Thanks to everyone who auditioned.Now here is ....
Chapter 1
Hello beautiful . How's it going? I hear it's wonderful in California,I've been missing you, it's true....i hitt my alarm and got up to take a shower...
I should probably intradoce (sp?) myself. Hi my name is Rachel Long.But my friends call me Rach.i have Brown hair and hazel eyes.I have a little sister and her name in Lizzy Long.My dad walked out on my family when i was nine and my sister wasn't even one. But we still have my mom.She is a day care lady...but she does it at our house.That's why we love kids so much.And i work at a Starbucks...it's sometime fun but not all the time...
When i steeped out of the shower i herd my phone ring. I looked at the caller id and it was my best friends Julia and Rachel.Julia is 16 and has curly brown hair and hazel eyes.My other best friend her name is Rachel too.She has brown straight hair and brown eyes.
"Hey Julia,Hey Rachel." " Hey Rach,ok were are you?We are at American Ealge and they are having the biggest sale of the year and we found the skinny jeans you have been looking for!"
"Ok , i will be there ASAP,see you there.Bye."i hung up the phone and got dressed and ran down stairs seeing my mom and Lizzy at the kitchen table.
"Mom ,they are having the biggest sale at the mall can i please go?" At that momment Lizzy jumped and said "Take me,PLEASE RACH?" "Mom do i have to take Lizzy? It's only me and my friends going." "OK OK...girls Rachel you may go but you have to take your little sister to.But mom... Rachel if you go you are taking your little sister ...are we under stood." "Fine,I said."
"Come on Lizzy lets get going, bye mom see you later."As i got into the car something in side told me not to go...but i went any way.
When we walked inside the mall we went strait to American Eagle.When we walked in the store someone walked right into me and made me fall to the ground.
"I'm so sorry i herd the man say. Are you ok?" "Yeah, i'm fine, i said." Then i looked up i and saw his big brown eyes.Then i forgot what i was going to say and i stoped in the middle of my sentince. "Ummm are u ok? i said." I herd him laugh and say, "Yeah i'm fine but i'm not the one on the floor."He reach out his hand and pulled me up.Then we both started laughing. Then he put out his hand and said, "Hi i'm".....,then i herd my sister scearm and she started babbling about ...i don't even know what she is babbling about anyway.
"Lizzy calm down,calm down and be quite.You are making everyone stare",...i walked up to her and pulled her into the bath room and trying to keep her quite. When i got her to calm down we walk back to American Eagle and the guy with brown hair and brown eyes was gone. I didn't even get his name. I was so upset.Then i terned around and looked at my little sister. "You could have keeped your mouth closed for one more second...i don't even know his name!" She looked at me and started talking about my alarm clock and the song on it..then she keeped going on and on. I walked away from her and went over to my friends.....Rachel's eyes got big and she looked at me..."Well did you even get his name?" "Well no not really ,I said." "O my Gosh,Rach...how could you not get his name i mean did u see how fine he was"... Then i terned around and looked at Julia she was holding out the jeans and she looked at me and said "Rachel is right he was fine." I giggled then I terned around and grabbed my pants,pad for them,grabbed my sister and walked out.... but i didn't even know what was about to happen....
BAM...there it is...any comments and please tell me if u like it...♥Rachel
