omg no i loved how she told him in french she loved him and he couldn't understand it!! and i think that she should like tell him something like that everyday in french and then like maybe he would finally get what it means but not tell her? lol idk just thinking of stuff and no it wasn't cheesy! pms!!!

Meg wrote  Mrs.NickJonas394 wrote   omg no i loved how she told him in french she loved him and he couldn't understand it!! and i think that she should like tell him something like that everyday in french and then like maybe he would finally get what it means but not tell her? lol idk just thinking of stuff and no it wasn't cheesy! pms!!!   No I really like that idea. Like have him start to catch on to french and him starting to get what she's saying but she doesn't know that he gets it. Hmmm... it could work...

ya exactly what i meant. i can come up with some good ideas sometimes i just can't write stories

*new reader*

this is so good!

pms!

New Reader!! I love this story and how she uses the french speaking to her advantage...It's not corny..it's pretty fricken awesome because he has no idea what she is saying and that Is going to kill him to know what she is saying to him.

I give you props to the totally genious main charaters name I LOVE It...hahaha  ....I was very surpised when i started reading and i was like woah my name ...& spelt the same...I don't get that too often.   I was just happy that my mom finally stopped reading over my sholder, b/c i was commenting a blog and clicked off of it when she walked by...so she got suspicious and wouldn't leave me alone until she got to read it which I never let her do, b/c the last chapter a was repling to was still up there and I don't know how she would have reacted to reading it. So me and my spunk (my parents like to call "constant back-talk") did the whole the 8th amendment gives me the right to privacy so back-off speech .

Sorry about the rambling, but i'm soo bored  ......any ways I'm so happy that I found someone elses internet connection I could "borrow" b/c my parents took away my wireless so I have to use the cord downstairs and am kicked off at 11:30...oh and the best part the internet cord is in the middle of the living room so everyone can read what im doing....it's so annoying .......so i'm super syked that i'm in my room @ 12:50 on the internet... Highlight of my day!!!!

Lots of Love ~~~ K-Lee

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I'm posting 2 chapters today. They're short though. Comments please!!

Chapter 9

Friday, September 9, Basic Self-Defense, 8:16 A.M.:

“Morning class. Sorry I’m late.” Mr. Cullens said as he walked into the classroom. “He’s only 1 minute late. Big deal.” Nick whispered to Kaylee as he put away his Sidekick. “I know. It’s not like it’s a big deal if you’re late.” Kaylee whispered back. “Now I know that some of you may think that because I’m a minute late that it’s not a big deal. That it doesn’t matter. But 1 minute could be the difference between life and death, a bomb going off, someone being killed.” Mr. Cullens said. No-one said anything. You could hear a pen drop. Everyone just stared at him. “Write down what I’m about to tell you. It’s important.” He said. Everyone opened their notebooks and got out their pens. “You are responsible for your own actions. What you do always comes back to you, and in some cases haunts you for the rest of your life. All actions will have consequences. Not all are good. Never, ever be late. Always be on time, if not early. You’ll regret it if, for example, your partner dies because you were late.” He continued. Kaylee and Nick looked at eachother. On the corner of her paper, Kaylee wrote. “No pressure, right?” “Not at all.” Nick wrote back. “Sarcastic much?” Kaylee wrote. “If we’re partners, I’ll never let anything happen to you.” Nick wrote. Kaylee just stared at what he wrote. Nick nudged her. “Ditto.” She wrote.

Chapter 10

Same Day, Nick’s House, After School, 4:15 p.m.:

Nick and Kaylee were doing their homework in silence. They never, ever did this. They’d barely had any conversation since Basic-Self-Defense this morning. Kaylee finally broke the silence. “Nick. I need to ask you something.” “Okay. What?” Nick said. “Did you really mean what you said about never letting anything happen to me if we were partners?” She asked. Nick took in a deep breathe. He looked her in the eyes. “Yeah. I did. I’d never let anything happen to you anyway. I promise you that I’ll never let anything happen to you. And if I fail, kill me, or do something horrible to me. And if you can’t, I’ll kill myself or do something horrible to myself. I’d die for you. You’re like my sister.” Nick said. Kaylee couldn’t believe what he just said. He’d die for her? But she’s only like a sister to him? If only he knew how she truly felt about him. “I’d die for you too. And I promise you the same.” Kaylee said. Neither of them were lying. They would die for eachother. And neither of them knew it, but they were in love with eachother. They both loved eachother so much. But, like I said before, neither of them would admit it, in English that is. “My turn to ask a question.” Nick said. “Um. Okay. Go ahead.” Kaylee said. “I’m not trying to weird out our friendship, but, um.” Nick stopped. “What?” Kaylee asked. “Do you –“

Kept ya hangin' huh? Wondering what he says? What will happen to their friendship? Will Nick find out what Kaylee is saying in French to him? Can't wait for the next chapter? COMMENTS!! Yall have been totally awesome with the comments and stuff. Keep it going!