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Take On Me [authors note on 6/7!] 
Modified By ames! [team edward]  on 6/7/2008 1:52:51 PM)

okayyy guys so i decided to start writing another fic along with my old one, because i needed to just write what was going on in my life right now.the roles are all already filled by jessica and alissa because they are basically my only two friends.this is the first chapter but it was basically just an introduction into the characters and stuff.please comment it and tell me if you like it!

Chapter 1

“A little bit longer, and I’ll be fine.” My sidekick rang, I looked at the caller ID and it read Joe.

“Great just what I needed to ruin my day, what the hell does he want?” I muttered under my breath, clicking the answer button on my phone.

“Ummm….hi?” I said with surprise in my voice.

“Hey, how have you been?” he asked.

“Bad, but why are YOU calling ME?”I said emphasizing the you and me parts.

“I need to tell you the truth…”he said unable to finish his sentence.

“Go on then.” I said interrupting him.

“Well I decided to give up lying, so I need to get this off of my chest. When we dated, I didn’t like you really. I just felt bad for you, and after we broke up I should’ve just broke things off all together.” He said and I instantly felt my heart crush.

“Why are you telling me this?” I questioned.

“I don’t know, I had to and I’m sorry for being such a jerk. I don’t want to be one anymore, and the only way to stop that is to just not talk. We can’t talk anymore.” He said, sounding serious but yet upset.

“Bye then.” I said, not waiting for a reply and pressing the end call button.

 I threw my phone onto my brightly colored sheets on my bed. I looked down at the top of my hands, they are white and cold. I turn them over to expose my wrists, they are covered in scars, some are fresh and some are old. I can now feel my eyes well up with tears, and they start to fall, smearing my mascara and purple eyeliner. Suddenly I started to hyperventilate and freak out. I ran across my room and opened up a drawer of my nightstand, pulling out a shiny object. I ran my finger over the sharp blade and it sliced my finger open, but not enough to draw blood. I took the blade and held it in my left hand as I pulled back the bracelets on my right arm. I pressed the blade into the skin of my wrist and almost instantly saw the faint red of blood. I ran the blade over my wrist, again, and again, and again, I kept doing it until I was relieved. Once I was finished, I looked down and saw that my entire wrist was saturated by blood. I went into the bathroom and turned the knob on the sink. The cool water ran over my self inflicted wounds and it sent a searing pain through my body and I felt like my wrists were burning. I turned the water off and grabbed a gauze roll and wrapped my wrist up. I head the garage door open and then I heard the door open and slam shut.

“AMY! I’M HERE!” a voice said, I knew it was none other than my best friend, Alissa.

“I’M UPSTAIRS LISSA!” I screamed back at her and checked to make sure all of the blood was cleaned up. I ran into my room and grabbed my red, Paul Les guitar and sat down on my bed. “That was a close one!” I muttered under my breath, I looked up and saw Alissa staring at me.

“What’s wrong Ames?” Alissa asked me.

“Nothing, does it look like something is wrong?” I replied.

“Amy, you are my best friend. I know when you are upset. First off, you have no guitar pick. Secondly, you look like you have been crying.” She said her eyes wandered down to my wrist and she gasped at the gauze that was now soaked with blood. “Why did you do it?” she said, now sitting next to me on my bed. I told her the whole story about Joe and she asked me how I felt about it and I told her the usual, that I was depressed. She wrapped me into her normal hug and comforted me, she was such a GREAT best friend.

“Well, I know what will cheer you up! Do you remember what we get to do tonight?” she asked me, nearly squealing.

“WE GET TO SEE THE JONAS BROTHERS AT THEIR MALL CONCERT AND WE GET TO MEET THEM! EEEEEP!” I said and let out a high pitched squeal.

You see the Jonas Brothers are our favorite band. From the first time we heard Nick sing “Dear God” we were hooked. Their first CD has not even come out yet but every time we hear them on Radio Disney, we crank the volume way up. Not very many people, well no one knows who they are, but we don’t care, because we think someday they will be huge. Little did we know just how huge.

“YES! And if we don’t leave right now we will never get front row.” Alissa said, and we ran out of my bed room door and I stopped in the bathroom so I could re bandage my wrist. I looked down at my phone and noticed it was only 2 and a half house until the concert was scheduled to start.

“Alissa, I don’t think we have to worry, no one even knows who they are except us!” I said running out of my door and closing the garage.

“Yes, I know but if we get there soon, we can see them do their sound check! Plus we have to meet Jess there too!” she said opening the door to her mother’s SUV, we both climbed in.

