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New Post 12/15/2007 9:13 AM
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What Won't Be Seen 

 

What Won’t Be Seen

Chapter 1

If I got a dollar for every time I put this CD on repeat, god….I’d be a millionaire. Who cares if some people thinks its annoying! I’m in love. In love with….yeah my boyfriend…but three other ‘boyfriends’ too. The Jonas Brothers. You know, Nick, Kevin and Joe? Yeah I’m sure you do. Who doesn’t these days?

Well I’ve been a fan since they first started out. When I was little, my parents took me to a Broadway show. I found it extremely boring…until I got to go backstage and meet the cast.

That’s when it happened. "Nicholas, there are some people who want to meet you," a lady, I knew to be this ‘Nicholas’ boy’s mother, said. She rushed the boy over to us. He only looked a year younger than me, if that. And then his family came. Two older brothers. Both a little older than me. I felt a little sensation when I saw the second oldest…but you know, I was only…what…nine? Yeah…

So I played a round of Bad Guy verses Indian with them before my parents took me out. They exchanged phone numbers and set up a few play dates every now and then.

So a few years passed, and I hadn’t seen them in months. That’s when I found out. They got a record deal.

From that moment on, I never really saw them. I went to a few of their first concerts, and they acknowledged me with smiles from the stage. That’s it. I went to the meet and greets and to them I was just another fan. So I figured they just weren’t in my life anymore.

Later on, they switched to Hollywood. And in a matter of WEEKS, they blew up. Now EVERYONE knew their name. Swarms of eight year olds, desperate thirteen year olds, and then that’s where I fall in. The category of ‘in love sixteen year olds.’

They were everywhere! Seriously, everywhere. And now, they’re on this tour with that Miley Cyrus girl. Don't get me started, okay?

And I’m going to one of those concerts. Actually, in two weeks. I’m waiting for the tickets. They say, ‘oh, your tickets will be here in two days.’

That. Is. Bull.

I’ve been waiting two WEEKS. But hey, I’m sure there’s a perfectly GOOD reason. I got these tickets off of Ticket Master. The ACTUAL site you get the ACTUAL tickets from. Not a scalper site, cause I got these FRONT ROW seats, for 67 bucks. Really, 56, plus the pointless 11 dollar handling fee. What the hell is a handling fee anyways?

I flipped over on my blue, brown and green polka dotted bed. The CD was over. That’s one more dollar.

I could hear the wind blowing outside of my window. It’s so…fierce. The sun isn’t even out today. I guess it won’t be very productive. I’ll stay here the whole day.

I pulled over my laptop and flipped it up. No one’s on AIM.

Great.

That was my last resort.

"BROOKE GET DOWN HERE! YOU’RE GONNA LOVE THIS!" mom called up the stairs. Wow…what is it this time, mom? Let me guess. Your favorite show is on rerun? You ate chocolate? What is it this time. I don’t know.

I grunted and got up from my bed. I was so comfortable. Ugh…

I opened the door and stepped out into the world. Well….the hallway outside of my room. The white carpet was freezing. "What’s up with that!?" I mumbled to myself. "I thought TILE was supposed to be freezing…"

"What’s that hun?" mom asked, holding a white envelope.

"Nothing…" I replied as I slumped down the stairs one step at a time. The fireplace was burning in our living room. Maybe THAT’S where I’ll be lazy all day.

Mom waved the envelope in front of my face like she was teasing a child. Well, she was. A sixteen year old child…

"I have something you wanttttt…" she laughed. I tilted my head.

"What?"

And then it hit me. My. TICKETS.

"OH MY GOD NO WAY!" I snatched them from her hands. "THANK YOU SO MUCH!" I pulled her into a tight hug and kissed her cheek. "You’re amazing, mom you are thank you so much."

"Hopefully they’ll notice you this time," she laughed. Yeah…my mom is great. She can be weird sometimes, but she’s just like a teenager. She’s amazing. And I love her to death no matter how much she gets on my nerves sometimes.

I opened them. Hannah Montana & Miley Cyrus featuring Jonas Bros.

Could they just not spell out brothers? Lazy, lazy, LAZY.

Four tickets and the credit ticket which I just then tossed to the counter. They were mine. I had to call Lilly.

