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New Post 4/7/2007 5:45 PM
User is offline kluvsnickjonas
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Re: Once in a life time 

Come on I want to know more!!!!!!Your really good I love your story keep on writing.

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New Post 4/7/2007 7:17 PM
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Re: Once in a life time 
Aside from mean Joe :[ I totally love it!

"YES! A prairie dog." -Joe Jonas
 
New Post 4/9/2007 5:16 PM
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 dancer_Em wrote
Aside from mean Joe :[ I totally love it!

 

Agreed LOL


"I think we could like sing on corners or sumthing and put out hats "-Kevin
 
New Post 4/9/2007 6:45 PM
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                                       Chapter 5

   "Wow.  What a great night."  Cristy said.  Cristy and Nick had hung around the park hours after it had closed.  There was a big open field right next to the fair which they had a picnic together.  Now they were just sitting together, and looking up at the stars.  "I really had a great night, tonight, Nick."  Cristy wanted to cry.  She didn't know why, though.  Mabey becuase I have to leave.  Or mabey there tears of joy since this had been my goal in life.  I'm such a dork.

  "Yeah, I better take you home........ or back to the concert or, where ever."  Nick said.  "Unless you want to go somewhere else."  Of coarse I want to go some where else!  Anywhere!  Just......... somewhere!  Cristy smiled.  "I have an idea."

   "Can we stop by your house."  Cristy couldn't even imagine meeting Nick Jonas,  and going over their house, and mabey even becomming friends.  And it was all happening right now.........

 
New Post 4/9/2007 9:29 PM
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Re: Once in a life time 
Cute little add! I'd like to see more of Kevin Joe and Frankie, I don't know, maybe thats in your upcoming plans.

"YES! A prairie dog." -Joe Jonas
 
New Post 4/10/2007 4:05 PM
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Re: Once in a life time 

Yeah, that's the "bad" part of the story!  (I'm not going to say my story is bad but it could use more of the other brothers)

 
New Post 4/14/2007 5:29 PM
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                                       Chapter 6

   "Come on Nick!  I want to see everything."  Cristy said as she plopped out of the tour bus.  But Nick wouldn't budge.  His eyes were glued to the doorway.  "Hello?  Nick?  Hurry up!  I don't want to wait anytime."

   She looked up at Nick.  What's wrong with Nick?  Cristy thought.  Then she glanced at the door.  Joe?! How is Joe here?!  He's suppost to be at the concert.  Is it already over?  And how did he get home?!  We took the tour bus!  Where's Kevin?!  Is he here?

   Cristy ran up to Joe and opened the door.  "Joe?  How are you here?  Why were you so mean to Frankie?!  And more importantly Nick!"

  "Whoa.  Slow down!  One question at a time, and please..... no autographs!"  Joe laghed.  Cirsty, on the other hand, was mad!  Really mad.  "Whatever!  How could you be so...."  She was trying to think of a good word.  Mean?  No, way too..... childish, I guess.  Stupid?  Too obvious.  Hummmm......

   "Awsome?  How can I be so awsome?  I just do my best!  Some people are just born awsome!"  Cristy rolled her eyes.  "Are you serious?  How could you be so...... stupidly mean,"  She didn't have time to think of another word to describe Joe's stupidity.  "You made Frankie cry, you kicked Nick out in the rain, your stupid, and your mean!"  Then, Nick finally got out of the tour bus.  "What's going on?"  He said, finally.  "Joe problems?"

   "That's warning one!"  Joe said holding out his fist.  "Umm.... yeah!  He's mean!"  She said pointing at him.  "Oh, that's just normal Joe.  He's always like that."  Nick said smiling.  He always loved testing his brother.  "Warning two!"  Joe said.

   "Oh really?"  Nick said.  "How many warnings do I get?  For future reference."  Cristy smiled trying not to laugh.  "You get three.  And by the way, you kinda already have warning three."  Joe said rolling up his sleves.  Nick's eye's widened as he ran into the house and up the stairs.  Joe followed.  Cristy looked up the stairs to see if she could se Nick from there.  No luck, though.  She frowned and waited paiciently.  She heard Nick scream a couple of times.  A couple of thuds.  And Joe saying all sorts of stuff.

   Then, Joe trotted down the stairs as if nothing had just happened.  "So......"  Cristy said.  "Where's Nick?"

   "Oh, he'll be fine."  Joe said dusting his hands off.  "That takes care of him for a while."  Cristy folded her arms and looked up at him.  "Where Nick?"  She said again.  Joe sighed and said, "He's upstairs under the bed in his room."  Cristy looked stunned.  "Under the bed?"  She said shaking her head.  "Desperate."  Is all she said and walked up the stairs.

   "Nick?  Are you okay?"  Cristy said.  "I'm sorry if I did anything wrong."  Nick who was now sitting on top of the bed, now smiled and said.  "You always say your sorry when your always so innocente.  Don't say your your sorry.  It's not your falt."

  Cristy sighed.  "I wish that was true.  If you never met me and we didn't go to the fair and have a picnic you would have already have been home before they even got there and you might have been able to prevent all of this."  She sat on top of the bed with Nick.  "I'm truely sorry, Nick."  Nick held her hand and looked in Cristy's eyes.  "Everything happens for a reason, Cristy.  Mabey we were ment to meet each other.  But all I know is other than Joe shoving me under the bed, I had a great time."  Cristy smiled.  And now she wispered, "Thanks."

 
New Post 4/14/2007 6:53 PM
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Re: Once in a life time 
omg! Joe is soo abusive ahh
haha as much as I love this story I hate Joe in it, and in real like I love him
it's good though because its a different take on their characters!

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New Post 4/15/2007 11:34 AM
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Re: Once in a life time 
This is a really good story! I'm new here and this is the first fan fic i read on here. Post More Soon!
 
New Post 4/15/2007 11:41 AM
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Re: Once in a life time 

Yea.  I usually wait untill a couple ppl reply so I'll post the next chapter soon.

 
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