Jessica our other third, we are all best friends and we hardly ever part. We basically live at each other’s houses, but mainly mine because my parents are rarely home. We each have 1/3 of a guitar pick, that was of course from the Jonas Brothers, and we each wear our piece of it on a chain around our neck. Jessica is the same age as Kevin, which is weird, seeing he is her favorite. Alissa and I are a little over three years younger than Jessica, but the age difference didn’t matter. Alissa and I are both a little over a year older than Nick, the youngest in the band.

“True! I’m so excited to see Jess, it’s been way too long!” I said jumping up and down in my seat.

“Amy it’s only been a day since you saw her last.” Alissa said, laughing at me.

“Oh shut up you know you miss her too! Now let’s crank up the Jonas tunage, turn it to Radio Disney my second mother!” I asked politely.  We rode the long 10 minutes to the outdoor mall where the concert was going to take place and once we got there, Alissa and I ran out of the car and into the place where the stage was set up. As we had expected, no one was there yet and there was no one to be found anywhere, except Jess.

“JESS!” Alissa and I screamed in unison, and ran up to her and gave her a huge hug.

“Hey besties!”she said, hugging us both back. “Are you guys ready for our first Jonas conert?”

“OF COURSE!” I said nodding my head with my reply.

“Amy, Jess look over there!” Alissa said, pointing in front of her at a small van with three boys piling out of it.

 

next chapter jb will come into play!please comment! =]


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New Post 2/12/2008 10:03 PM
User is offline Niki_619
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

.:.shudders.:. I was eating Spaghetti O's as I read the slicing of the wrist part. Lovely. Now my Spaghetti O's will go to waste. .:.shakes head.:.

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New Post 2/12/2008 10:05 PM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

 Niki_619 wrote

.:.shudders.:. I was eating Spaghetti O's as I read the slicing of the wrist part. Lovely. Now my Spaghetti O's will go to waste. .:.shakes head.:.

POST MORE

aww im sorry they will go to waste.but i had to include that part because its kind of a hard issue i have to face everyday of my life.not doing it.


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New Post 2/12/2008 10:05 PM
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

oh man oh man.

amy ames. i loved it =]
completely awesome.

can't wait for the next one! hahah!


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New Post 2/12/2008 10:40 PM
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

this is awesome! pmsasap! plz n thank u! ily! plz post more tonite! plz! i luv u more! thanks! oh yeea, if i didnt mention. i am in a loving mood! haha! well u got to luv all ur sisters in the JB family! lol! xoxo!


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New Post 2/12/2008 10:48 PM
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

 amyheartsnick09 wrote

 Niki_619 wrote

 

.:.shudders.:. I was eating Spaghetti O's as I read the slicing of the wrist part. Lovely. Now my Spaghetti O's will go to waste. .:.shakes head.:.

POST MORE

 

aww im sorry they will go to waste.but i had to include that part because its kind of a hard issue i have to face everyday of my life.not doing it.

.:.gasps.:. Amy! :( I'm sorry, darling. I honestly don't know what to say..but I want to. I'm afraid anything I say will sound stupid...especially since I hardly know you.


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New Post 2/13/2008 4:31 AM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

 Niki_619 wrote

 amyheartsnick09 wrote

 

 Niki_619 wrote

 

.:.shudders.:. I was eating Spaghetti O's as I read the slicing of the wrist part. Lovely. Now my Spaghetti O's will go to waste. .:.shakes head.:.

POST MORE

 

aww im sorry they will go to waste.but i had to include that part because its kind of a hard issue i have to face everyday of my life.not doing it.

 

.:.gasps.:. Amy! :( I'm sorry, darling. I honestly don't know what to say..but I want to. I'm afraid anything I say will sound stupid...especially since I hardly know you.

its fine.im sure you wont say anything wrong.its just a problem i have to face everyday.everyday is a new day.everyday i could slip and do it again.but im trying really hard not to,but its hard.really hard.and its fine. =]


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New Post 2/13/2008 10:00 PM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

hey guys.so as some of you know.i was going to post a new chapter tonight.i have it all written in my notebook and stuff.but as of right now.i just dont feel like it.i got in a huge arguement with someone really close to me and i just havent been motivated to type it up.i wont post after tomorrow because i am going to be gone until monday late because im going to chicago for a guard trip.but dont worry while i am on the bus i will write tons and tons but i probably wont post them until after finals next week.which is after friday.im really sorry guys.ill post a new chapter tomorrow though.and i should be updating my old fic soon. =]


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New Post 2/13/2008 10:20 PM
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Sad that you won't be updating, but good that you will be writing. Does that even make sense?! Anyways, I'll be anticipating your return <3


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New Post 2/14/2008 3:36 PM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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Re: Take On Me (NEW FF!) 

thanks!i might be able to update once.but it depends.and ill post a really long chapter tonight.dont worry =]


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