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New Post 2/25/2008 1:02 AM
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The Diving Bell and the Butterfly (CH 14) SHHHHHHNAP 
Modified By anonymous  on 4/14/2008 7:11:04 PM)

This fanfic is going to be kinda short, but here's the first chapter. I hope you like it, it may seem sorta slow at the begining, but i swear it'll pick up. Oh, and if you have some time go read my joint called You Have to Loose to Win. Enjoy!

 

The Diving Bell and the Butterfly

 

                “Look, the only thing I care about is getting away from this place.” Cheyenne said stubbornly and coldly, plopping down onto the hard plastic chair in the weird smelling room.

                “No,” Nick replied trying to make grace of sitting down in the uncomfortable seat. “You don’t. You know you want to stay and see her.” He paused and dared not to look at Cheyenne. “You know you love your mom.”

                Cheyenne stayed quiet, dropping her stinging eyes to the floor. She had cried in the bathroom so Nick wouldn’t see her, and she had ‘slept’ on the way over to avoid his words of comfort. He didn’t know how it felt to have a mother in a mental hospital, and no matter how much he tried to relate, he couldn’t.

                “Chey?” She turned her head to look at him for one of the first times that morning. “Do you want to go home?” He asked noticing the red circling her irises and the bags resting above her cheeks.

                “Home?” She asked “More like—”

                “Come back with me, you know you’re always welcome. Were gonna be home for a few more days.” Nick hoped she would agree, hoped she would stay with him and his family instead of alone in her apartment.

                “What if I leave, and… and she dies or something?” Cheyenne asked ignoring his question as the nurse who worked with her mother walked by. Gladys, her nametag read, waved and obviously didn’t notice that the two sixteen-year-old’s sitting gloomily in the two plastic torture devices.

                “Chey, you need to sleep. You stay awake all night at your apartment, you come here in the morning, leave at dinner. You need to relax. Your mother will be fine. Trust me, please?” Nick rested his hand on her wrist and pleaded with his eyes, his voice strained.

                “She doesn’t even know who I am anymore,”

                “Cheyenne, please, stop.” His grip tightened around her small wrist. “Stop blaming yourself and spend the weekend with us.”

                “Okay,” Cheyenne said in reply. She stood, examining her outfit that she had been in for two days: faded ripped jeans tucked into black Uggs, a large gray wool sweater, and a multicolored pashmina strewn carelessly around her neck. Her unwashed hair, dyed black loose waves, was pulled into a high ponytail and traveled down her back. She knew she didn’t look very pleasant with her naked face and chapped lips, but she had never needed to impress Nick.

                “Do you want to pack?” Nick asked meekly as he grabbed her car keys out of his front pocket. The automatic doors swooshed open to reveal one of the only cars in the parking lot: Cheyenne’s beat up, white 1981 Eldorado that her father had passed on to her before he had passed onto Heaven.

                She nodded slightly as she slid the seatbelt around her waist. She stared over the dashboard as Nick told a story about Frankie and drove it one hand on the wheel, one planted firmly in his curls. He was always so serious and sometimes she wondered if their growing up together forced him to be mature for her, that because she couldn’t handle her life, he had to be double strong.

 

xoxo JJ

dont be too harsh! lol, but tell the truth! :P

 
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ahhhhhhhhhh that was awesome! i loved it!

update soon pleaseee =D


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I second that.

 

AMAZING<3


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oh thanks so much guys! i was worried nobody would like it!

xoxo JJ

 
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bumping!

check back for chapter two in a few hours <333

xoxo JJ

 
New Post 2/25/2008 11:58 PM
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well well well, here's chapter two. i love comments <3 *hint hint* lol


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                “You go eat something, I’ll pack for you.” Nick said as he unlocked the front door to Cheyenne’s apartment. She didn’t argue, instead clunking to the refrigerator and pulling out a banana.

                Inside her large room, he found her duffel bag lying openly on the foot of her bed. It always stayed there, ready to be packed and taken to the hospital. He grabbed all the clean jeans off the hangers, threw in a few tops, barreled through her dresser to find some pj’s and approximately four pairs of socks, stopping at the underwear drawer. He was a guy; he only knew how much underwear a guy needed for a weekend. But a girl? He took a minute to ponder the situation, but ended up carrying the whole months worth of underwear and stuffing it inside.

