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New Post 3/2/2008 4:21 PM
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When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Romantic & Short Chapter 11!)) [Kevin FF] 
Modified By anonymous  on 3/31/2008 11:56:05 AM)

Ok, so I am new, but I am aware of what a fan fiction is. I love to write and I write many stories. Now, I'd like to let you know, this is my first, so please don't make fun or anything of such matter. If you do have suggestions, or positive comments, leave em' cuz I love em'. So here goes Chapter 1. Oh, one last thing, 1 rule applies, please don't post anything bad in your comments. A filter is on my computer & I can get in trouble for what you say.

Chapter 1

    Ally sat in the dance studio, putting her tennis shoes on and getting ready to leave. Classmates passed by her waving goodbye.
    "Bye Al!" said one classmate cheerfully.
    "See ya!" Ally replied
    Ally turned off the lights and started walking into the waiting room which lead to a hallway with bathrooms and a one-way mirror. Ally stopped to find a tall, fit guy looking through the mirror. Ally walked towards him to greet him but was interrupted by him turning around, smiling, and saying hi.
    "Whoa. Y-y-you're Kevin Jonas!" Ally said in shock.
    "Uh... yeah... that's my name. Don't wear it out."
    "What are you doing in a small town dance studio?"
    "My mom was thinking about applying for a job here."
    Mrs. Jonas (Denise) came out of the studio's office, looking a little discouraged.
    Kevin walked over and asked his mother what was bugging her.
    "I didn't get the job. But you know what?" she asked.
    "What's that?" Kevin asked.
    "I'd rather be a stay at home mom and support my boys." she said with pride and then pecked Kevin on the head.
    Ally smiled with chills running through her skin.
    "So who's your friend?" Denise asked.
    "Oh, well, uh, I haven't quite gotten her name." Kevin turned to Ally.
    "Oh, uh, name, uh, haha." she took a breath and calmed down. "I'm Allyson but you may call me Ally."
    "Ally," Kevin awed.
    "Yes?" Ally asked. Kevin shook his head rapidly.
    "Oh, nothing. I've just always loved the name Ally."
    "Aw, thanks."
    "Well Ally, you live around here?" Denise asked.
    "Oh, yeah."
    "You need a ride?"
    "Oh, no thanks. My mom should be coming soon. But thank you."
    "Anytime sweetie. Well, Kevin, we should get going," Denise gestured.
    "Oh, heh, yeah. Um, wait up for me, I need to talk to Ally," Kevin said anxiously. Denise left and  Ally retrieved a confused look.
    "Can I uh, get your cell?" Kevin asked shyly.
    "Um... yeah. I'll put my number in your phone. Put yours in mine," Ally suggested. They exchanged phones, number, and phones again.
    "Thanks!" Kevin said excitedly.
    Ally headed out the door. The rain poured outside. Kevin ran outside to catch Ally.

    "I'll see you around Ally!" Kevin shouted over the rain. Ally was soaked. She turned towards Kevin and looked down at her shoes, looked up and said with a smile, "See ya."

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Not very exciting, I know. But this one is my favorite. Please comment!!!

 

 
New Post 3/2/2008 7:11 PM
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Awwwww... this is really cute! Post more soon!


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New Post 3/2/2008 7:14 PM
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this is def. a good start! cant wait to read more! PMS!!


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New Post 3/2/2008 7:22 PM
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write more soon


 
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woot woot!!! Yay, people posted. Looks like this fan fiction is gonna start out really well. Well, seeing as I've got 3 great comments, chapter 2 will be up ASAP.

LiveLaughLoveJoNaS

 
New Post 3/2/2008 7:41 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter 2 is up!)) [Kevin FF] 

Ok, so this next chapter, I'm guessing if you like the first, you'll like the second. :) I'm hoping this FF will turn out really well!!! Here goes...

