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CHAPTER ONE
AFTER MADDISON STOPED LOOKING AT HER NICK JONAS POSTER FOR AN HOUR SHE WAS REALLY FUSTRADED THAT SHE STILL HASENT MET HIM YET. MOM IM GETTING ON THE COMPUTER MADDIE SAID TO LOOK AT MORE JONAS STUFF AGAIN HER MOM SAID. UH DUH I HAVE TO KNOW EVERY THING ABOUT NICK SHE SAID WHY MOM SAID CUZ WE ARE GETTING MARRIED SOMDAY DUH SHE SAID HONEY I HATE TO DISSAPOINT YOU BUT THE CHANCES OF YOU AND NICK JONAS GETTING MARIED ARE SLIM TO NONE MOM SAID WELL A GIRL CAN STILL DREAM SHE SAID . WELL EVERY DAY FOR 6 MONTHS ALL SHE DID WAS STARE INTO HER NICK POSTERS EYES AND ALWAYS DREAMED ABOUT IT . HEY KARY UM HAVE YOU CHECKED L.IVE NATION TODAY SHE SAID UM YEAH SORRY BUT STILL NO TOUR DATES FOR AROUND HERE ( THEY LIVE IN MISSISSIPPI) KARY SAID. UH HOW MUCH LONGER DO I HAVE TO LIVE IN THIS LONELY PLACE WHERE I WILL NEVER MEET THEM SHE SAID . WELL THE NEXT DAY WAS SATURDAY AND MADISON WOKE UP AND GOT ON THE COMPUTER AND WENT ON LIVE NATION TO CHECK TOUR DATES ALL OF A SUDDEN SHE SCREAMED AS LOUD AS SHE COULD HER MOM RUSHED TO HER . WHATS WRONG SWEETY MOM SAID OMJ OMJ OMJ OMJ.......... COMMENT PLZ AND ILL POST MORE!! AND BY THE WAY THIS IS MY FIRST FF SO IT MAY SUCK.
this is awesome so far!
a little tip/advice: when you have people talking make it look like this: "MOM IM GETTING ON THE COMPUTER" MADDIE SAID "TO LOOK AT MORE JONAS STUFF AGAIN" HER MOM SAID. "UH DUH I HAVE TO KNOW EVERY THING ABOUT NICK" SHE SAID "WHY" MOM SAID "CUZ WE ARE GETTING MARRIED SOMDAY DUH" SHE SAID "HONEY I HATE TO DISSAPOINT YOU BUT THE CHANCES OF YOU AND NICK JONAS GETTING MARIED ARE SLIM TO NONE"MOM SAID "WELL A GIRL CAN STILL DREAM" SHE SAID .
it's a lot easier to read. =)
POST MORE SOOON!!!
- Julia <3
awesome so far! and yeah, i agree with julias comment - it does make it easier to read. but great start girlll! pmasap.
this is awesomelicious!!! haha!! new word!! dont be jealous!!! ily!!! xoxo!!! oh yea, that minor change will make a world of difference. ily!! keep on writin!!! xoxo!!!
KaYbUgGiE
OKAY ILL HAVE A NEW CHAPTER UP TONITE!!
okie dokie. i cant wait. hey, did u ever post auditions. i kinda lost the thread after i auditioned. haha. well ily! xoxo!!
ps- go chk out my ff "morals or love"
OKAY ABOUT TO GO READ IT AND YES I POSTED THEM AND SORRY I DIDNT POST YOUR PART YET BUT YOU WILL GET YOURS SOON!!
CHAPTER TWO
"HONEY ANSWER ME ARE YOU ALRIGHT" MOM SAID "UM YES IM ALRIGHT BUT OMJ THE JONAS BROTHERS THERE, THERE, COMING HERE TO MISSISSIPPI OH MY MY MY I CANT BEILEVE THIS IS HAPPENING " MADDIE SAID " OH THATS AWESOME SWEETHEART WHEN ARE THEY COMING'' MOM SAID " THIS FRIDAY CAN I GO PLEASE, PLEASE,... AFTER AN HOUR OF PLEASES HER MOM SAID YES. (CONCER DAY) (MADDIE TALKING TO HERSELF) "OKAY MADDIE TODAY YOUR GONNA LOOK INTO NICKS EYES AND HES GONNA FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU WELL I HOPE. ( CONCERT NIGHT) " OKAY GET READY FOR THE BEST NIGHT OF YOUR LIFE...BUT MADDIE DONT GET YOUR HOPES UP ON NICK FALLING FOR YOU ITS NOT GONNA HAPPEN" MOM SAID "BUT MOM IT HAS TO HAPPEN CUZ ME AND NICK ARE JUST, JUST MENT TO BE I JUST KNOW IT OKAY'' MADDIE SAID OPENING SONG WAS YEAR 3000 ... AND AFTER 2 HOURS OF WONDERFULNESS THE CONCERT WAS OVER BUT THE MEET AND GREET WAS ABOUT TO START MADDIE COULDNT WAIT SHE HAD BROUGHT THE POSTER THAT SHE ALWAYS STARED AT LIKE 24/7 FOR THEM TO SIGN WELL FIRST IN LINE WAS JOE " WHATZ UP" JOE SAID UM WOW THIS IS SO COOL" MADDIE SAID " WHATS YOUR NAME "JOE SAID " MADISON" MADDIE SAID "OKAY TO MADISON FROM JOE THERE YOU GO BYE" JOE SAID "THANKS BYE" MADDIE SAID. NEXT IN LINE WAS KEVIN " HEY WHATS YOUR NAME" KEVIN SAID " MADISON " MADDIE SAID " OKAY TO MADISON FROM KEVIN BYE" KEVIN SAID " THANKS BYE'' MADDIE SAID NEXT IN LINE WAS HER DREAM MAN THE GUY SHES BEEN WAITING TO MEET SINCE FOREVER. "UM UH UM UH WOW " NICK SAID " UH WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY WOW" MADDIE SAID " WELL IT JUST THAT YOUR REALLY PRETTY" NICK SAID" UM WOW THANKS" MADDIE SAID " SO WHATS YOUR NAME" NICK SAID " MADISON" MADDIE SAID " MADISON I LOVE THAT NAME UM WILL YOU HAND ME YOUR PHONE" NICK SAID ' UM OKAY " MADDIE SAID WELL NICK HANDED HER HIS PHONE AND TOLD HER TO PUT HER NUMBER IN AND HE PUT HIS NUMBER IN HERS..... COMMENT PLZ AND ILL HAVE MORE UP SOON!! PLZ TELL ME IF ITS GOOD OR NOT !
AMAZIN' RAISIN.
wtf?
POST MORE NOWW!
ill have two chapters up tonite but it will be at least after 5:00!
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