: purity 
that's really strong...i really like it...post more soon!!!
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New Post 7/20/2007 8:30 PM
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Re: purity 
great start... keepit comin girleh...

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New Post 7/20/2007 9:15 PM
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Re: purity 

OMJ!! KEVVIEE!!! NOO!! LOL J/K But i hope Kevin is alright...

 

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New Post 7/20/2007 11:03 PM
User is offline jonasbrospone
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Re: purity 
lol i am NOT a girl -_-... jb fans can be guys too.  and yes guys can write.

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"Once I was in the bathroom at a Fall Out Boy concert and some guy comes in, sees the syringe and goes, 'Cool.' He had no idea." - Nick Jonas

I thought I woke up one day and saw Nick with sideburns... It was just Kevin at Arthur Ashe Kids Day.

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New Post 7/20/2007 11:35 PM
User is offline jonasbrospone
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Re: purity 
i know the story kinda changed a little and all.  if you guys think its weird then i'll rewrite it.  it's kinda rushed lol since you guys wanted me to update.  i didnt get a chance to go back and add stuff and rewrite some stuff but here you go.

            Nick felt his heart pounding against his chest.  He looked at Joe.  Joe nodded.  “Mandy, stay here real quick.  Don’t ask questions.  Just stay here.”  Nick said.  Joe and Nick ran over to where Kevin was.  They pulled him out of sight and looked at each other.  “Mom was right.  She said it was going to be today.”  Joe nodded in agreement. 

“It looks like it was worse than ours.”  Joe said, looking at his blood covered brother.  “Is he still breathing?” Joe asked.

Nick tried to listen for breathing.  “Nope.  I don’t think so.”

“Then it’s time.”  Joe took off his purity ring which was on his left ring finger.  Nick did the same.  They put their rings on Kevin’s chest and the rings looked as if they started to absorb all the blood on Kevin’s clothes.  “You have it?”  Joe asked.

“Yeah.”  Nick took a ring from his jacket pocket.  The ring was silver and had a cross carved into it.  Nick laid it next to the other two rings.  All three rings started to emit a faint white glow.  

“What’s happening?  Is this supposed to happen?”  Joe asked.

“I don’t know.  He’s supposed to wake up.  Maybe it’s bigger than we thought… you don’t think he’s dead do you?”  Nick said looking at Joe.

“No.  He can’t be.  Let’s just give it some time.  Remember, it took me a half hour before I woke up.”

“Yeah, let’s wait then.”  Nick prayed, hoping that time will be enough.

An hour passed by and the rain was still pouring.  The rings still had the same faint glow about them.  All of the blood had disappeared but Kevin was still unconscious.  Then the rings stopped glowing.  Nick and Joe exchanged looks.  “This can’t be happening.”  Joe thought.  Blood started to come out of the side of Kevin’s mouth.  Kevin started coughing again.  Blood spurted out of his mouth, leaving a small puddle beside Nick.  Nick and Joe grabbed their rings and put them on.

“Get to Mandy.”  Kevin coughed out, blood still dripping from his mouth.  He tried to sit up but he couldn’t.  Nick and Joe tried to help him up but Kevin pushed them away.  “I said get to Mandy.”  Kevin coughed again.

“Nick, stay here with Kevin.”  Joe got up and went to look for Mandy.  “Mandy!”  He called out, the wind and rain drowning out his voice.  She was nowhere in sight.  School had already started so there was no one outside.  Joe glanced around again.  Then he saw her.  She was lying on the floor where Nick had told her to wait.  Joe ran over to her and tried to pick her up but her clothes were heavy from the rain.  “Why is all this happening today?”  Joe whispered to himself.  “Nick!  I need help!”  Nick ran over to where Joe and Mandy were.  They picked her up and brought her over to Kevin.  

By this time, Kevin was sitting up but he was still coughing out blood.  It hurt him a lot but he had to stay awake.  “What are we gonna do Nick?”  Joe asked.  At that moment, Kevin lost his strength and lost consciousness.  Joe looked at Nick.  “Don’t worry.  He’s still breathing.”  Joe sighed a sigh of relief.  He looked over at Mandy and wondered why their best friend had to go through this too.  “They both saw the same thing.”  Nick said.  “They both had the same feelings.”  He paused.  “Mandy is a part of our family too.  It sure feels like it.  I don’t think anyone would have thought they would have their awakening on the same day.”  Nick explained.

“But she doesn’t have a ring.”  Joe replied.

“She doesn’t need one.  She has the three of us.  The only thing we have is her.  She’s our—

“She can’t be.”  Joe interrupted.

“Listen to me Joe.  Even Frankie mistook her for it.  It’s true.  Mandy is our sister.”



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"Once I was in the bathroom at a Fall Out Boy concert and some guy comes in, sees the syringe and goes, 'Cool.' He had no idea." - Nick Jonas

I thought I woke up one day and saw Nick with sideburns... It was just Kevin at Arthur Ashe Kids Day.

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New Post 7/20/2007 11:39 PM
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Re: purity 
awwww jobrospone im soooo sorry... i mean c'mon, do you blame me for assuming that you were a girl tho?? Let me just say thats its actually honestly really exciting to be reading a fan fic from a guys prespective... hurry up and update... cant wait for the next chapt. and again... sorry!! :)

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New Post 7/20/2007 11:44 PM
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Re: purity 
Wow... this story is DEFFINITELY..............different. lool... keep it coming tho... its nice to read of such a huge turn in events like that....

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New Post 7/20/2007 11:49 PM
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Re: purity 
post more please!
 
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