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New Post 3/1/2008 3:02 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

wowwww Krista. that was one HUGEEEEEE copy/paste of our convo..hahahaha. that convo makes us sound SUPERLYYYYY HYPER!! hahaha...which we probably were....i mean COME ON! it was JB PLAYING ON AND AUSSIE RADIO STATION ON AN AUSSIE SHOW!!! wooot =D

right so TANNY! i am thinking that u should post chapter 3 when you're on a 'study break'. yess? otherwise this thread will look more like a conversation instead of a fanfic thread. hahahaha. buttt while im here...BUMPITY BUMP!

i swearr...u guys ALL make me so hyper........

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New Post 3/1/2008 3:26 AM
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 adri wrote

wowwww Krista. that was one HUGEEEEEE copy/paste of our convo..hahahaha. that convo makes us sound SUPERLYYYYY HYPER!! hahaha...which we probably were....i mean COME ON! it was JB PLAYING ON AND AUSSIE RADIO STATION ON AN AUSSIE SHOW!!! wooot =D

right so TANNY! i am thinking that u should post chapter 3 when you're on a 'study break'. yess? otherwise this thread will look more like a conversation instead of a fanfic thread. hahahaha. buttt while im here...BUMPITY BUMP!

i swearr...u guys ALL make me so hyper........

<3 Adri

yeh..WOW..we're really hyper! BUT WHO WOULDN'T IF JB'S PLAYING ON AUSSIE RADIO? GOSH....AND THIS TIME,,, we cant blame each other..cus its DEFINITELY JB's fault! hahaha! i <333 them! haha..

right..i completely agree with adriii!! YOU NEED TO POST LIKE 3 CHAPTERS! or else.. you're thread will be full of this convos! aahh! you better have a study break and check this!aaahhh!

PMS!! PMS! PMS!!!

-krista


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New Post 3/1/2008 3:54 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

Alright you guys went SUPER HYPER! That is like THE longest copy/paste thing ever. SO haha, enough random convos and hyperness, time for some actual chapters!! Enjoy everyone!!

Ch 3

 

*Alexis POV*

I felt the blood leave my face. “She wants to be one of them?” He nodded once, his eyes sharp on my face, watching my reaction—

“Alexis, Liam, I’m home!” I heard my mothers voice float through the house, interrupting my focus. I was reading ‘New moon’, the sequel to ‘Twilight’, which I had some how lost. I put my book down, slid off my bed and trekked downstairs. My mum was in the entrance, her suitcases lying on the marble floor.

“Alexis, darling, how are you?” She asked and came over to hug me, her heels clicking on the floor.

“Hey mum, how was Canada?” I asked, as she released me and took of her coat.

“The same, cold but nice.” She said with a smile. “Where’s your brother, I want to know how his shoot went last week.” She said, as she didn’t give me a second glance and went upstairs to my brother’s room. I stood by myself in the entrance.

“Yes mum, I missed you too.” I said to myself quietly, before the front door opened again.

“Honey! How are you?” Boomed my dad as he stepped through the front door, pulling his luggage behind him. And then there were four again.

“Good dad, how was France?” I asked as he hung his coat up and gave me a kiss on the head.

“Brilliant, excellent food.” He said with a broad grin.

“That’s great dad, I miss—” I watched as his eyes went over my head and up the stairs, where my mum and brothers voices could be heard.

“Where’s you’re brother? I wanted to tell him that Elaine Delaware saw his shoot from last week, and her associate from Ralph Lauren wanted to give him a call.” He said to me, as he began to walk upstairs.

“Right…well…” But I didn’t continue as my dad disappeared upstairs, leaving me once again alone in the entrance. And that’s how it always was, Liam, Liam, Liam…and for me a nice gift to try to keep me satisfied. Well this was how the Daniels lived, welcome to my life.

 

 

Two days later I was sitting in a car with my brother finishing Eclipse the third novel in the Twilight series. I felt his arm roughly push me, as my right side hit the door. I looked up, my book dropped into my lap as I rubbed my right arm.

“What was that for?” I shot at him, angrily.

“If you paid more attention and took your nose out of that book you would have heard me talking to you!” He snapped back, as he drove across the city. Again, here I am with Liam being forced to spend some ‘quality time’ with him; according to my parents we don’t do that enough. Quality time my ass, instead he’s using the time to see his girlfriend.

“As soon as we get there, get out and leave us alone, okay? Having to sit with you in the car is as much quality time as we need.” I just ignored him and watched the houses roll by, as they got larger and larger, with more extravagant gardens. I mean, my house wasn’t exactly a shack, far from it…but it wasn’t a mansion. Liam’s latest girlfriend Gemma was nice enough, a model just like Liam but I just couldn’t see how she could like my brother, it must be a model thing.

