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| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
this is so cute!
you have mad skills, girlie!
i can't wait for more, and i'm dying to know how their "date" went.
post more soon?
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Well, for my ah-mazzing readers, I just may post today!!! YAY! You're jumping up and down aren't ya? You aren't? WELL YOU SHOULD BE!
lol. You don't have to. You can stop jumping now. I SAID STOP IT!
Now, I absolutely lovvvveeeeeee my readers. They would be ChristinaLynn, Jordan, Delaney, Alahni, and Ash!!!! Thank you readers!!! I hope there are more readers to come!
Debating on whether I should post or not. I think I just might.
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i think you SHOULD!
like, right now, please?
i have to leave soon, and i want some awesome nat-fic before i do!
Mah Girlies <3
Mellers, Renneh, Stephers, Crysters, Breezy, Corinnee, Meggers, Brittanyy |
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So, many of you have been wondering, "What's gonna happen on Ally's date?". Well here you go!!!
Oh, btw, I suggest reading an FF called "Waiting" by Ashizzlebomdizzle. IT'S BRILLIANT!...
Chapter 3/Part 3
For around an hour now, Ally and Kevin were sprawled out on the blanket, getting to know each other, and munching on snacks.
"If you don't mind me asking, what is your home life like?" Kevin asked cautiously.
"Oh... uh, well..." Ally thought for a moment. "It could be worse to tell ya."
"Oh," Kevin said blankly.
"What?"
"You're just so... interesting," Ally blushed of this. Nobody has ever thought of me as interesting. Ally was starting to think. What else does he think about me? Does he like me? She was really starting to think that she loved him.
"Ally? Y'alright?" Kevin asked gently shaking Ally's shoulder.
"Huh? What? Oh, uh, yeah, I'm fine."
"Oh, you were kind of out of it for a moment."
"Sorry, I do that a lot," she said hesitantly, "Kevin?"
"Hmm?"
"May I ask you a question?"
"Sure."
Ally paused trying to turn her thoughts into words. One by one, her recent thoughts poured into sentences.
"Have you ever... well... liked or loved a girl so much that... you really thought she was the one?"
Kevin's hazel eyes widened. He wore not a scared look, yet a surprised look. It was his turn to spill his mind.
He thought. He was really thinking it was her. She wasn't the prettiest, but she was pretty. She danced so well the night before. It was an amazing talent. He felt so comfortable around her. "You know what?" He looked in the grass as if it contained answers. "I'm sitting here, hanging out with her. I met her last night. Texted her this morning, took her for a ride in my car. She looks to be the one." A smile grew shyly on his face hoping that he didn't freak out Ally.
"....Wow," Ally was speechless. Kevin Jonas had stolen her heart. Now only seemed a dream. "Honestly, thank you for that answer. I asked 'cause, you seemed to be the guy for me."
With that, they stared at each other in shock. Yesterday she met a celebrity. Yesterday he met a small town dancer.
At the same time, spontaneously, magic occurred.
Kevin and Ally sat comfortably, only inches apart. They both leaned in towards each other, their face inches away. Ally stopped and Kevin went in. Their lips locked and her arms hung around Kevin's neck. They pulled away and looked at each other both with the biggest grins.
Ally murmured, "I would not object to this date."
Ally lay closer to Kevin, both on their backs. They put their hands behind their heads and looked up at the clear blue sky, giving out a sigh.
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Did you know that comments make me happy? You did? How did you know?! Oh. I've said it a million times? I'm sure it wasn't a million. Oh, it was a million. Liar!
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| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
i think you SHOULD!
like, right now, please?
i have to leave soon, and i want some awesome nat-fic before i do!
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Aw man, I hope you didn't leave! *cries* I'll stop crying when you come back. X((
And this was like, the first best chapter!!!!! GRAWR!
Come back Ash!
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oh.
my.
wow.
that was incredible!
and sooo cute! you have amazing skills, and i can't wait for more!
and thanks for plugging my story, that was so nice of you!
Mah Girlies <3
Mellers, Renneh, Stephers, Crysters, Breezy, Corinnee, Meggers, Brittanyy |
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| Re: When You Hold Me In Your Arms ((Chapta 3/Part 2!)) [Kevin FF] |
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| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
oh.
my.
wow.
that was incredible!
and sooo cute! you have amazing skills, and i can't wait for more!
and thanks for plugging my story, that was so nice of you!
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Aw, thankies. Too bad you have to go. I'm so sad. I wanna post more for you (since you're like, the only one on && reading), but I need more comment. Who knows? I think I may just post the next chapter up here. Have you read "Wildflower" yet?
And you're soooo welcome for the "pluggin in your story" thing! It's true, your story is B-R-I-LLIANT!
So should I post Chapter 4? I'd love too!
Thank you so much. Your comments mean the muffin world to me! lolerkinz. [[And so does everyone elses!]]
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| N ♥ wrote
| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
oh.
my.
wow.
that was incredible!
and sooo cute! you have amazing skills, and i can't wait for more!
and thanks for plugging my story, that was so nice of you!
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Aw, thankies. Too bad you have to go. I'm so sad. I wanna post more for you (since you're like, the only one on && reading), but I need more comment. Who knows? I think I may just post the next chapter up here. Have you read "Wildflower" yet?
And you're soooo welcome for the "pluggin in your story" thing! It's true, your story is B-R-I-LLIANT!
