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New Post 3/2/2008 10:07 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter 2 is up!)) [Kevin FF] 

 LiveLaughLoveJoNaS wrote

 DelaneyhasONJD wrote

 

write more soon. Will you need anyone for Nick or Joe later in the story if so I'm here  or is this just a Kevin fic. Can u please read my newest  fic when u get the chance "Yet In All That Time , You Never Left My Side"  :).

 

Hey guys! Thank you you 2 for commenting! It means a lot. Delaney, I would love to read your new FF. I can't as of right now, but when I get the chance, believe me, I will. Oh, and Delaney, Nick is open. But the thing is, I'd have to add some stuff at the last second. See, I've been writing this story for a while, and it's 12 chapters long so far. I'm not done with it though, believe me. So if you want message me and we can talk about you getting into the story. Plus, I do have another suggestion. If you want, message me at kevinjonaslove11.

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New Post 3/2/2008 11:06 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter 2 is up!)) [Kevin FF] 

hahaha...exactly it never hurts to dream!! PMS!! :)

 LiveLaughLoveJoNaS wrote

 Jordan wrote

 

this is really really cute! i wonder whats bothering her mom? well, i guess you'll just have to PMS!!! :)

p.s. im jealous that she gets to hang out with kevin!! ;P

 

Heehee, thank you. I think it's pretty cute too. You'll have to figure out later what's bothering the mother. Let me put it this way, has to do with the father.

Ha, so am I. I wish one day I could just hang out w/Kevin. But no one said I couldn't dream!


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New Post 3/3/2008 7:46 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter threeeeeee))[Kevin FF] 

 

Haha, so here's Chapter 3/Part 1. I hope everyone enjoys it! It's kinda cutesy (like always). And I added in a part about the characters BFF Jill. Haha, jk. I mean BFF Daphne. Oh, and just to let you know, Daphne & Farmer's Hill [Ally's street], totally made up. :D

Comments had better drop like flies. lol. jk. But I do love comments!!!!

Oh, and, if you have anyone you know who likes reading fanfics, please let them know of mine!!!

LiveLaughLoveJoNaS

Chapter 3/Part 1

Ally: Mom said I can hang out!
Kevin: Gr8, wanna go 2 the park?
Ally: Sounds gr8!
Kevin: Directions to ur house...
Ally: Farmer's Hill, second street to ur left, third house 2 ur rite.
Kevin: K, i'll pick u up.
Ally: See u then
    Ally closed her cell phone. 10 minutes later she heard his car pull up to the driveway. She debated whether to jump up and greet Kevin, or to act like she didn't even hear the car. Before she knew it the doorbell rang. The tall handsome guy from the night before was now standing at ther door 24 hours later.
    Ally opened the door. Kevin looked amazing. He wore a white full button-up shirt with a grey and navy sweatervest and tight black pants.
    "W-wow," Ally said with her jaw to the floor.
    "You look... stunning yourself."
    "I do?"
    "Yeah."
    "Thanks."
    "Shall we get going?"
    "Yes. Bye mom!" Ally called from the doorway.
    Ally and Kevin walked out the doorway. In the car, she could see Joe and her best friend Daphne were tagging along. A few nights before Ally and Daphne had gone to a Jonas Brothers concert, where a lot had happened between Joe & Daphne that brought them together. (Long story short, Daphne loses cell phone at the concert, Joe retrieves it, calls Daphne, and they hook-up.)
    Kevin opened the passenger door for Ally.

    "Thank you," Ally said with glee. For once, she found a guy she loved.

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New Post 3/3/2008 9:09 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter threeeeeee))[Kevin FF] 

that was def. a cute chapter! cant wait to see how their date goes!! PMS! :)


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New Post 3/3/2008 9:28 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapter threeeeeee))[Kevin FF] 

 Jordan wrote

that was def. a cute chapter! cant wait to see how their date goes!! PMS! :)

Haha, yup. It's one romantic date, that's all I gotta tell you. Btw, Daphne and Joe are on a double date with Ally & Kevin. But Daphne and Joe don't really hang out with Kev & Al all the much. But you'll have to read more tomorrow. (need more posts!!!)

POSTS MAKE ME HAPPY!

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New Post 3/7/2008 3:54 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] 

This one's a little short. But you may enjoy it.

Chapter 3/Part 2

   They arrived to the park. Ally beat Kevin to opening the door. Kevin stood a little ways outside of Ally's door and shut her door after she was out.
   She smiled and said thank you.
    "I packed a few snacks in case we got hungry. But for now we can hang out and get to know each other." Kevin said reassuringly.
    "So in other words, this is a date?" Ally stated sarcastically.
    "No," Kevin replied quickly, "just hanging out! But..."
    "What?"
    "If this were a date... would you object?"
    "Fancy vocab Mr. Jonas. Let me think about it."
     Kevin was worried. He was really into Ally. Yes, it had only been a day since he met her but he felt like they really clicked.
    Kevin found a patch of grass. He laid out a blanket for him and Ally to sit on.

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Guess what?? Comments make me happy.

 
New Post 3/7/2008 8:10 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] 

*makes you happy* Post soon! its great! -Alahni

 
New Post 3/8/2008 9:32 AM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] 

 Alahni wrote

*makes you happy* Post soon! its great! -Alahni

--Thankies Alahni!!!! More to come when I get more posts!!!!

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New Post 3/8/2008 9:34 AM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] 
Modified By anonymous  on 3/8/2008 8:35:29 AM)

 N ♥ wrote

 Alahni wrote

 

*makes you happy* Post soon! its great! -Alahni

 

--Thankies Alahni!!!! More to come when I get more posts!!!!

N

Whoops. I was trying to fix that heart thing and ended up hitting the "Quote" button.

 
New Post 3/8/2008 12:44 PM
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Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] 

this is so cute!

you have mad skills, girlie!

i can't wait for more, and i'm dying to know how their "date" went.

post more soon?


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