                Feeling satisfied, he zipped up the duffel, grabbed her stuffed bear named Nomad and ventured out into the kitchen. “Hey,” he said tossing the stuff by the door.

                “How’d it go?” Cheyenne asked out of interest, not small talk. She turned from him, not waiting for a response, pouring herself some water.

                “Mission accomplished,” he laughed and grabbed himself a banana too. “Did you eat?”

                “Not very much, I don’t feel very well. I had some fruit.” She said nonchalantly as a slithering noise was heard near the front door. Cheyenne moved swiftly, picking up a few envelops that had been dropped through the mail slot. “Mail time,”

                Nick watched her thumb through the envelops and then open the recycling cabinet tossing them in. “Wait!” He exclaimed rising to his feet and rescuing them from the trash bin. “Look, it’s a bill, with a letter on the back from…” he struggled to make out the writing. “… a Larry Burkowitz? Who’s that?”

                “The mail carrier,” She replied listlessly.

                “Ooh, a love affair with the mailman? Scandalous,” Nick said raising an eyebrow as he read the little love note scribbled on the back of the rent. “Wait how old is this guy?”

                “He’s fourteen, he’s and intern, I answered the door once, and I am now the object of his prepubescent affection. My life can’t get any better,” Cheyenne laughed as she once again placed them in the garbage… all but one.

                “Hey, you’re laughing,” Nick smiled and picked up her bag, quickly stuffing the letter from her sister, Hollis, into the side. “Let’s keep it that way. I miss the old Chey.”

                “You’re gonna get a lot of her this weekend. Are you sure you want me to come?” She grabbed her sidekick from the kitchen counter and faced him, staring him down. “I mean, you’re gonna have to take me to the hospital a lot and I’ll be awake all the time, and I—”

                “You’re coming, end of discussion.” A smile warmed Nick’s face as he thought of the weekend coming up. “And the first thing we’re going to do is watch our movie,”

                “My Girl,” they said in unison, locking up the apartment. Back, again, in the Eldorado, the topic of how life was when they were kids came up. From the first time they met, to the time she moved away because her mother became sick.

                “Cheyenne? I can’t believe it! I didn’t know you were coming!” Joe exclaimed as Nick threw the car into park and turning it off.

                “I didn’t know either. Nick invited me,” She said into his shirt as he smothered her in a hug. Joe smelled like he always had, and she even remembered the first time he started wearing cologne. The memories she had experienced with this family came flooding back until Nick spoke.

                “And I don’t regret it,” he interjected. He grabbed all of her things and brought them to the hallway, dumping them there and watching Cheyenne meticulously wash her hands at the kitchen sink. It was always this way, every time she was in the kitchen, she had to wash her hands. “Some traditions never die,” Nick chortled half-heartedly.

                “Or obsessions…” She trailed off, and he knew she was worried about becoming just like her mother: sick, not remembering things beside how many tiles there were in her bathroom as a child, stuck in a hospital.

                “You’re not obsessed; you’re just…into hygiene. Cleanliness is next to Godliness.” He said, which was something his mother always told him as a child. Cheyenne scoffed and went off to Nick’s room, not to be seen for another hour.

                “She doesn’t talk much anymore,” Joe said as he slid next to Nick on the couch. “She’s different.” They sat solemnly and gnawed on his truthful words, trying to find something to do about it.

xoxo JJ

 
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Hahahah this made me laugh out loud.

Super good. PMS!


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Thanks!

xoxo JJ

 
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ahhhhhhhhhh so good, yet again =) i laughed about the underwear. at first i didnt think he'd open the drawer =) pms!


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 Miss Tinaboo ♥ wrote

ahhhhhhhhhh so good, yet again =) i laughed about the underwear. at first i didnt think he'd open the drawer =) pms!

haha thanks! i was wondering if he should've or not, but i decided it was okay lol. Boys.. cant live with 'em, cant live without 'em. Thanks again for reading!

xoxo JJ

 
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