Yeah, Lilly has been my best friend forever. I picked up our home phone and dialed. "Lilly?"

"Yeah?"

"Guess what," I said in a dead tone.

She was silent for a moment, "What?"

Another dead silence before I screamed, "WE’RE GOING TO SEE THE JONAS BROTHERS!"

"AND HANNAH MONTANA?" she screamed back.

"Shut it…" I laughed. She laughed with me.

"So…who else is going? You only got four tickets, I’ll pay you back. I am forcing John to go is that okay? He’ll pay."

I laughed and propped myself up on the gray marble counter. "I don’t know if Spencer will go…" yeah, Spencer’s my boyfriend. My amazing boyfriend. He’s a year older than me…he’s 17, a junior. I love him to death and everyone tells me he loves me the same. My friends joke around and say he’s obsessed, but it’s sweet. It makes me feel good that…well…all the girls at our school want HIM. But he wants ME. And I can’t love him any more than I already do. Well…maybe I can…

"Brooke, come on, he loves you….he’ll go. And John’s going so he’ll definitely go."

I laughed, "What does John want to check out Miley or something?"

"Shut up," she said in a serious tone. "Nah, it’s okay. But yeah…call Spencer. I love you! I gotta go though. Mom broke her coffee machine. Well…it’s unplugged…she thinks its broken."

"AGAIN?" I sighed. "Okay…love you too…bye."

I took a deep breath and stared at my little brother. He was watching MTV…he always does. Never stops. He’s like, an MTV machine. But aren’t all 13year olds MTV machines?

I dialed Spencer’s number…cell of course…and his music came on. Him and his music…I mean, I love music, it’s my passion. But THIS stuff?

"Brooke?"

"Yeah hey…"

"I’ve been calling your cell forever babe…why didn’t you pick up…."

I smiled and looked up at my bedroom door. "Off and under my bed…"

"Oh I see…well what’s up?" I could hear the smile in his voice again.

"I got those Hannah Montana and JONAS Brothers tickets in the mail this morning…"

"And…." He said.

"Lilly’s brining John can you come PLEASE! Please, please, PLEASE!!!"

He laughed, "That’s stupid…Hannah Montana and those BROTHERS….pfft…"

"SPENCER!" I laughed. "Please! I’ll do anything."

"Anything?" he laughed.

"Yeah, anything." OH crap….did I say…ANYTHING? Crap…CRAP….

"I’ll do anything for you. Yeah alright…I’ll come. 67, right?"

"Yeah…if you want…" I didn’t know he’d really want to pay for his ticket.

"Of course. Okay sorry, I have to go to the game. I’m sorry I’ll call tonight, okay?"

"Thanks so much Spencer…"

"I love you," he said.

I smiled, "I love you too…bye."

He hung up.

There. Everything was put into place. The concert was on. But…would Joe really notice me? Nick? Kevin? Could we get backstage? Maybe….I don’t know. I’ll try. I can figure out something. But in the meantime I better go be lazy. Oh…hey! Little bro is off my favorite couch. Disney, anyone?

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So this is the first chapter of my new FanFic. Because, Trapped Away got 'lost'

I can't stand not writing SOMETHING. And So...i posted a preview of this fanfic a few days ago. I wasn't going to start it yet, but I really wanted to get into it. So I started it....no kidding...

I'm sad Trapped Away is gone, but you know, i wasn't really enjoying that one as much. This one, I like i a lot more, and i'll update more. So there it is...

And I have made up these characters. I'm not Brooke. I'm RENA. Haha...yeah. This is my first First person fic. So we'll see how it goes. Thanks for reading <3

[[<3]] Rena



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New Post 12/15/2007 9:24 AM
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ooh i like it! PMS


8.24.08 = first JB concert. Best night of my life.
Jonas Fo Sho-ness!
Nick Jonas= l.o.v.e <3
Leigh made this siggy =) I love those boys! Photobucket Thanks Jenny =) love ya. Go read my fanfic, Regret. ! people!
Photobucket Love Ya Jenny! =)
Denial ain't just a river in Egypt- Mark Twain =)
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thanks Jenny <3
One in the same, never to change, our love was beautiful <3
 
New Post 12/15/2007 9:29 AM
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Re: What Won't Be Seen 

amamamamamamamazing!
seriously!
so, when is more of this *insert string of 'am's here*mazing story going to posted?
you're not Brooke...but i am!  haha!  just kidding i know you made them up...

