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New Post 1/5/2008 7:28 PM
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life goes on. [oneshot] 
Modified By kristin.  on 1/5/2008 7:33:53 PM)

 

 

so, im trying out this whole oneshot thing. i doubt this is any good. i love feedback. so please, post something. i would love it if you did.

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Life goes on.

Joe's POV

I got the call. The person I had given my heart to in gone. Out of my life forever. She is in a better place now. I could kill him. He killed her, and I want him gone! I don’t care how, just gone. I have so much hate for one person, that it cannot be healthy. I will never get to see her dance again, or even hear her laugh. That is one of the things I am going to miss the most. Her laugh. It was like a child’s.

He had the balls to show up at her funeral. Why the hell would he show up. He crashed her car, and killed her! I remember when we were all friends. Never again. He is dead to me. He’s the one that should be dead not her.

–flashback.-

"You’ll like him. He’s real nice." Emily said.

"But he’s your ex." I said.

"Yeah. But we are friends."

"I don’t like how you are friends with him."

"Why not?"

"He hurt you once. I don’t ever want him to hurt you again."

"That’s why I have you. You are my protector." she said in my ear, and then kissing my check.

"Of course. I’m always here."

I heard a car door slam. It had to be him. I’m not looking forward to this.

"I love you. Now don’t be mean."

 

"Never." I said, and she smiled.

He walked in. It was more a strut. How did she date him? And what does she see in me?

"Dom. This is Joe."

"Hi." I said trying to be casual.

"Hey. How’s it going."

"Good. And you?"

"Good, thanks."

The night ended with Dom sleeping on the couch, and Emily and I in her room.

"Thank you for making this a good night." she said.

"No problem hun."

I kissed her goodnight. I was so in love.

-end flashback-

Dom was all "sad" about Emily. He didn’t care. I know he doesn’t.

"Are you okay?" Kevin said as the ceremony started.

"No. Not even a little." I said.

I was a wreck, actually. I couldn’t even believe this. Ridiculous.

She was being put into the ground. I tried so hard to hold back the tears that wanted to come out. The leaves rustled with the wind. She loved this time of the year. All I have left of her is every memory she gave me. Oh, how grateful I am of those.

Everyone left the burial grounds. I wanted to stay, and say the last goodbye. I dug a little whole, and put the ring I gave her a year ago, and she gave back to me as a joke. I put the dirt back over the whole, and let the tears fall. I was such a wreck. I stood back up, and couldn’t move. I wanted to wake up from the worst dream I have ever had. Wake up call. This wasn’t a dream. It was reality, and I had to live with this for the rest of my life. Kevin said it will get easier. I just can’t see how right now.

"I love you Emily." I let the last tear fall. "Good bye."

 


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:31 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

i love it so far but is this is in a guys p.o.v right?


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:32 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

yeah its in Joes. oops.

 


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:35 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

awwww thats sooo sad =[

post moreee i`m startin` to get hooked yo! lol


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:37 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

haha. its only a oneshot.

so thats it.

no more of the story.

I just wanted to see what people thought of it.

 


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:38 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

Well that sux!!!


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:40 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

awwww really?! =[[

next timee imma look up the definition of 'one shot'

hohoho. wow i feel stupid LOL

that was hooky!!! and saddd =[[ joe was the one crying right? =[[


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New Post 1/5/2008 7:50 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

Yeah. He was the one who was crying.


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New Post 1/5/2008 8:36 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

I'm going to bump this, just to see if anyone else would read it.

lol.

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New Post 1/5/2008 9:13 PM
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Re: life goes on. [oneshot] 

Wow. That was pretty intense emotion in there. Good job! I would have liked to see a little more detail on how it happened, what Dom's background with the girl was, etc. It's still pretty short for a one shot so you could fit some more info in there.

All in all, good job, very interesting to read! Thanks!

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