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New Post 1/20/2008 12:51 AM
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This Time Around [a Joe fic]. HEY EPILOGUE! 
Modified By erica_starr  on 5/21/2008 2:00:07 AM)

 

 

 

Hey guys! I've been writing fan fiction for years now, but this is the first Jonas piece I'm ever posting anywhere, so be nice! I hope you like it.

 

THIS TIME AROUND

 
 
 “Wow, you look incredible,” Eva said as she tied the back of her sister’s wedding dress.
 
            Erica stepped back from her dresser and surveyed herself in the mirror. Everything was perfect. There were thousands of pins and an entire can’s worth of hairspray in her hair, but it looked perfect. Her dress fit her like a glove and it looked perfect. She turned to see all of her best friends dressed in red gowns. They looked perfect. Everything was perfect.
 
“He is going to want to rip this dress off of you when he sees you,” Eva said with a smirk. 
 
“Well he’s going to have to wait. That’s for tonight,” Erica said as she fastened her mother’s necklace around her own neck. "Perfect."
 
            The bridesmaids left Eva and Erica alone so that they could have a personal “maid-of-honor-to-bride” moment.
 
“I can’t believe you’re getting married. Who would’ve thought this day would ever come?” Eva asked, admiring how beautiful her sister looked.
 
“Hey—what are you trying to say—that I’m not wife material?” Erica chuckled to herself.
 
“No, it’s not that! It’s just—I wasn’t sure you’d ever want to be in a serious relationship after—,” Eva was cut off.
 
“Please, don’t bring him up. Don’t ruin this day for me. I had my doubts too, but that man out there—he’s everything I could ever ask for. I’m happy,” Erica said, almost sounding as though she was trying to convince herself that that was the truth.
 
            There was a tap on the door.
 
“It’s time,” Eva said. “Ready?
 
Erica nodded and Eva lifted up the train of her sister’s wedding gown. Both girls took a deep breath before entering the hallway leading to the entrance of the church. Eva hummed “Hear Comes the Bride” as it played on the organ and the wedding party began their march down the aisle.
 
“You’re sweating. Gross,” Eva said.     
 
“I’m nervous. I’m kind of getting married, here!” Erica grunted in reply.
 

“There’s dad,” Eva said, pointing.

            Erica looked to her left and saw her father wiping his eyes. She pretended she didn’t notice because she knew he would never want her to see him cry.
 
“My baby girl, getting married. I can't believe it. You look more beautiful than ever,” he said, before kissing her cheek. “Gosh, I remember bringing you home from the hospital—cutest little thing you were—now look at you.”
 
“Dad, STOP! My makeup’s gonna run,” Erica said, dabbing at her eyes with a tissue.
 
“I’m so proud of you,” he said. “Oh—it’s our turn. Ready?”
 
            Erica nodded and linked arms with her father. Her stomach jumped into her throat as she watched as all of the people in the church rise to face her. Nerves overwhelmed her, but as she walked, she fixated on his dark brown eyes—the eyes that had captivated her from the start. She looked into them and everything was okay. She had always told him that whenever she looked into his eyes, she fell in love. She held back her tears as she approached the altar. Her father gave her away and the ceremony began.
            It was beautiful—everything that she had ever dreamed of and more. The flowers adorning the church were absolutely gorgeous--tigerlilies had always been her favorite. The music consisted of the hymns she loved growing up. The vows that she and the man she loved were more beautiful than poetry.
 
“If anyone now has any reason why these two shall not be wed, speak now, or forever hold your peace,” the pastor said.
 
           The ornate entrance doors of the church burst open, almost as if on cue. Erica’s attention, along with everyone else’s, diverted to the back of the church where four men stood, out of breath. There were two with curly hair and a third with straight hair. There was no word to describe the fourth one’s hair, though he appeared to be the youngest. The two curly haired men struggled to keep the straight haired man back. Each was holding him by an arm.
 
“We tried to stop him, we really did,” piped the fourth, who stood a few inches away from the others.
 
“Oh my God,” Erica said as their faces came into view. “This cannot be happening.”
 
            Erica looked back at Eva, who was covering her mouth with her hand in shock. The bride noticed a few of her bridesmaids stifling their laughter. Erica just shook her head in disbelief as the straight haired man broke free of the curly haired men’s restraints.
 
“Joe?”
 

That’s all that could escape her mouth.

 

Well, that's it for now. Let me know what you think and if you like it, I'll keep it coming!


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New Post 1/20/2008 12:58 AM
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WOW! This is really good! PMS!



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New Post 1/20/2008 12:59 AM
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ooh sounds interesting write more soon.


 
New Post 1/20/2008 1:01 AM
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Oh lalala I like<3

Pms.


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New Post 1/20/2008 1:09 AM
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this is lik frickin awesome! so plz pms! and i mean now! or whenever! lol! pms plz!