~!Brooke!~


 
New Post 12/15/2007 10:06 AM
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Modified By L I Z Z x o x o  on 12/15/2007 10:25:41 AM)

i am in love

and cannot wait for more...

thank you for not giving up and keep writing because i love to read your stories..i'm not kidding i always do!

<3 youuuuuuuu!!!!!!

 

<3 Lizz


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im seriously grateful for every single moment...
four concerts, one tv show, two guitar picks, you remembering me.
 
New Post 12/15/2007 10:23 AM
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Love it! Post more soon!


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New Post 12/15/2007 10:37 AM
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Haha thanks yall.

I'll try to have more up soon <3



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New Post 12/15/2007 10:43 AM
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Love it!!! PMS!!!

~Much Love <3333~

**HAYDEN**



My totally rockin' JBF friends! (Of course in random order): Jenn, Meg, Lauren, Jenny, Bre1, Emma, Jess, Sarah, Bre2, Jennilyn

Credit to Molly for first 2 siggys!!

♥ Nick ♥ Big Rob ♥ Jess ♥ Hayden ♥ 4 peas in a pod!
Operation: IDK my BFF Nick?
 
New Post 12/15/2007 10:49 AM
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 Mayo wrote

Love it! Post more soon!

off subject but i just wanted to say that i LOVE your siggy!!!


 
New Post 12/15/2007 3:09 PM
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Chapter 2

I woke up a few hours later when someone knocked at the door. I rubbed my head and blinked my eyes. Who the heck is knocking at my door? It’s freezing outside. Can’t they just stay home? It’s not Lilly cause she’s helping her mom, it can’t be…anyone.

I got up from the couch and stumbled over to the door. When I opened it, there stood Spencer. "Sorry…but I came to give you my money…"

I laughed. Already? "But the concert’s in two weeks."

I took his hand and lead him inside and up to my room. "Yeah I know but it was an excuse to come over here," he smiled brightly and ran down the hall to my room.

"Who said you needed an excuse?" I smirked. It’s fun to play with his mind.

"I dunno….but I was missing you…"

I laughed and sat down on my bed next to him. He took my hand and looked me in the eyes. "I love you…" he whispered. I love these moments. He’s so sweet…and he seriously knows what makes me melt inside. This, being one of them.

He leaned in slowly and kissed me gently on the lips. "Let’s go somewhere…" he whispered.

I looked up at him, "Where?"

He placed a few strands of my hair behind my ear. "Anywhere…come on," he got up, still holding my hand. "Let’s go."

Never will I want to be apart from him. He’s what makes me whole…and there HAS to be a way to show him. Maybe I already have, but I haven’t figured it out yet. It makes me laugh how he hates the Jonas Brothers, just because I have their posters on my walls. Maybe he thinks I like them more than him.

But I could never do that.

I fell back on my bed and laughed. "NOOO Spencer, I’m dead, I can’t go anywhere when I’m dead."

He sighed and walked over slowly, and then pulled me up into his arms. "Then I guess I’ll have to CARRY you, you’re not getting out of it."

I giggled as he jumped down the stairs, cradling me in his arms. The way he was laughing…I mean, he laughed around his friends, all the time. Trust me. But everything was different with me.

"Oh crap…uh…opening the door…" he was now literally cracking up. Somehow he got the door open and closed, and now he was putting me into his pickup truck. I gave him an awkward look. "Dead people can’t buckle themselves in, either."

He nodded and reached across me to buckle the seatbelt in. He closed the door and sprinted over to his side, got in, cranked up the engine, and off we were.

To where, I don’t know.

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My ripped jeans were lied out on my bed with the silver sequined strapless shirt I was going to wear. Lilly was blasting Take A Breath through my room. When the chorus came on, I had no choice. I had to get up and start dancing.

"WE’RE SEEING THEM TOINIGHT LILLY!" I screamed.

She laughed and jumped up on my bed. "YOU KNOW IT."

I calmed down only for a second to put on my clothes. My black converse were somewhere….where….I have no clue. I’m bad about stuff like that.

