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New Post 12/26/2007 7:36 PM
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Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

Hi, i'm Brittany. This is my very first fanfic! I hope you enjoy this fanfic and i will update if i have readers. Please comment and tell me what you think.

Intro:

 I'm running through the hospital, crying. I don't know where i'm going, i don't have anybody. I can't take this pain in my side anymore. So i stop in the middle of the hallway and sit down. I put my knees up into my chest and cry into my knees. I need to talk to someone, i need somebody to comfort me. I know i'll call Nick, Joe, and Kevin, they'll know what to do. I take out my cell phone and dial Nick's number.

"Hello?"

"N-Nick" i said crying into the phone

"What's wrong, are you ok Brittany?"

"I-I need you to come to the hospital"

"oh my gosh, are you alright?"

"i'm ok, i guess"

"What happened?"

Should i continue this ff?


-Brittany <3-
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New Post 12/26/2007 7:44 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

write more soon


 
New Post 12/26/2007 7:50 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

Thanks for commenting :) I'll post more in a little while

-Brittany


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New Post 12/26/2007 8:03 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 
Modified By Brittany <3s JB  on 12/26/2007 7:03:32 PM)

Chapter 1

"What happened?"

"My-my parents.....car accident..." I tried to say but i couldn't say anything else.

"We'll be right there, everything will be ok, i'll see you soon"

"Bye" i said and hung up the phone. I could always count on Nick, Joe, and Kevin. They were my best friends, we were always there for eachother.

I got up and i walked to my father's hospital room and stood outside. I looked into the room to see what was happening......

Beeeeeeeeeeep

"CLEAR" 

please comment!!

-Brittany <3


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New Post 12/26/2007 8:07 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

write more soon. read my stories when you have the chance I'll send u the links if u want


 
New Post 12/26/2007 8:11 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

yeah, i'd love to read your stories!

-Brittany


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New Post 12/26/2007 8:12 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

Hey Post more soon I love it!!!!


 
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 
Modified By DelaneyhasONJD  on 12/26/2007 7:20:38 PM)

 JBfan813 wrote

yeah, i'd love to read your stories!

-Brittany

Here are the links to two of my stories

 

http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/218228/scope/posts/Default.aspx ( here’s my story Just One Dance)http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/227811/scope/posts/Default.aspx ( Here’s my other story Cappuccino with an Extra Shot Of Absolut )

I have many more but I haven’t updated them in a while so these to are the main two I’m working on

 


 
New Post 12/26/2007 8:19 PM
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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 

aww, thank you Sarah!! i'll work on the next chapter now. I'm sorry my chapters are kinda short, i'll make the next one longer.

-Brittany


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Re: Someone Help Me [my first ff] 
Modified By Brittany <3s JB  on 12/26/2007 7:46:29 PM)

Thanks for commenting! and thank you Delaney(i hope thats your name) for the links to your ff's i will definately read them.

Chapter 2

Beeeeeeeep

"CLEAR"

I stood there and watched as i was haunted by those two sounds, and watched as my father passed on. I turned around and walked slowly down the hall crying, looking at the ground, not knowing where i was going. Before i knew it i reached a flight of stairs but since i didn't look up i fell down the stairs, hard. When i reached the bottom i got up and kept walking but with my hand clenching the side of my stomach. as i was walking i ran into somebody, and i fell as he turned around. 

"I'm so sorry" I said struggling to get up. "Joe?"

"Brittany!!!" He came over to me and pulled me up and hugged me. "Are you ok, you're bleeding!" I hadn't really noticed, all as i was thinking about was my father. I nodded at him as he took me to the E.R. to get cleaned up. I got a few stitches and i got up and started walking with Joe.

"Where's Nick and Kevin?" I asked Joe

"Right there" he said pointing to them by a vending machine.

"Oh"

"Brittany!!" Kevin ran up to me and hugged  me tightly.

"Hi Kevin!! please don't hug me so hard" I said trying to smile but cringing instead.

"Sorry" he said "What happened?"

"Nick!" I said as he came up to me and hugged me too but this time he hugged me lightly. "My-my father..." i tried to answer Kevin's question but ended up crying instead.

"I'm so sorry" they all said and Kevin tried to comfort me by hugging me. I put my head on his sholders as i continued to cry.

 sorry if that wasn't long enough. I'm sorry but i have to go, i'm at my grandparents house and i'm leaving soon. I'll either be back really late tonight or tomarrow morning. Thank you for the comments

-Brittany <3

 

 


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