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User is offline NicoleLaurenLovesJB
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Love Makes Me Blind 
Modified By NicoleLaurenLovesJB  on 3/24/2008 9:48:05 PM)

I've written a few fanfics but this is the first one i'm posting becuse personally i think it's my best one
Read and please enjoy:


Love Makes Me Blind

 
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My name is Nicole I am 16 and have blonde hair and blue eyes and about 5’ 8”. I have been friends with the Jonas’ boys since I moved to Wyckoff, New Jersey 12 years ago. I was 4 years old while Nick was 3, Joe was 6 and Kevin was 7. I was BFFs with Joe and Nick and Kevin was just a friend, more like an older brother. Then when I was 6 my parents died and I moved in with the Jonas’. 6 years later, when I was 12, I found out Joe had a crush on me from Nick. But I wasn’t into the dating thing yet, I was more of a tomboy. I think Joe eventually got over me but now it’s been 4 more years and I’ve had a crush on him for the past year but didn’t tell Joe because he’s had girlfriends and was currently dating a girl named Kailey who I didn’t really like but I just thought it was because I was jealous.

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okay yea this is posted here and on everythingjonas forum so you can read it at either one


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New Post 3/2/2008 11:29 PM
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okay first chapter:

Chapter One
I was sleeping in my bed in the room I shared with Frankie and Nick in our home in L.A.
“Nicole, wake up!” Joe called jumping on my bed.
“Ugh…. get off,” i said groggily and throwing a pillow at him and then laying back down.
“Come on Nick, we have to get her up!” Joe said
Then i felt Nick get on the bed and start jumping too
“Come on” Nick said shaking me
“Okay, okay”i said sitting up. i pulled the covers off and got up. i looked at the clock it was 5:30 in the morning. I walked across the messy room to the closet to pick out something to wear.
“Did you get all packed?” Nick asked me
“Yea” i said “but i could barely zip the suitcase”
i came out of the closet and walked over to my suitcase to pick something out to wear. I got put a pair of dark skinny jeans and a purple baby doll tee. i attempted to zip the suitcase back up while Nick and Joe just laughed
“Ugh… can one of you two help me instead of just standing there ?” i asked losing patience
They both came over knowing that if I got crabby at them in the morning i would be all day
“you just go get ready we’ll zip this sucker up for ya” Joe said
“okay” i said
and went to the bathroom across the hall that I shared with the boys which was sometimes a problem. I took a shower and got dressed, curled my hair and did my makeup. When I was finished I went back across the hall to my room where Joe and Nick still were and had woken uo Frankie
“You look nice” Joe said
“thanks” I said blushing slightly
“Nicole!!!” Frankie yelled and came running to give me a hug
“hey Frank the Tank” I said ruffling his hair
“You know I like it better when you don’t wear make up” Nick said
“yea, right” I said going over and grabbing my suitcase I brought it out to the bus going on tour again I was so excited!!

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i hope you enjoyed the first chapter, i'll probably post more tomorrow if i get at least 4 comments!!
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New Post 3/2/2008 11:37 PM
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Re: Love Makes Me Blind 

this is awesome!! i luv it!!! please post more!!! ily!!! xoxo!!!

KaYbUgGiE

i just started a ff, it is called "morals or love". ily!! xoxo!!


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New Post 3/3/2008 5:18 PM
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okay chapter two!! it's kinda short, i promise the next chapter will be longer and more exciting
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Chapter Two
I came back inside and went into the kitchen where Denise was making breakfast
“Morning” I said coming in
“oh, morning Nicole” she said “can you go tell the boys breakfast is ready?” she asked
“sure” I said. I went upstairs to the room I shared with Nick and Frankie and they were all still there
“Guys time for breakfast” I said
“okay” Nick said and they all got up and down the stairs. I went over to the next room, Joe and Kevin’s room. It was somewhat cleaner then mine. Kevin wasn’t there. Then I noticed the bathroom door was closes. I walked down the hall and knocked on the door
“Kevin! Breakfast is Ready!” I called through the door
“k” he said “I’ll be right down”
I went back downstairs where everyone else was at the table, even Garbo, Jack, John, Ryan and Kailey were there. I sat down.
“Good Morning Nicole” Garbo said (writer’s note: Garbo and Nicole used to go out and broke up but stayed friends)
“Good Morning” I said smiling. Kevin came down and sat
“You’re late” I said
“Haha” he said sarcastically “I got here like 2 seconds after you”
“so, I was on time, so then you were 2 seconds late” I said sticking my tongue out at him and he did the same to me. I smiled. After breakfast we had to do the dishes and after we got done we were ready to go! We all got on one bus, even though we had two, one for Jonas’ and me and the other for the band. All the boys and Kailey went to the back of the bus to play video games but I didn’t feel like playing video games so I stayed in the front and put in the movie “Napoleon Dynamite’