I’ll find them later. I ran my hands down my sides to make sure everything was right. Felt fine.

So I turned around and stood in front of the mirror. It looked…amazing. My hair was loose and flowing down past my shoulders. Brown hair…slightly cut in layers. My skin was naturally tan, so the sequined top didn’t make me look like a Popsicle. My eye makeup was precise, but not overwhelming. It was hard to make brown eyes look good under makeup. I always dreamt of having ice blue eyes, but I think brown is just fine.

"You look fine, Brooke," Lilly laughed. "How bout me?"

I took a good look at her. She always looked glamorous. Blonde hair down past her shoulders, tan skin, and those ice blue eyes I always dreamt of. She was wearing dark jeans and a white flowing tank top. She always wore heavy black eye makeup. It looked beautiful with those…ice blue eyes. "You look amazing, hun." I said as I gave her a quick hug.

"As do you ma dear."

I laughed and looked at the clock. 5:45. The concert started at 8. But we were going to get there early. I heard the door slam downstairs. "HEY HEY HEYYYYYYY," Spencer yelled through the house. Good thing my family didn’t really care.

Before we went downstairs, Lilly grabbed my arm. "Wearing that top, you know the light’s gonna reflect…and you know Joe’s gonna see you…"

I looked down at my feet. She was right.

"Listen…we’re over. Childhood…friends. That’s what we were. And I love Spencer more than anything so…yeah."

She smiled, "Well, if he smiles at you, smile back, okay?"

I nodded and opened my bedroom door, the back was covered completely in pictures of the boys. I took them off my walls, actually. They were on the back of my door now I guess. And beside my bed was a picture of me and Spencer. Our favorite…

"ARE YOU TWO DONE YET!?" John screamed. Lilly laughed and followed me out.

"YES…okay! We’re done!"

I watched Spencer’s eyes light up as I walked down the stairs. As soon as I got to the bottom, he pulled me into his arms. He always smelled amazing…and I could feel his heart beating hardly as I rested my head on his chest.

Lilly and John stood in silence staring at us. "You two ready?" John asked.

Spencer looked up at him then back down at me. "Yeah…" he whispered.

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Lilly and I were in the front seat blasting Just Friends. But sadly…we had to turn it down when we got to the gate so the stupid parking payer dude could take our money. Spencer laughed from the back, "Hey, I think that’s their bus…"

"Where?" I asked. I started looking around like a maniac.

"There…" he came up in between Lilly and took my hand. He pointed it in the direction of….an orange Gibson tour bus…

"OH MY GOD! THAT’S IT!"

Lilly jumped up in her seat. "BROOKE PARK OVER THERE NOW!"

Luckily I didn’t get a ticket because I was seriously speeding. I looked around for a spot…and there…it was. Just a few rows away from the bus. I looked over at the bus before we got out. Looked like a swarm of 8 year olds.

Figured.

Lilly and I were the first out. I couldn’t get the thought of me and Joe meeting again out of my head. Would he really remember me? What would happen? Does he…does he even remember my name…

We fought our way through the crowd of ‘kids’ because…well…they let us through. Come on, we were 16. Muahahahaha.

Before we knew it we were right at the door. And that’s when it opened.

Nick…Kevin…Joe.

Spencer was back behind us yelling our names. "BROOKE!" he yelled.

Just when my name rolled off his lips, Joe stopped dead in his tracks. He looked around frantically. Girls all around us were screaming their heads off. Nick and Kevin were signing autographs.

But I was the only one NOT jumping. And Joe caught that. "Brooke…" I heard him mumble.

I couldn’t see his expression or his eyes. His sunglasses were hiding it. But he took a step closer to me, and I kept looking straight into his sunglasses. I can’t really say eyes…

Spencer was eyeing me from behind. But he should trust me.

You know those moments in movies when you’re reunited? Yeah, the lovers reunited. This was one of those moments. Everything was in slow motion. The sound was dimmed to our heartbeats.

But I couldn’t take it. I turned away and went running to Spencer. Lilly was confused, and so was Joe. He shot a look at her, but she followed me.

And the concert hadn’t even started yet.



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New Post 12/15/2007 3:55 PM
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Yeah, JB will be playing into it in the next few chapters. Just the begining, peeps.



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