I have 2 other fics right now, but I like seriously couldn't wait to start it. Please bare w/ me on the updating sometimes. Thanks. Much appriciated. Please comment, I'd like ya'll's opinions <3

Prologue:

A warm fresh breeze blew across the ocean, creating ripples in the hightide. Seagulls flew over head, searching for fish in the ocean. Hermit crabs scurried across the shore. Just another day on the beach in Wakiki, a Hawaiian island. Today was June 8^th. To many, it was just another day. But to a few, it would be a forever life changing day. Lives were at stake, love at cost, and futures in jeopardy. After today, nothing would ever be the same, even for those who think they can do anything, and those who are the best at facing danger.

The Real Chapter 1

Callie McFee opened the doors to her balcony and let the warm, fresh salt-air fill her room. Today was the first day of summer. May 31^st. Callie looked over at the ocean, right outside her backdoor. The surf would be great today. Perfect waves, perfect weather, perfect day. She couldn’t wait to get down there. Callie grabbed her cell phone. She was about to wake up her two best friends in the whole entire world. Nick Jonas and Blake Dastin. “Who should I get up first?” she thought “Nick”

‘CALLIE!!!” A sleepy Nick yelled into the phone. “Hey sleepy head. Look outside. It’s choice waves today” Callie said. “Callie. I’m sleeping. It’s summer” Nick said. “so? We gotta get there before the tourists take over! C’mon” Callie said. Nick sighed. “Hang on. Let me see how great it is” Nick said. Callie ran outside onto her balcony.  Nick lived next door, so she could see if he really was out there. Nope. The little liar. “Nick. Get your butt out onto that balcony right now” Callie said firmly. “Sheesh woman. Chillax. What are you 15 or 50?” Nick joked. “Haha. Very funny.” Callie watched Nick walk out of his room “Dude! Those are some awesome waves! We gotta get Blake!” Nick said excited. “I know!” Callie said. “I’ll call. Meet you in 30” she said. “30? I’ll be there in 10, 15 maybe.” Nick said. “Excited much?” Callie asked sarcastically. “Dude? Are you blind? Look!” he said. “Okay. Okay.” Callie said. “should I ask Joe and Kevin if they want to come?” Nick asked. “If you want to. Or it could just be OUR surf. Our wave” Callie said, making it an obvious no. “I’ll take that as a no” Nick laughed. “How’d ya guess?” she asked sarcastically. “Ok. You call Blake. I’ll get dressed and meet you there” Nick said. “See you in a bit” she said and hung up. Pretty much the same conversation took place with Blake, minus the asking Kevin and Joe to come. And Blake called the wave gnarly and all ours if we get our butts and boards down there.

Callie threw on a pair of blue board shorts, and a bikini top. Over her top, she just threw on a Henley. Typical outfit actually. Everyone in Hawaii went around like that. To Callie, Nick, and Blake, Hawaii was the best place in the whole entire world. No questions asked. Surfing was life, and life was surfing.

Comments? <3

please please please please please comment you guys. *puppy face*

is it horrible? please let me know. i can so take it

NICK&INA wrote It's not that bad at all! I just got confused as to who was speaking because you never indented when a new person spoke. I think it has a lot of potential. Just go into detail about the beach and the waves and stuff. You can write so much about the beach, you know? Good luck with the rest of it :]

Do you mean like about the prologue? Cause noone in particular was speaking then. Yeah, i may go into more detail about it. change it up. after a few more comments though. thanks for yours. i helped me out :) much appreciated

Bump!!!