I have decide to have a crack at fiction writing...I am taking English Lit and Creative Expression this year so I am getting some writing in before I have to write my exams....practice makes perfect or so they so....so here is one of the stories I am working on...enjoy or not....

Not me Not I

Sommer lay on her bed, the hot breeze blowing through her open window, moving the sheer curtains lightly. Her long dark curly hair lay fanned out on her pillow behind her, as a light sheen of sweat glistened on her tanned skin. Tears seeped from under her closed lids, running silently down her face to pool on the pillow, creating a damp patch on the otherwise white background. Wiping the tears with her hands, Sommer covered her face as her sobs caught in her throat and her body convulsed with hurt and anger. The hurt was a physical pain that racked her body tearing at her heart leaving it in shreds, broken and bleeding. Rolling onto her side, Sommer pulled her knees up to her chest and wrapped her arms around them burying her head in her knees as she sobbed. She couldn’t do this, not anymore. The pain was too much, it was with her everyday and she was tired of pretending that everything was alright when her world was crashing down around her.

The opening bars of SOS rang out in her otherwise silent room…Ugh it was Nick again…she had been avoiding him for the past week and she could see his face now as she thought about the panic that would currently be running through his body. He couldn’t reach his best friend and he would be scared for her.

Nick paced up and down the aisle of the tour bus, running his hands through his curly hair as he held his phone to this ear

“Ugh come on Sommer pick up” Nick groaned

Where the hell was she…he had been calling her, texting her, e-mailing her for the past week and he hadn’t been able to get hold of her…He was starting to panic…he was scared for her…that boyfriend of hers scared him…he didn’t trust him at all

“You okay Nick?” Joe asked as Nick jumped 6ft in the air as Joe broke through his thoughts

“Ummm yeah” Nick said with a shake of his head as Joe raised his eyebrows at his younger brother

“Ok no not really” Nick said as he sank down into the couch and put his head in his hands

“What’s up” Joe asked softly sitting down next to him motioning for Kevin to turn the tv down and come join them

“It’s Sommer…I can’t get a hold of her…I haven’t heard from her in a week…and I’m really starting to worry” Nick said as he looked up at Joe

“I’m sure she’s fine Nick…she is probably just getting ready for a show or something…you know how she is…dancing 20 hours a day” Joe suggested

“No…you know even if she has a show we still talk or e-mail or text…I have heard nothing in 7 days Joe…I’m really worried…In the 7 years I have known her we have never gone a day without some contact…she’s my best friend we always…” Nick trailed off

“What do you think is up?” Kevin asked

“It’s him…it’s got to be…he’s bad news and she just can’t see it” Nick said with a shake of his head “If he has hurt her in any way…I’ll…I’ll” Nick fumed

“Sounds more like jealously little bro….when are you going to admit that you love her” Joe said with a shake of his head

“What would you know Joe…this is not about that ok…I am seriously worried…he has done something to her…I know he has” Nick spat as he jumped off the couch and paced the small room

“Whoa Nick, that was uncalled for man” Kevin said seriously

“Yeah, Joe man I’m sorry…you’re right I love her…more than I can put into words and right now I am scared *CENSORED*less…I don’t know what is going on and I am so far away…and not only can’t I get hold of her…I have rung her brother 5 times and have heard nothing from him either” Nick said as he ran his hand over his forehead

“Ok, listen Nick…we have a 2 day break…” Kevin began as Nick’s phone rang

Nick pounced on his phone and looked at the caller id…Sommer’s brother

“Hey Noah, where’s Sommer?” Nick asked as he picked up the phone

“Hi Nick…sorry I didn’t get back to you…I was trying to solve it on my own but I can’t…I need you man” Noah said quickly into the phone

“What? What’s wrong? Is Sommer ok? Where is she” Nick said in a panic his voice high and rushed

Joe and Kevin leaned forward on the couch to listen to Nick’s side of the conversation

“No Nick, she’s not ok…I don’t know what is wrong…She won’t talk to me…she won’t come out of her room…she hasn’t danced in a week” Noah explained

“What?” Nick yelled “She hasn’t danced in a week…what the hell is going on?” Nick yelled

“I don’t know Nick…I just don’t know what to do…she’s not eating and all she is doing is crying” Noah said fear evident in his voice

“Ok I’m coming…I will get dropped off at the nearest airport and I will be there as soon as I can” Nick said quickly

“Thanks Nick” Noah smiled

“Sure” Nick said as he hung up his phone and turned to his brother, tears glistening in his eyes

