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New Post 1/8/2008 4:40 PM
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Sturm und Drang [Chapter 29 IS UP NOW!] 
Modified By Gabby  on 3/20/2008 9:14:32 PM)

Sturm und Drang

Prologue

 

Usually, I loved this time of year. Everyone was coming back home and I get to see some of my friends. Almost all of them go travelling with his parents and family.

 

Me? I was the only one home with no one else than my mom. I mean I love her but now she ruined everything.

 

First let me tell you something about me, my name is Gabriella but everyone calls me Ella and I’m 16 years old, and right now I’m not the happiest person in this world, not even closer.

 

How was I supposed to enjoy starting up school, when I had moved away from my friends, my old house, basically my old everything? I couldn't, and it was all because of my mother and her stupid boyfriend.


They got married, and for some reason my mother's calling it “love” but I know there's no such thing. If there were such a thing, don't you think Dad would have hung around? I think so, too.


So, my mother has lost all reason and logic, and is moving us to live with her new husband in California. I really do not like her very much right now, for obvious reasons. However, I hate Charles with a fiery passion from Hell. Because of him I’m moving from my lovely Florida, and I have to leave all of my friends behind me. It’s that fear?


Or, at least, that's my life for you. Thank God, it was about to change.

 

Well this is my first FF so hope you like it... should i continue??? or should i leave it there?? Please coment and say if you like it or not!!


 
New Post 1/8/2008 4:45 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

continueee! if you need any parts im here :) haha, but please continue. that was good.


Without Joe, It's just 'Nas Brothers' ;)


"I Love You" isn't something to say too quickly. Its not just a word, though a lot of guys will just throw it out there. Being in love is when things are going so well that happiness is beyond belief. You're 200 percent happy and excited. -Joe Jonas

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New Post 1/8/2008 4:46 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

This looks good, 
so i  think you should continue =]

PMS!

Joanne x


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New Post 1/8/2008 5:05 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

Thank you guys!!

I will continue really soon!...

Right now i dont need any characters, but i will try to make up someone... let me see...

--->Gabby<---


 
New Post 1/8/2008 5:41 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

              PMS!!! I Like It!

               ~Cheyenne~


Move Over Miley Cyrus Cause Jonas Brothers Are The New Hot Thing In Hollywood Now!!!!
 
New Post 1/8/2008 5:45 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

So here's the first chapter... hope you like it!!

Chapter 1



“Ella, would you please run a brush through that hair? You look like you're trying to balance a bird's on your head,” my mother said, turning to me in the taxi. I rolled my eyes and just ignored her. She sighed and began to examine her red fingernails as I stared out the window.

 

We were on our way to dear Charles' house, the house that my mother would soon begin to call home. I wouldn't, though. Not until Charles died, which I was praying would be soon.


Now, please don't get me wrong. I'm usually a very loving, kind person, but you just don't know Charles. He could really drive someone to pull their hair out. He wasn't mean or anything... he was just weird. But what can I say? The fact that he was my mother's partner in crime in making my life a living hell did not help him, not at all.

 

Instead of brushing my hair, I pulled my black hair up into a ponytail and slipped it under a red baseball cap. It was frayed at the edges, and apparently, according to my mother, “the color of a monster-truck does not compliment my features”, but I loved it. She hated it, which only made me love it more.


“Oh, my dear Ella, don't wear that stupid horrible thing. Charles is inviting neighbors over for dinner to meet us tonight. You don't want them to think you come from a Texas trailer, do you?” my mom asked. Sometimes she could really get on my nerves.


“Mom, let me get this through you head, okay?” I asked, twisting in the seat. “I don’t care if your stupid boyfriend or his neighbors think I came from Texas, even more I don’t want to know them so chill I won’t be there. An between remember when I was a kid we used to live in a “Texas trailer” remember?”


“Ugh, don't remind me. That was the worst year of my life.” I scoffed and turned to the window again. She was being such a hypocrite. And all because of Charles, shut I hate him?


“ Oh, driver! Driver! This is it!” mom called to the front. I peered out the window and saw the taxi pulling into a circular driveway that led to a rather large house. I violently threw open the car door and stepped out onto the lawn, being sure to stomp on the grass. Surely that would annoy Charles enough to make me happy for a few minutes.

 
“Gabriella! get off the grass!” my mom called. I stomped on with a pretty satisfied look on my face, but I just pretended I hadn't heard her.

 

Charles threw open the door with a large, fake smile on his face. I couldn't help but crack up.


“Uh, Charlie, I think you better ask for a refund on the Botox injection,” I laughed. He didn't understand. The fake-baking had obviously damaged his brain cells (assuming, of course, that he had any brain cells in the first place).

“Excuse me?” he asked with a weird face. Something that just make me laughs even harder.


“Nothing,” I said

 

He straightened his tie and hurried out to my mom with his arms open wide.

Sharon! How was the flight?” he called. After he kissed her, I turned away and stepped inside the house. As I stepped through the doorway, I looked at the house next to Charles'. It was a tad bit larger, and looked a lot cozier than Charles'.