            We rounded the street corner and pulled into her driveway. I hopped out with my book and purse then set off. I waved to Gemma as she came out of the front door to see my brother then walked down the street. The day seemed nice enough, it was warm and the sun was shining down, but I could see rain clouds in the distance. All I wanted to do was find a quiet place to sit down and read then wait for my brother to call me to leave. I walked down her street, looking at the houses as I passed them, did you ever wish that life had turned out different? I did, and I thought about it way too much, I should be grateful not spiteful. I shook my head and tried to cheer myself up as I got to the end of the street. There it was, the perfect place to read.

 

The park seemed strange in such a wealthy area; it was small, filled with large green trees and some playground equipment. I stepped off the concrete path and onto the soft grass, my feet making no noise as I wandered forward under the shade of the oak trees. I found the largest tree in the park, hidden in a secluded corner. As I was about to sit at the roots I walked around to the back of the tree, noticing planks of wood nailed to the side. Curious I climbed up and into the wooden tree house, leaving behind the noise coming from a nearby road. In a few seconds my mind had already drifted into my novel and I completely forgot about my surroundings.

 

I felt the tree shake before I saw anyone. Still trying to keep my mind on my book, I struggled to keep my concentration as I heard someone climb the tree. A moment later a saw a book tossed up, landing at my feet. I looked at the title and was surprised to see my own copy of Twilight there. I picked it up, as I set my other one down, letting my thumb run through the side of the book, the pages flicking through. I peered back at the top of the ladder, where a mop of curly brown hair appeared, followed by the body of Nick Jonas. I felt my body go stiff with shock, as he looked up at me, though the shock on his face quickly turned into a smile. There they were, those dark brown eyes, with the swirl of gold. One word. Amazing.

 

 

*sigh* I wanna stare into nick's eyes hahaha. SO there is chapter TROIS! Comment, eat cake and stay calm....AND stay cool!

 

~ Rebecca


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New Post 3/1/2008 4:02 AM
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mannn rebecca. i laugh every single time i read/see an americanised word in your chapters! hahahaha.. i cant help it!!! cos its just so...not YOU! lolz...but i lovee how u go out of your way to make it americanised =P

i wanna stare into nick's eyes too!!! i will do just that after i finish this comment. *gets ready to face the wall and stare into a nick poster* alsoo....stop trying to be a french pro wannabe! hahahaha....we all know you studied chinese =P....and just a LITTLE BIT of french. lolz =P. i think you should....name the chapters in...INDO! *nods*....chapter TIGA.

and please post chapter EMPAT soon! =D...i want CAKE! send me some cake!! and some kiwi chocolate! and do our quiz! if u havent already...and i dont need to STAY cool cos im ALWAYSS cool!

<3 AdriANA - - - =P


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New Post 3/1/2008 5:16 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

lolz you guys are funny

NEW READER btw!

im totes [wow lame much?] loving it so far
PMSP :]



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New Post 3/1/2008 6:42 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

Oh My. I love this so much. So so much. I want to meet Nick like that.

Amazing chapter. I feel so bad for Alexis what with her brother and parents...

Post more soon!

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New Post 3/1/2008 6:45 AM
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ooooo!!! REBECCA! U HAVE A NEW READER! *SHOUTS OUT TO REBECCA*

ok..so that first sentence was typed like..10mins ago now. i went downstairs to get a TIMTAM because timtams rule and we were talking about them andandd...i felt like one! mmm...YUMMM.....TIMTAMS ARE THE BEST!!!!!!!!

alright...now rebecca. u should post another chapter soon!! =]

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New Post 3/1/2008 6:45 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

HEY! JANINE!! WELCOME AT SIMPLY AMAZING's THREAD! AAAHH!!

oh gosshh..rebecca! you were at that convo too! hahaha! AND WE'RE REALLY REALLY HYPEERRR!! and staring at nick's eyes would be absolutely perfect! like that siggy adri made for this ff!! aahhh! YESSHH!

POST MORE REBECCA "TANNY" hahaha..

yeppp..

ppost!

-krista


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New Post 3/1/2008 6:57 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

Well Krista really said it...HEY JANINE!!!! haha and HEY AGAIN KEIKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am SO SO happy that you guys like this fic!!! Thanks SOOOO much for reading and commenting and putting up with the COMPLETE random-ness that adri, krista and co dish out.

If you guys didn't notice I have the most amazing signiture, courtesy of the one...the ONLY...ADRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I stared at it for like...15 minutes in awe. Cos that is the best thing i have ever seen and captures teh entire fic. ADRI THANKS & I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! Right, so moreeee tomorrow!!!!!! Thankssss and GOODNIGHT! :P

<3 Rebecca


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New Post 3/1/2008 7:13 AM
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Re: Simply Amazing [New ff] 

ahh

this is amazing!!

you are a very talented writer!!

pms!



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