“What’s wrong?” Joe asked panic evident in his voice…Sommer was the little sister he never had…she was important to the Jonas family

“I don’t know…Sommer won’t come out of her room…she won’t eat and more importantly she won’t dance” Nick said as his brother’s looked at him in amazement

“I know… I am going to pack a bag…I going to her…Can you please let Mike know that I need to be dropped off at the nearest airport and can you get mum and dad...I need to talk to them” Nick said as he walked into the other room to pack his bag

“Crap” Joe said with a look at Kevin

“Come on let’s pack a bag…we are not letting him go on his own” Kevin said as he got up off the couch

Fantastic Simply Fantastic! I love the way you take time to explain things. :)

Thanks  Here's the next installment

“Sommer honey, come on please” Noah pleaded as he banged on his little sister’s bedroom door

“Noah I’m not hungry, please just leave me alone” Sommer said

“Baby girl please” Noah said as he opened the door to see his sister curled up on the bed, a pillow on her lap and dried tears stained on her cheeks

“Noah, I’m ok…really…I broke up with Mitchell…I’m just a little sad that’s all…I promise I will be ok” Sommer promised

“I don’t believe you Sommer…something happened…did he do something to you?” Noah asked walking into the room

“I’m ok…I’m just going to have a shower and wash my hair ok” Sommer told her brother

“Ok…I will leave this here…please eat” Noah pleaded as Sommer nodded at him

Noah turned and walked out, closing the door behind him as Sommer got up off the bed and staggered to her bathroom. Sommer stood in front of the mirror and stared at her reflection, her dark curly hair was matted and greasy, her once brilliant green eyes were dull and washed out and her beautiful face was puffy and tear stained. Her dull eyes glared back at her as she slowly slipped her hoodie off to reveal a mass of dark purple bruises on her shoulders, arms, wrists and stomach. Each movement sent burning pain searing through her bones. Waves of nausea rolled in her stomach as she bent over to remove her track pants and underwear to reveal more bruises.

Sommer’s eyes glistened with tears as she stared at her body in the mirror…she wanted to reach out and smash the glass…he had done this to her…the boy she trusted…the boy she once thought she may have loved…he took her trust…her love…and more importantly her ballet and she hated him. Sommer gingerly stepped into the shower and let the warm water sooth her bruised skin and aching bones.

Nick let himself into Sommer’s home and set his bag down on the floor beside the stairs before heading in the direction of the kitchen in search of Noah. Nick found him slumped over a cup of coffee at the kitchen table with his head in his hands.

“Noah” Nick said as Noah’s head shot up

“Nick thank god you’re here” Noah said jumping to his feet

“Where is she?” Nick asked fatigue evident in his chocolate coloured eyes

“In her room” Noah said as Nick turned to take the back stairs up to Sommer’s room

Nick stood at Sommer’s door breathing deeply, scared of what he would find behind the door. Turing the handle gently Nick stepped into the room to find Sommer staring out the window with her back to him. Nick stepped quickly towards her…the soft carpet masking his footfall. He gently reached out and placed his hand on her shoulder. Sommer’s body went into panic and she flinched away from his touch a scream leaving her lips.

‘Sommer” Nick said softly as her eyes widened and tears sprung in them

Sommer flung herself into Nick’s arms and buried her face into his chest, her body shaking against his as she gasped for breath as her sobs racked her skinny body. Nick scooped Sommer up into his arms and crawled onto her bed, keeping a secure hold on Sommer as he rocked her on his lap, laying kisses on her forehead. His heart beat wildly in his chest…he had never seen her like this…she was broken…what the hell had happened. Nick looked down at the girl in his arms; she had cried herself to sleep. Easing her back onto the bed, Nick stood and pulled back the covers, placing her underneath them… She must be stifling…it was 35 degrees outside and she was dressed in track pants and a hoodie. Smoothing a stray curl from her face, Nick took in the puffy, red skin around her eyes, the light bruises under her eyes from lack of sleep and crying. Fatigue hit him…he had been awake for over 24 hours and it was catching up. Sliding off his shoes and pulling his t-shirt over his head, Nick lay down on the bed next to Sommer and wrapped his arm securely around her waist before resting his head next to hers and closing his eyes to let sleep finally take over.

i like it post more soon please

wow u r a really good writer :D

not me, not i ... delta!!!!!!! i think... i remember i used to love her music..  then i heard the jonas brothers and the rest is history hehe

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