I have to say, I was impressed by the house, but I didn't say that. When Charles asked me what I thought of it, I just shrugged, running my finger along the mantle, looking desperately for a speck of dirt that I could tease him for.

“Where's my room?” I asked.

 “Ella” my mom warned, hinting at how rude I was behaving. I ignored her and looked at Charles.


“Upstairs. The first door on your right. I think you'll find it to your liking.” He said smiling.

I nodded and looked at him strangely. I think you'll find it to your liking? Who the hell says that?


But he was wrong. The room was not to my liking. It was all pink and red with a purple, I know horrible combination. I quickly took out my black covers with my name on purple on it, take al the ballet posters and covered every inch of my red walls with posters of my favorite bands aka Good Charlotte, Simple Plan Nickelback, Switchfoot and the Jonas Brothers.

 

The only thing I didn’t change about that room was the purple carpet that matched my covers so that save it.

 
And finally the desks and dressers and shelves. Let's just say that graffiti goes pretty well with antique furniture.


I couldn't wait until Charles took a look at my masterpiece

--->Gabby<---


 
New Post 1/8/2008 5:53 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 
I LOVE IT! PMS!
[[June 4th,2008]] <3


Thanks to MiCK J for the first siggy.
 
New Post 1/8/2008 7:05 PM
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Re: A thousand ways to hurt [First FF] 

oooh rebellll love it


Without Joe, It's just 'Nas Brothers' ;)


"I Love You" isn't something to say too quickly. Its not just a word, though a lot of guys will just throw it out there. Being in love is when things are going so well that happiness is beyond belief. You're 200 percent happy and excited. -Joe Jonas

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New Post 1/9/2008 3:34 PM
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Re: A Thousand Ways to Hurt [My First FF] 

Ohhh! I LOVE it!!!!!! plzz continue im anxious and excited! thanks for telling me!!!!!!!! PMS!!!! :D


#2 Monster - Cookie Club All Siggies thanks to Mollerina. Shes a creative genious. :D. "Say That ten times fast, oh wait you can't cause your not as good as me." - Joe Jonas. LOL.
 
New Post 1/10/2008 3:27 PM
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Re: A Thousand Ways to Hurt [My First FF] 

Chapter 2

 

I was listening to my Ipod when I ear the doorbell rang in the distance. -And there are the neighbors. No doubt- I think. My mother started to knock at my door

 

“I'm not going down mom, say hi for me!” I said smiling.

 

“Gabriella you're coming down right now!” almost yelled my mom.

 

My mother had mentioned to me on the way here that our new neighbors had children's around my age. I didn't really care if they were friends with Charles I'm pretty sure I would not like them.


“However I’m going… just because I’m bored” I said opening the door smiling.

 

My mom just open her mouth. “You like it? I’m sure Charles will”

 

“We'll talk about this later” She said simply looking directly at me.

 

“Umm, sure I guess” I said and she turned and go downstairs. I just put my baseball cap again and walked downstairs with mi Ipod in my pocket, just in case. My mother was talking with at the neighbor lady, who seemed like a very nice woman, and she was awfully pretty, as well. Charles was talking with a man who I assumed to be the husband of the nice lady.

 

“Oh look this is my rebel daughter, Gabriella, She's mad about the move” I raised my hand and smiled.

 

“Nice to meet you!” the woman exclaimed as she shook my hand. “These are my boys” she said.

 

-I think I know them from somewhere… Wait a minute. OMG The Jonas Brothers!- I just stood there looking at them.

 

“I like your name, I’m Kevin” Kevin said as he shook mi hand.

 

“And I’m Nick” the curled hair boy said and he shook my hand too.

 

“Hey! I'm Joe!” Joe said and instead of shook my hand he give me a hug. I hugged him back and bit my lip, this hug feel very…. Whoa!.

 

“It's nice to meet you all” I said letting go of Joe.

 

“Well, let's eat” Charles said then he put his arm around me. I moved away from him and accidentally hit Joe in his arm “Sorry” I said “It's fine” he said smiling. Wow he looks even better in person

 

“Yes!, let's” my Ms. Jonas said, she then placed her hand on my shoulder, I didn't move away because it was comforting.

 

I sat between Nick and Joe who keep staring at me “Ella, I don't think it is proper manners to wear a baseball cap at the table” Charles said.

 

“Well then, out of courtesy to you, I'll just have to keep wearing it” I said. Joe, Kevin and Nick started laughing I couldn’t help but laugh too.

 

“Ella” my mother said. I looked up “Cap off” I rolled my eyes and pulled the cap out of my head, letting my black hair fall onto my shoulders.

 

“I like your hair” Nick said.

 

“Thank you?” I said. He smiled and Joe leaned over to me and whispered “He gets weird around strangers” I laughed.

 

“I do not!” Nick said.

 

“Yes you do” Joe said, Nick glared at him and Kevin smirked. Siblings love. How I envied it.

 

We started to eat and I stopped when I saw Joe staring directly at me.

 

“What?” I asked. He didn't say anything but looked at Kevin and make some funny faces. He laughed and he drop his water on the table. That really made me laugh.

 

So that was the second chapter... Hope you like it!!... Some comments and i post the next chapter!


 
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