Chapter 2

    The next morning Ally woke up, retrieved her diary from her secret hiding place and started.
    Last night was amazing! I went to dance class (which is always fun!) and I met a celebrity. Wow. Thinking of it seems odd. Celebrity, dance studio. Turns out his mom was applying for a job there. She didn't get it but she said the sweetest thing. Sorta gave me chills. Anyways. I think I really love him. Btw, he's KEVIN JONAS! Ahh! <3 A
    She put her diary away and sat up in her bed, wondering what to do. She lay down on her bed looking up at the ceiling. The ceiling fan's air blew the light brown hair away form Ally's face. Ally started to doze off when her cell phone started vibrating. It scared Ally and she grabbed it from her nightstand. It was a text message from Kevin.
Kevin: Hey, u awake?
    Ally texted back.
Ally: Yeah, y?
    Ally started dozing again yet to hear the sound of a vibrating cell phone. Ally opened her eyes and gave out a small irritated sigh. She reached for her cell phone and saw another text message.
Kevin: Got n e plans?
Ally: No, y?
Kevin: I was wondering if u wanted 2 hang out 2day...
    Ally got the text message and thought about it. Her dad was out of town on a business trip and her mom was probably hanging out downstairs. She got dressed and brushed her hair. Ally had another text message.
Kevin: Well?
Ally: Hold on. N the process of askin my mom & getting ready.
Kevin: K
    Ally continued to brush her hair. She put her brush down and looked at herself in the mirror. She was wearing a white full button-up shirt that had a collar with a short sleeved black sweater over top and khaki capris.
    She ran downstairs to find her mom sitting at the kitchen table drinking coffee and looking for bargain in the weekend paper.
    "Mom," Ally siad trying to grasp her mom's attention. Her mom looked up.
    "Yeah?" she asked.
    "Yesterday, I met this guy named Kevin at the dance studio. He's really nice and a great gentle man. He asked me if we can hang out and maybe we can drop by so you can meet him!"
Mrs. Smith let down her coffee mug and pondered.
    "Mmm... yeah. But no fooling around." she said jokingly.
    "Mom!"
    "I know you won't disappoint me sweetie." This made Ally smile.
    "I don't even think we would kiss, but if we do I'll let you know." she said jokingly. "But right now we're just... friends."

    Mrs. Smith was okay with this. Ally leaned forward for Mrs. Smith to kiss her on the cheek. Yet something seemed to trouble Mrs. Smith.

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New Post 3/2/2008 7:49 PM
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write more soon. Will you need anyone for Nick or Joe later in the story if so I'm here  or is this just a Kevin fic. Can u please read my newest  fic when u get the chance "Yet In All That Time , You Never Left My Side"  :).


 
New Post 3/2/2008 8:08 PM
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this is really really cute! i wonder whats bothering her mom? well, i guess you'll just have to PMS!!! :)

p.s. im jealous that she gets to hang out with kevin!! ;P


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 DelaneyhasONJD wrote

write more soon. Will you need anyone for Nick or Joe later in the story if so I'm here  or is this just a Kevin fic. Can u please read my newest  fic when u get the chance "Yet In All That Time , You Never Left My Side"  :).

Hey guys! Thank you you 2 for commenting! It means a lot. Delaney, I would love to read your new FF. I can't as of right now, but when I get the chance, believe me, I will. Oh, and Delaney, Nick is open. But the thing is, I'd have to add some stuff at the last second. See, I've been writing this story for a while, and it's 12 chapters long so far. I'm not done with it though, believe me. So if you want message me and we can talk about you getting into the story. Plus, I do have another suggestion. If you want, message me at kevinjonaslove11.

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 Jordan wrote

this is really really cute! i wonder whats bothering her mom? well, i guess you'll just have to PMS!!! :)

p.s. im jealous that she gets to hang out with kevin!! ;P

Heehee, thank you. I think it's pretty cute too. You'll have to figure out later what's bothering the mother. Let me put it this way, has to do with the father.

Ha, so am I. I wish one day I could just hang out w/Kevin. But no one said I couldn't dream!

 
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