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New Post 3/4/2008 12:38 PM
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Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

So, this site wouldn't let Carly post her One-Shot, so I opened the thread for her. =]

Here ya go, Carly! =]


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New Post 3/4/2008 12:45 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 
Modified By CaR<3jB  on 3/4/2008 11:47:28 AM)

*jumps up and down* THANK YOU, NIKI! you rock. =] anyways, here is my first ever one-shot, using the song "Vienna" by the Fray, so PLEASE let me know what you all think. Thanks!!!!

 

 

Vienna

[One Shot]

 

The day’s last one-way

Ticket train pulls in

We smile for the casual

Closure capturing

There goes the downpour

Here goes my fair thee well

 

 

She stood on the cobblestone sidewalk, luggage in hand. He wilted in front of her, tears streaming down his face that he prayed she couldn’t see through the rain.

 

“Goodbye, Joseph,” she whispered.

 

He faked a smile and wrapped his arms around her one last time before she stepped on the train, leaving him behind.

 

 

There’s really no way to reach me

‘Cause I’m already gone

 

 

He called her each and every night, slowly dying just to hear the sweetness in her voice. She would answer, with only a few minutes to chat. He knew those few minutes weren’t enough, but he savored every moment he had with her, ending each conversation with three short words.

 

“I love you.”

 

 

Only so many words

That we can say

Spoken upon

Long-distance melody

This is my hello

This is my goodness

 

 

She would repeat them back to him occasionally, but he got to hear them less and less when she began to stop answering his calls.

 

He tried calling her one evening, even if she could only talk for a few seconds. His heart broke when the automatic message machine replied, “That number has been disconnected.”

 

 

There’s really no way to reach me

‘Cause I’m already gone

 

 

He eventually gave up. She had forgotten, he decided, so he might as well move on with his life. His brothers were there when he needed a good cry, but nothing could compare to her gentle touch, the way her golden locks fell perfectly atop her shoulders, the calm way she slept in his arms.

 

Secretly he hoped that she would come back one day, running into his arms, apologizing for all the hurt she caused him.

 

 

Maybe in five or ten

Yours and mine will meet again

Straighten this whole thing out

Maybe then honesty need

Not be feared as a friend or an enemy

This is the distance

And this is my game face

 

 

He played show after show each evening, for his amazing fans that had been there for him through everything. He gave his all into each and every performance, still yearning to be in her presence once more.

 

He ran off stage after a show in his hometown, the energy from the crowd still running through his veins. He was just about to step onto the bus he shared with his brothers when he heard that voice, that voice he had missed for all those years.

 

“Joe?”

 

He stopped and turned around. She looked different, he thought, taking the entire of her in, but she was still the same girl he fell in love, the same girl he was still in love with.

 

Slowly, in disbelief that it was actually her, he ran into her arms. He knew it wasn’t the appropriate way to greet her, but he didn’t care. He needed to feel that soft touch, and smell that warm vanilla on her skin.

 

She resisted at first, then surrendered to his warmth, the warmth she knew she had missed, whether she would admit it or not.

 

He smiled at the fact that everything was perfect again, until she spoke.

 

As quick as she was there, she was gone again, for good, leaving him alone with his tears.

 

 

There’s really no way to reach me

Is there really no way to reach me?

Am I already gone?

 

 

. He prayed, Dear God, please help me to let go. She’s not coming back this time, and I need to let her go, no matter how difficult it is. He looked up to the sky and watched for some kind of sign that would let him know he would be okay.

 

He stood, drenched in his tears, when the rain began to pour. He spread his arms and let it fall, washing away everything from his past, especially her.

 

But no matter how he tried, he would always keep a place for her in his heart.

 

So this is your maverick

This is Vienna.

<3

 


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New Post 3/4/2008 12:50 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

that was amazing. seriously. im wow

that was..wow. i teared up :']

WRITE. MORE. NOW. &i love that songggggg.


& dont forget to
hold back your thoughts
and live like robots.



how long will i be waiting to be with you again?
03.09.07 - 03.22.08 - 08.10.08 <3
 
New Post 3/4/2008 12:56 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

wow..amazing as usual coming from you

 
New Post 3/4/2008 1:18 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

gahh thank you all SOOOO much! I really wasn't sure how this would turn out, being that it was my first fanfic. =]


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New Post 3/4/2008 1:20 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

Wow. I'm so glad I hoped you post this thread because I don't know what I would've done if I could never read that. For your first one-shot, that was amazing.

<3


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New Post 3/4/2008 1:39 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

Wowza, girl! That was amazing! Poor Joe. I feel so sorry for him. That's a beautiful song to go with an equally beautiful piece of writing.

I'm glad you posted this even though you were worried about how it would turn out. It's great. You should write more!

--Kat


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New Post 3/4/2008 1:48 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

Okay, I'm  a fan. I hope you right more soon! And if you write anything else and it's anything like this, there will be no need to worry about how it comes out. You're great! This was beauitful!


HOLLA KERNT<3

 
New Post 3/4/2008 2:06 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 
thank you guys so much! I love all of your comments, and since you are all so amazing, I may just write another one-shot...but FIRST...I will update on my Kevy fic. =]
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New Post 3/4/2008 3:19 PM
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Re: Vienna [A One-shot song fic by CaR<3jB] 

BUMP.<3


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-tswift♥

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