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 1/3/2008 12:18 PM
 

I love it! When do we find out who gets the parts?

PMS!

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lindsey


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 1/3/2008 12:19 PM
 

aww! so sad but the story is so good

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 1/3/2008 12:22 PM
 

The Lovely Lindsey Jonas wrote

I love it! When do we find out who gets the parts?

PMS!

xoxo

lindsey

oh that's another story... it's called "Justify" and I'll tell you as soon as more people audition.


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 1/3/2008 12:42 PM
 

I LOVE THIS STORY!! MORE PLEASE!!
Oh and can you read and comment on mine.. it's called Just a Dream...

Thanks!

Abbie

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 1/4/2008 11:17 AM
 

Okay, new chapter, and probably the only one today, so enjoy!!

Chapter 3

I needed Nick. I started sobbing uncontrolably. I started screaming. The nurses let everyone back in again. I told Joe to get Nick. He nodded and left the room. After about two minutes of trying to calm me down, so did everyone else. I closed my eyes for a brief ten minutes.

Then Nick came. I smiled weakly at me. It looked like he was trying to smile, but it was as though he couldn't. He was in pain. Not physically, but it hurt him that I was hurt. Too much. I tried to tell him-tell him anything. But I couldn't. And there was a flash of light. Then a screech. And once again everything went black.

Nick was shaking me. There was fear in his eyes. "I'm all right, Nick, I'm all right," I tried reassuring him, but he still looked slightly shaken up himself. A doctor came in and told Nick something. Useless words. Useless words I couldn't understand. Nick nodded and turned to me. "You can leave the hospital tomorrow afternoon. I nodded, but was anything but relieved as Nick walked towards the door. "Don't leave," I whispered, "don't leave." Nick asked his parent's permission and stayed in the chair by the hospital bed. All this was too much for me and for him. For us. I liked the sound of that, us.

*The next afternoon*

Nick took my hand and I slowly followed him out to my parents' car. He was going to spend the day with me. Until they made him leave. We got into the car and drove off. Nick looked at me, simply staring. I smiled, or tried to smiled, then looked back out the window.

When we got to my house, we went immediately to my room, leaving the door open, for we know y parents would not be happy if it was closed. But he was 15, and I was 14. We knew better. "Libby," Nick said, looking strangely at me. "I was worried. Worried I would lose you. Forever. I can't lose you. I never want anything to happen to you again. Ever," He said, and I thought I saw a tear roll down his cheek. "Nick," I said, then leaned in for a hug. But instead, he kissed me. I pulled away after a half a minute, because, after all, my parents were here, and the door was open. "I have to go," he said. "But why-?" I started, but I knew why. Nick nodded and smiled at me. I smiled back and he was gone. Just like that. Gone with the wind.

Okay, just so you know i usually don't write with sentence fragments^^^ but in this story i feel it has a special effect. so, I hope that was long enough for you guys so chances are, i won't be posting today again. I love comments, so comment away!

~Libby~


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 1/4/2008 11:18 AM
 

Okay, new chapter, and probably the only one today, so enjoy!!

Chapter 3

I needed Nick. I started sobbing uncontrolably. I started screaming. The nurses let everyone back in again. I told Joe to get Nick. He nodded and left the room. After about two minutes of trying to calm me down, so did everyone else. I closed my eyes for a brief ten minutes.

Then Nick came. I smiled weakly at me. It looked like he was trying to smile, but it was as though he couldn't. He was in pain. Not physically, but it hurt him that I was hurt. Too much. I tried to tell him-tell him anything. But I couldn't. And there was a flash of light. Then a screech. And once again everything went black.

Nick was shaking me. There was fear in his eyes. "I'm all right, Nick, I'm all right," I tried reassuring him, but he still looked slightly shaken up himself. A doctor came in and told Nick something. Useless words. Useless words I couldn't understand. Nick nodded and turned to me. "You can leave the hospital tomorrow afternoon. I nodded, but was anything but relieved as Nick walked towards the door. "Don't leave," I whispered, "don't leave." Nick asked his parent's permission and stayed in the chair by the hospital bed. All this was too much for me and for him. For us. I liked the sound of that, us.

*The next afternoon*

Nick took my hand and I slowly followed him out to my parents' car. He was going to spend the day with me. Until they made him leave. We got into the car and drove off. Nick looked at me, simply staring. I smiled, or tried to smiled, then looked back out the window.

When we got to my house, we went immediately to my room, leaving the door open, for we know y parents would not be happy if it was closed. But he was 15, and I was 14. We knew better. "Libby," Nick said, looking strangely at me. "I was worried. Worried I would lose you. Forever. I can't lose you. I never want anything to happen to you again. Ever," He said, and I thought I saw a tear roll down his cheek. "Nick," I said, then leaned in for a hug. But instead, he kissed me. I pulled away after a half a minute, because, after all, my parents were here, and the door was open. "I have to go," he said. "But why-?" I started, but I knew why. Nick nodded and smiled at me. I smiled back and he was gone. Just like that. Gone with the wind.

Okay, just so you know i usually don't write with sentence fragments^^^ but in this story i feel it has a special effect. so, I hope that was long enough for you guys so chances are, i won't be posting today again. I love comments, so comment away!

~Libby~


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 1/4/2008 11:53 AM
 

PMS!

Love it

 

Peace, Love, And Emo

~Haley!~


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 1/4/2008 12:00 PM
 

love it so far

PMS!

xoxo

lindsey


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 1/4/2008 12:30 PM
 

*new reader*

this is a really good story pms!


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 1/4/2008 12:54 PM
 
 Modified By libsterr. <3  on 1/4/2008 7:49:44 PM

why did you guys have to comment so much?? aww you make me wanna post more! so here's another chapter, sorry if it's short.

Chapter 4

I closed my eyes that night, wanting to only get some sleep. I didn't plan on dreaming. I didn't want to dream. I wanted to sleep. I dreamt of Nick. Of Nick in a hospital bed, dying. I thought he was a vegetable. But i was wrong. He was in an accident. Just like I had been. His family hadn't wanted him connected to any machines, they didn't want him to be a vegetable. I was crying in my sleep. Nick was gone. I woke up, sobbing. It was only a dream. Of course it was.

I got a call that morning. Nick. Not from Nick, about Nick. He needed me. He needed my help. He was in the hospital. He had been hit by a car. But not in a car crash, he had been walking. I pinched myself, thinking it was a dream. But it wasn't. I tried to breathe. I passed out.

I woke up, still alone. My mom wasn't home, so she hadn't ofund me. Luckily. I hurried over to the hospital. I asked where Nick was, and when I found him I was scared. He looked so lifeless, so alone. I walked over to him and took his hand. I started singing to him. "Your upset face you wear it well, you camoflauge the way you feel when everything's the matter. We've all been down that road before, searching for that something more..." I sang part of "Take a Breath" until he opened his eyes. "Hello, beautiful," he said, smiling. A tear dropped from my cheek and dropped into his hand. "Take a breath," he added, clutching the water in his hand. He shook his hand. "Honey, we need you to leave," a nurse told me. Nick shook his head, "no." I nodded reassuringly. "It's okay, Nick, I'll see you later." He nodded and I walked out of the room.

Okay, that's all, i apologize if this is too hospitaly for you, but there won't be so many hospital scenes as we advance in the story... keep them comments coming!!

~Libby~


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