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New Post 3/3/2008 5:35 PM
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Re: Love Makes Me Blind 

This is good!! Keep writing I want to see where you're taking it.

Stupid Kailey.  I would shoot her if Joe liked me then got another girl.  >=P


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New Post 3/3/2008 7:45 PM
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i'll post more tomorrow i have to study for my A.P. European History test right now


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New Post 3/3/2008 10:01 PM
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okay i lied here's chapter three:

Chapter Three

 
A couple minutes later after the movie started Nick came up to the front and sat down next to me.
“Hey” he said
“Shh...” I said it was one of my fav. parts of the movie. After the part was over I turned to Nick
“Why aren’t you hanging the guys?” I asked
“I didn’t feel like hanging with them, I wanted to hang out with you” Nick said “why aren’t you?”
“I don’t know, don’t feel like it” I said “remember the first time we watched this movie at the theater?” I asked
“yea” he said “we thought it was the best movie ever and everyone else was like that was kinda stupid”
“Nick, stupid is a mean word” I said
“wow” he said “you watch too many movies”
“there’s no such thing as watching too many movies” I said “t.v. yes, movies no”
He just laughed
“this is definitely in my top five” I said “along with…”
“Edward Scissorhands, Pay It Forward, Juno and My Girl” Nick finished for me
“yea” I said surprised he knew that “how’d you know?”
“you’ve told me like fifty times” he said
“I have?’ I asked
“yep” he said
“hmmm, are you sure?” I asked
“yea” he said
“when?” I asked
“like when we used to lay in bed together and just talk” he said
“oh yea” I said reminiscing “we haven’t done that for a while, like a year”
“maybe we’ve been able to sleep better” he said
I snorted
“what?” he asked
“I haven’t been sleeping well at all” I said
“really? Neither have I” Nick said “I just always thought you were sleeping when I looked down from my bunk to your bed”
“nope” I said “I was probably awake and you could’ve come even if I was sleeping” I told him
“I don’t know, I thought it’d be awkward” he said
“it’s only awkward if you make it awkward” I said “but my lips hurt real bad” I recited with the movie
This time Nick snorted
“what?” I asked
“you’re talking and then all of a sudden ‘my lips hurt real bad’” he said laughing. I started laughing too.
“that’s just the way we are, totally random” I said
“especially you” he said “you’re probably the randomest person I know, besides Joe”
“Haha, Joe IS pretty random” I said “like that one time when he randomly asked ‘Do pink elephants fly?’”
Nick laughed “that… was you” he said between breaths of laughter
I thought for a sec “oh yea” I said remembering my random outburst “it was and nobody answered me”
“that’s because we were all too busy laughing” Nick said. I pouted “okay, okay, yes they do happy now?”
“I guess” I said He pushed me gently “of course I am!” I said
“good” he said “maybe you ARE the randomest person I know”
“yesss” I said
“Nicole Nick! You have to watch this!” Garbo called from the back
Nick looked at me and I looked at him
“I suppose we should” he said standing up and then pulling me up. He crouched over slightly “need a ride?” he asked
“sure” I said I got onto his back and he carried me to the back and then dropped me onto Jack, John, Ryan and Garbo who were sitting on the couch. Garbo started tickling and I fell off the couch onto the floor as Garbo continued
“stop Garbo!” I said out of breath and tears in my eyes from the laughter. I got up and Nick looked like he could fall over from laughing at me
“stop Nick” I said hitting him
“oh you’re asking for it” he said putting his fists up
“you can’t beat up a girl” I said
“I don’t see any girls” he said
“I do” I said pointing at Nick then we were on the ground wrestling as the guys went crazy. Nick put his knees on each side of me and held down my wrists
“1-2-3!! HA, Nick wins!!” Garbo said putting up Nick’s arm Nick got up then helped me up
“You guys are so immature” Kailey said
“Deal with it” I said “wait, Garbo why did we come back here?” I asked remembering
“oh, yea, Joe versus Frankie on Guitar Hero” Garbo said
“oh” I said looking at the tv seeing that Frankie was winning “aww, poor Joe is gonna get beat by a 7-year old” I said
“Am not!” Joe said. Just then the song ended and Frankie really did win
“Ha, told you!” I said
“I let him win” Joe said
“right” I said sarcastically
“you’re just asking for it” joe said putting down the guitar and putting up his fists
“I’m so scared” I said sarcastically
“Stop!” Kailey shouted getting up and standing between me and Joe “Do you guys ever like not fight?” she asked
“we aren’t really fighting. We are just pretending” I said like I was explaining it to a three year old
“I’m not 3” she said
“prove it” I said she didn’t say anything “that’s what I thought” I said and did the Jonas snap in her face
“get away from me” she whined walking over to Joe who put his arm around her waist. I felt the jealousy and anger sweep over me. They were smiling and whispering to each other
“Nicole?” nick asked “earth to Nicole” he said waving his hand in front of my face and I came back to reality
“what?” I asked turning to Nick
“nothing, just making sure you’re alive” he said
“barely” I whispered so nobody could hear me
“what?” Nick asked
”Nothing” I said. Nick raised his eyebrows
“I’m just gonna go finish watching the movie” I said