So should I post Chapter 4? I'd love too!
Thank you so much. Your comments mean the muffin world to me! lolerkinz. [[And so does everyone elses!]]
--N
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haha, your comments mean a lot to me too! haha. in my fic, when you are introduced...
let's just say muffins are involved. i haven't written it yet (since it happens in a few chapters from now) but it's gonna be AWESOME!
Mah Girlies <3
Mellers, Renneh, Stephers, Crysters, Breezy, Corinnee, Meggers, Brittanyy |
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| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
| N ♥ wrote
| ashizzlebomdizzle wrote
oh.
my.
wow.
that was incredible!
and sooo cute! you have amazing skills, and i can't wait for more!
and thanks for plugging my story, that was so nice of you!
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Aw, thankies. Too bad you have to go. I'm so sad. I wanna post more for you (since you're like, the only one on && reading), but I need more comment. Who knows? I think I may just post the next chapter up here. Have you read "Wildflower" yet?
And you're soooo welcome for the "pluggin in your story" thing! It's true, your story is B-R-I-LLIANT!
So should I post Chapter 4? I'd love too!
Thank you so much. Your comments mean the muffin world to me! lolerkinz. [[And so does everyone elses!]]
--N
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haha, your comments mean a lot to me too! haha. in my fic, when you are introduced...
let's just say muffins are involved. i haven't written it yet (since it happens in a few chapters from now) but it's gonna be AWESOME!
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Haha, with your writing skilletzz, [I turned skills into a new word], my intro will be more than awesome. lolerkinz. and muffins are involved??? NO WAY!
*jumps up && down*
did you get my PM?? just curious.
gah, i'm so excited to read more of your FF! it'll be muffin/wonderful.
mm. that was lame.
should i post chapter 4? o.0
--N
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Hey there! So Ashizzlebomdizzle has encouraged me on posting Chapter 4. I'm gonna post all of it! Some of yous have a lot of FF reading to catch up on!!! XD tis' okay!
Chapter 4/Part 1
Ally and Kevin packed their things up. They folded the blanket up and threw away scraps of food. Ally walked up to Kevin.
"Wanna drop by at my house and meet my mom?" she asked.
"Uh, sure. But... Ally... do you think we're taking things too fast?"
"Well, I think that... put it this way. When you kissed me, I felt...comforable and alive. It felt great, and to tell you, it was my first kiss."
"So in short, more simple words, 'I don't think we're rushing this.'"
Ally laughed, "Yeah, I guess so."
The 2 of them had finished cleaning up the stuff from their date. Kevin let out his hand for Ally. Ally took his hand and was lead by Kevin to his car. Like a gentleman, Kevin opened the passenger door for Ally and closed it for her when she was in.
Then he got in the car and they drove to Ally's house.
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will post in 5-10 minutes
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Well I don't see any other comments, which makes me sad but...
Here's Chapter 4/Part 2!
Chapter 4/Part 2
"Mom! I'm home and I brought my friend with me!" Ally looked back at Kevin and they exchanged smiles. She took his hand and lead him into the living room. Her mom sat on a brown suede couch that was bigger than her. Her mom stood up and looked at Kevin as he let go of Ally's hand and shook her mother's.
"It's nice to meet you Mrs. Smith," Kevin greeted.
"Nice to meet you too," she said with a smile. "I hear you're a friend of Allyson's?"
"Yes ma'am."
"Hey uh, Ally, can you go check on Adam?" [Author's note: Adam is Ally's little brother]Ally knew that this was her cue.
Ally went upstairs and left her mother and Kevin to talk.
"Would you care to sit down Kevin?" Mrs. Smith asked.
"Yes, thank you."
"Please, call me Lynn," she said with a sweet smile. "Would you care to stay for dinner?"
"Oh, I need to get home soon uh... Lynn. But thank you."
"You seem like a very nice gentleman. So are you and Ally friends or..."
"Oh, well, she's a very nice girl. Right now we're friends but I was wondering if she could be my girlfriend."
Lynn was in a state of shock. She sat, thinking, Ally has never had a boyfriend. Maybe he should be her first.
"You know what? You may have my approval."
Kevin's face lit up with glee. He thanked Lynn rapidly.
"So, Kevin, is there anything you would like to know or anything you need?"
"Yeah, um, is there a Mr. Smith?"
"Oh, yeah. It's just that," she carried a troubled look,"...he's away most of the time on 'business trips'. So he doesn't see Ally or Adam a lot."
Kevin revealed a concerned look and then a sympathetic look. He thought about how when he's on tour, he got to see his dad a lot. But then he thought about how Ally was only busy with dance - which was only 1 day a week - but yet, she rarely saw her father.
Lynn's eyes started welling with tears and her jaw tightened with pain. She held back as much as she could.
Kevin hugged Ally's mother and told her he was sorry. Kevin sensed that something more was going on than just business trips. His sweet and gentle hug reminded Lynn of her husband. Her tears started to release and she found a tissue to wipe away her tears. She sniffed.
"I'm sorry," Lynn said, embarrassed.
"It's okay, I understand. But uh, look, I need to head home. I'll try to stop by tomorrow to hang out with Ally."
Kevin hugged Lynn one last time and Lynn knew he wouldn't break her daughter's heart.
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Comments are like warm fuzzies!
--N
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