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New Post 12/16/2007 1:25 AM
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Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

Chapter one:

Darkness. Darkness was all she saw. Its blackness like a tomb of death. This dark evil, made her panic.
The girl opened her eyes; green was then covering the ground as far as she could see and a light baby blue covering the sky, with wisps of clouds but the strange thing was there no sun. When she looked around, she realized also there was no sound. It was dead silent.
"Wh-where am I?" She asked, then jumped. Her own voice startled her, what was even scarier was not knowing where she was, but who she was. Who am I? She thought, who was she? This was an unfamiliar place, and she tried to think back to any past memories. Blank, her mind felt empty. It was like some sick trick, and she closed her eyes. Hoping to wake-up from this awful dream. When she opened her eyes. She let out a sigh of annoyance.  Not knowing who she was very taxing.

The girl looked around, hoping to see something or someone that would tell her where who she was.
She looked down and noticed she was wearing a shirt it was blue and had a maroon bird on it, and in white letters the shirt said "Hollister.." "Holly-stur." She tried aloud, these words had no meaning to her.
A soft wind picked up, it seemed to be beckoning her to go forward. She then heard a sound, bells that were like Christmas bells softly chiming. They seemed as though they wanted her to go forward, to follow them. She then decided to follow the bells; she followed them for hours. She never heard another sound other than the bells.

The sound became louder, recapitulating in her ears. It was driving her fiendish! She kept on trekking, pursuing this sound. Then she glanced something, something that gave her hope. Smoke, smoke rising onto this clear baby blue sky. It looked only a few hundred yards away, above this gregarious hill.

The bells wanted her to go near the smoke, she knew that was where she was supposed to go. As she climbed over the hill to where the smoke's source was, she saw it. Chaos, chaos ran the streets. It was a run-down looking city, with everything looking as gray and dreary as the people who inhabited it. the people in the town were in worn clothes, they looked sickly and starving. Their faces were pale, their eyes were distant, and it looked as though they had rolled around on the filthy ground. Rats scurried everywhere, even on some of the people. Nobody looked at her, they acted as if they weren't even on this world. Her eyes widened with fear, where was this strange place? What could have happened to make a place this awful? She walked through the city, remains o buildings where everywhere. Was there some earthquake? Was there some-
"What's a girl like you, doing in a place like this?" A voice asked, interrupting her thoughts. She turned around there was a police officer. He was unlike everyone else in she had seen in this town. He was clean and plump. His voice sounded stern and his eyes were cold
\par . "I said, what are you doing here? Where are your papers? Come on, speak up lass!" He asked again, this time raising his voice. She was scared to speak, she wanted to run away but her feet were stuck.
\par
\par He then marched over and grabbed the girl's purse, digging through it and pulling out a piece of paper.
\par "Grace Ann Taylor, I welcome you to Romania, the most powerful city, you will find since the virus hit. Now if you follow me, I will take you out of these filthy streets and deeper into this powerful City!" He said, his eyes and voice had softened and now sparkled with pride as he talked of his homeland. Grace looked around in awe, wondering what was going to happen next.
 -Chapter one finished-

Hello there, I am a new writer and I will be writing {of course} a fan fiction of the Jonas Brothers. But it isn't like one posted on here, the Jonas Brothers ARE in it they will be major charectors needed in this fan fiction. They won't come in til a bit later, I will post the basic plot here:

Survivors of a deadly virus, how or why they got there? I don't know now but I will figure it out later. They have to re-start humanity, but greed and jealously will start to tear the people apart and the group will be divided fighting and killing each other in utter chaos she joins a group of revolutioners trying to kill the other town's leader. But when she falls for him, will it effect her mission?

DUN DUN DUN! I bet you have guessed who the town leader is? A Jonas! But which Jonas? and what about the other Jonas's?

You will have to read to find out!