“okay” he said looking confuzzzled I went back to the front and sat on the couch consumed in what just happened. I really was jealous, I wanted Joe so bad… but I had to get rid of kailey first. I started thinking of different ways to get rid of her when the thought of Joe’s southern accent from an interview filled my mind. I smiled.

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i'll probably post chapter four tomorrow

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New Post 3/3/2008 10:44 PM
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Re: Love Makes Me Blind 

this is awesome!! post more asa!!! ily!! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE


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New Post 3/4/2008 3:23 PM
User is offline NicoleLaurenLovesJB
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Re: Love Makes Me Blind 

i'll post more later tonight!


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New Post 3/4/2008 9:00 PM
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Re: Love Makes Me Blind 
Modified By NicoleLaurenLovesJB  on 3/4/2008 9:00:32 PM)

 

okay chapter four, it's kinda short:

Chapter Four

“why’re you smiling?” Garbo asked sitting next to me
“no reason” I said ”just thought of something funny”
“what?” he asked
“umm…”
“it had something to do with Joe, didn’t it” he asked
“no” I said blushing he gave me a piercing look “okay, so it was”
“wanna be more specific?” he asked
“I guess,” I said “I was thinking of ways to get rid of Kailey and then BAM! I thought of Joe’s southern accent” I said
“hey, Nicole?” Mr. Jonas called from the front
“yea?” I asked
“can you tell the guys we’ll be stopping for lunch soon?” he asked
“yep” I said . me and Garbo got up and went to the back
“hey guys” I said they all turned to look at me “we’ll be stopping for lunch soon” I said
“sweet” Kevin said “ I’m so hungry”
“me too” Garbo said
“me three” I said
“me four!” Joe said
“you sound like you’re four” I said
“haha” he said sarcastically. Then the bus stopped and we were at Dairy Queen. We all got off the bus, went inside and ordered. I sat at a table with Nick, Garbo and Frankie. I finished eating
“I’m gonna go to the bathroom” I said standing up “be right back”
“k” they said. And went on discussing the last time we went to DQ and Garbo poured his blizzard on me. I was glad to get away from the discussion. I walked to where the bathrooms were and just as I was about to open the bathroom door I heard Kailey on her phone inside the bathroom
“I can’t believe Joe still believes I would actually go out with a guy like him” I heard her say “it’s so fun pretending to date someone rich and famous”
“well I should go, Joe will be wondering where I am, buh bye”

I stood there in shock of what I just heard, what was I going to do? Should I tell someone? And if I did tell someone, who would I tell?

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okay comments!?!? i can probably post the next chapter tomorrow!


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