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New Post 1/20/2008 1:21 AM
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this is a really good idea! love this ff! please pasap!


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New Post 1/20/2008 1:40 AM
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Wow, guys. Thank you so much--you're all absolutely amazing and I'm so glad you like it so far. I've got the next part written up, but I'm absolutely exhausted so I don't think I'll edit it until tomorrow, but I'll definitely get it up as soon as I can. I love you guys!


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New Post 1/20/2008 1:40 AM
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it was really good pms!

 
New Post 1/20/2008 11:05 AM
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Here we go, chapter 2!

 

“Whatever it is, this really isn’t the time,” Erica said to Joe under her breath.
  
  “Will you listen to me? Give me five minutes, please,” Joe begged.
  
              Erica’s husband-to-be, Craig, stared sternly at her and then at Joe and then back at Erica, as if he was watching a ping pong match. Erica rolled her eyes and shot a look of devastation at Craig.
  
  “I am so sorry about whatever this is. I’m sure it’s important. It better be important,” Erica said before taking a step off of the altar.
  
              Craig could feel everyone in the church staring at him. He covered his reddening face with both hands and apologized softly to the pastor.
  
  “How did you even find out about this?” Erica asked angrily.
  
  “The real question is, why didn’t you invite me?” Joe retorted.
  
  “Gee, let me think. We dated for four years, you cheated on me with a model from Paris, and then we had the break up to end all break ups. Not to mention, we haven’t spoken in almost three years. I must've just misplaced your invitation,” Erica said sarcastically. “Joe, this is my wedding day.Estranged ex-boyfriends typically aren’t invited to weddings! Why are you even here?”
   
 “You’re not happy and I know it. He’s not right for you and I think you know that
but you don’t want to admit it. I’m doing you a favor. I’m stopping you from
making the biggest mistake of your life,” Joe said, reaching for her arm.
  
              Erica pulled away and gave him a look that pierced right into his soul.
  
  “No, Joe. The biggest mistake of my life was meeting you. Just leave, please,” Erica pleaded.
  
  “No, Erica, I’m not leaving until I’m done and I’ve said what I have to say,” Joe said. “Sit down.”
  
              He pointed to a wooden chair that was barely still in one piece. Erica was afraid the weight of her dress in addition to her own body weight would crack the thing into a million pieces, so she remained standing. Plus, she refused to allow Joe to tell her what to do.
  
  “Hurry up. I have a wedding to be in,” Erica said.
  
              She looked at the clock that hung above the door and then stared at the wall. She looked everywhere except directly at Joe.
  
  “That guy,” Joe began. He pointed towards the Church. “That guy in there is not what you want.”
  
  “Maybe you didn’t notice, but that guy in there, he’s wearing a uniform. He’s a marine, Joe, and he will kill you. And at this rate, considering you’re ruining my wedding, I might just have him do that.”
  
  “I could take him,” Joe said smugly.
  
  “Yeah, okay,” Erica laughed to herself.
  
  “This isn’t about him though. It’s about you. Answer me honestly, are you happy?” Joe said quietly. “Honestly.”
  
  “Yes! Yes, I’m happy. I’m very happy. Thrilled! Ecstatic!” Erica was practically shouting at him.
  
              There was a light tap on the door. It was Eva. Erica had, for a few seconds, almost completely forgotten about the fact that there were 150 people sitting in a cold church, waiting to see her marry Craig.
  
  “Uh, Erica? Wedding? You coming?” Eva asked, motioning toward the church.
  
              Erica looked at Joe.
  
  “Two minutes, I promise,” Erica said to Eva.
  
              Eva stared at Erica with disbelief. She could not understand why her sister was sitting in an empty room of a church with the guy that had broken her heart. Part of her wanted to ask, but she just left Erica to Joe.
  
  “You’re lying,” Joe accused.
  
  “What makes you say that? You’ve been out of my life for years. You know nothing about me anymore,” Erica replied angrily.
  
  “I know the look you get when something’s really wrong and as soon I busted into that church I saw that look on your face. I could never forget that look. I remember because I put that look on your face when I told you I cheated on you and I’ve never forgiven myself,” Joe said. His voice was breaking.
  
  “Why are you doing this Joe?” Erica said.
  
              She looked up at him desperately. He looked at her for a second, but turned away quickly when he saw the tears swelling inside her eyes.
  
  “Because Erica,” he began. He made a fist and slammed it against the wall. “Please. Don’t make me say it.”
  
              It was a cold December day but Erica could feel the heat flushing her face. She shook her head at Joe and begged him with her eyes not to say anything more, but he did.
  
  “I still love you.”
 

Well, there you have it--Chapter 2. More later if you want it, so let me know! Love you guys!


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New Post 1/20/2008 11:48 AM
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bump!


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