Do you like this? Should I countinue?
Also, I will need some people in this just feel out your name, age, looks, and personality =D


ROCKONJBROCKON
OJD Victim I love Nick and Joe and Kevin <3
I got to see the Jonas Brothers ON VALENTINES. BEST DAY EVER! =)
MY PM IS IFICOULDMAKEONEWISH
I am a Christian and wouldn't have it any other way.
 
New Post 12/16/2007 1:26 AM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

Whats the Par thing?
Its format is different then in my word document.
Oh well!
xD Hope ya'll like it ^_^

I will post whenever I can =D


ROCKONJBROCKON
OJD Victim I love Nick and Joe and Kevin <3
I got to see the Jonas Brothers ON VALENTINES. BEST DAY EVER! =)
MY PM IS IFICOULDMAKEONEWISH
I am a Christian and wouldn't have it any other way.
 
New Post 12/16/2007 2:33 AM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

So far this seems like a really good story. I will continue to read it as you post more of it, but I've gotta warn you that it may take me time to comment inbetween periods, see my internet access is a little sporatic until I go back to school, so... Oh also be sure to make backups of your story posts as sometimes threads on this site disappear. Oh yeah and where did you get the idea for this story, because it seems kind of familar, but then again not.

 
New Post 12/16/2007 3:07 AM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

wow. i am kinda in love with it. i couldnt help but think "I am Legend".... but i havent seen the movie yet, so yea, i dont know if they are anything alike, i just know it has something to do with a deadly disease and Will Smith is the last person on earth but hes "not alone" according to the advertisments......

anyway, back to this fic.

SOUNDS REALLY GOOOD


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New Post 12/16/2007 8:58 AM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

I love it ... the descriptions are amazing!!! I would love to be in this story

Kaylee
16
5'7" slender and athletic built , Light Blonde Hair about 6" under shoulders and bangs swept over left eye, Hazel eyes that tend to change colors, straight teeth, Light freckles on bridge of nose and under eyes then dark freckles in random places, birthmark on right arm.
I tend to be shy at first but once you get to know me I won't shut up, I tend to be hyper alot...There is always about 50 things running through my head constantly so i tend to be a random person

much <3 Kaylee


"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, it is about learning how to dance in the rain."-Unknown Photobucket THANKS A LOT Ash-Bash!! =P (Ashlee) Photobucket
 
New Post 12/16/2007 3:13 PM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

Okay Kaylee, who is your favorite Jonas Brother?
Your in =D
I am working on the next chapter =)
If anyone has any ideas or questions feel free to comment!
I am a new writer also, if there are ANY helpful websites or things of that sort that would be greatly appreciated!!!

Oh and I don't have a spell check so if anyone knows a good website that has one that would also be fantastic!


ROCKONJBROCKON
OJD Victim I love Nick and Joe and Kevin <3
I got to see the Jonas Brothers ON VALENTINES. BEST DAY EVER! =)
MY PM IS IFICOULDMAKEONEWISH
I am a Christian and wouldn't have it any other way.
 
New Post 12/16/2007 5:51 PM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  

Sounds great. I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Katie


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New Post 12/16/2007 7:58 PM
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Re: Forgotten memories are never lost. [New FF]  
This sounds REALLY cool, I'd love to be in it:

Name: Alexis (Lexi)

Age::15, you can change it, I look older

Appearance: I have a LOT of freckles, I'm also about 5'8" and long black hair with side-swept bangs, I have fairly long legs and my hair is naturally curly.

Personality: I love to laugh and make people laugh, I am witty, sarcastic, funny, and a pretty nice person. I always act happy, even when I'm not and think that there's no greater feeling than making someone else happy. I love to talk to people and listen, and I love giving advice. Though I'm usually pretty loud and crazy, I can be intuitive and introverted, I love debating, and I overanalyze stuff sometimes. I can't help it, that's just who I am. I'm also REALLY klutzy and a hopeless romantic

My favorite Jonas is torn between Joe and Nick...

Thanks SO much Ari!!! (Thank you Starbound27)
 
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