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New Post 2/14/2008 8:05 PM
User is offline Katie =] ™
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More Than That [one shot] 

More Than That

Song by: Backstreet Boys

She sat on her porch crying alone at night.She was my neighbor and my best friend.I walked outside to take out the trash.And when I seen her my first thought was ' What did he do this time?'. If only she knew I could love her more than that.

I can see that you've been crying
You can't hide it with a lie
What's the use in you denying
That what you have is wrong

I walk over to her,it hurts me to know that he caused her pain.I sat down next to her.She looked up,face red from crying.I smiled.

" Hey Nick." She said softly.

" Wanna talk about it?" I asked.
I heard him promise you forever
But forevers come and gone
Baby he would say whatever
It takes to keep you blind
To the truth between the lines
Oh I will love you more than that
I won't say those words, then take them back
Don't give loneliness a chance
Baby listen to me when I say
I will love you more than that
I knew she could have better,the one she had was a jerk.

She could have anyone she wanted,but she chose him.

She started to tell me what he did.

I couldn't believe what I was hearing..he got mad because..I'm her best friend.

But nobody knows I want to be so much more than that.
Baby you deserve much better
What's the use in holding on
Don't you see it's now or never
Coz I just can't be friends
Baby knowing in the end
That I will love you more than that
I won't say those words, then take them back
Don't give loneliness a chance
Baby listen to me when I say
" That guys is a jerk." I said.
" I know." She said.

" Then why are you with him?" I asked.

"I don't know." She said.

" I will love you more than that." I said,did that really come out?

"What'd you say?" She looked at me,confused.

" Nothing." I said quickly.

" Please tell me." She said softly.

" I said..I can love you more than that." I said.

There's not a day that passes by
I don't wonder why we haven't tried
It's not too late to change your mind
So take my hand, don't say goodbye
I will love you more than that
I won't say those words, then take them back


" Nick..you.." She started.
"Yeah." I looked at the ground.

" I'm sorry Nick..I don't like you that way." She said.

" So..you only like me as a best friend?" I asked.Man that hurts when someone tells you that.

" Yeah..I'm really sorry Nick." she said.

" No..it's okay..I can handle being just your best friend." I said.

Her front door came open,her dad called her in.
" Bye Nick." She got up.

" Bye." I said.
Oh I will love you more than that
I won't say those words, then take them back
Don't give loneliness a chance
Baby listen to me when I say
I will love you, oh
I will love you more than that
I won't say those words, then take them back
Don't give loneliness a chance
Baby listen to me when I say
I will love you more than that

' I can't believe I just told her that' I told myself on the way backto my house.

His car pulled up to her house,he got out and looked at me.

" Hey!" I called to him.

" What do you want?" He said.

" Treat her better." I said.

"Better? What has she been telling you?" he called.

" Enough for me to know..that I can love her more than that." I went inside.

-KATi3


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New Post 2/14/2008 8:57 PM
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New Post 2/14/2008 9:05 PM
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aww, poor nick =( this was great tho! im lovin your storys! and i love that song!


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New Post 2/14/2008 10:08 PM
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New Post 2/14/2008 10:11 PM
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wow, i really like this. your writing is so gooddd (:


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New Post 2/14/2008 10:33 PM
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I like it.


 
New Post 2/18/2008 2:00 PM
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Awww I liked It XD


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New Post 2/18/2008 2:28 PM
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Wow, I love it! It's so sweet--but poor Nick! What girl wouldn't want him...? But he handled it so well, and I can totally see him doing that. So sweet.

You should write more like this!

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New Post 3/25/2008 8:43 PM
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KATIE! this is AMAZING! i HEART it! YEEP


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