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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

Hey guyzzz its me Dusti!!!

Thank you for the comments so far!

It is making me sooo entirely happy XD

So anyways,

i only need a couple more comments, and then I will update!

So please read and comment!

and it would be even cooler if you "spread the word" about this fanfic XD

 

I'm going to go take a shower now!

crossing fingers that there will be comments when I get out!

LOVE YOU GUYS MUCHACHONESS!!!

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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

BUMMP

Come on guys where are the comments I was hoping for?

Please comment!

love yah guys muchachoness

-Dusti




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New Post 3/10/2008 12:18 AM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

Author's Note: so here's chapter 3! sorry for such the long wait, i wanted to make this chapter perrrrfecto! I really like this chapter, because you get to see all the different sides of Shanna. you get to see that shes a really fun, crazy outgoing person, but if you cross her the wrong way you may be hated forever! anywayyyys...enough talk! heres chapter 3! ENJOY!

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Chapter 3

            Anybody that thought I was a really shy, quiet, loner type of person; had obviously never gone to the mall with me. Jennifer, Madison, Lindsey and I stood out like a sore thumb more than we usually did tonight. But when you are wearing multi-colored tutus, skinny jeans, sharpie-colored converse and vans, layers of hugely beaded necklaces, awesome tees, and “rainbow” make-up, how can you NOT stand out?

            As normal, we had people giving us numerous types of looks, our favorite of them all being the, “Is-the-circus-in-town?” look. We didn’t care though. We would rather be hated for who we are than loved for whom we are not. These girls were my besties, and there was no doubt about that. We’ve known each other since we were pooping in our diapers, and have grown to love one another more and more every day.

So you have no idea how much it killed me to keep my secret from them.

We walked into Hot Topic before anything, quickly dispersing through the store to see what new amazing things they had for us to buy that day. I immediately found the coolest eye shadow and nail polish ever, while Jennifer was obsessing over the new rainbow colored Vans. Both Madison and Lindsey were chatting away with the store owners like they do every weekend. The store owner’s names were Jake and Bob. Yes, Bob. We made fun of the poor guy for weekends on end about his name, but it soon grew to become old. But, we still teased him every once in a while.

            Jennifer and I made our way over to the guys, and slammed Jenny’s pair of shoes, and my few items of neon colored make-up on the check-out counter. We both smiled big grins and said, “Yo! Yo! Yo! It’s Mr. Bobby and Jakers! What’s shakin’ bakin’?” They replied back with a roll of their eyes and a simple, “We’re in Hot Topic shoutin’ Jenn-ay-ay! Jenn-ay ay!” This was a normal routine of ours. We had little rhymes for them, and they had their own for us. Before Jake and Bob could continue on with my personal rhyme for my name, Jeremy, another employee at the store, came out and finished my name rhyme for Jake and Bob by saying, “Shanna Shannah bo bana, banana nana fo fana, me mi mo mana, SHANNA!” I smiled at his voice. Jeremy started working at Hot Topic about 2 weeks ago, and he had instantly become my favorite guy working there when I met him. With his sexy voice, nice, toned body, and amazing black, with blue streaks hair, there wasn’t anything to not love! We constantly had a flirt fest going on between us, and I could tell it annoyed the crap out of Jake and Bob, but they always forgave the two of us in the end. We were both major flirts, but we never went farther than flirting, because you can just tell that he’s a player. As I stared into his eyes, I quickly reminded myself of another ‘rule’.

Rule of Love #4: When you go to the mall, or any other public place, feel free to “shop around” for guys, but never “buy”, because they’re probably just a player or some pervert that wants to get you in bed.

(This rule I had a little bit of a personal incite on, because I met David in a Starbucks.)

            We talked to the guys for a while, just having conversations about the usual. What movie we were there to see that night, how sales are going, drama at our school, and the work life for them. We were having a really great time, until we were interrupted by someone clearing their throat.

            Knowing clumsy me, I turned around to see who it was, and I knocked into the person. It turns out he was standing right behind me and nobody bothered to warn me.
            I had accidentally knocked everything he was holding out of his arms, and I felt really bad about it. I was about to say I was sorry when he said, “Watch where you’re going you stupid hoe.”

That’s it.

All my sympathy washed away that very second.

My anger overcame me, and I snapped back at the boy, “You know, I was going to help you and tell you I was sorry, but that rude remark you just made helped change my mind.”

He looked up from where he was squatting on the floor, and his eyes met mine.

I could tell through his chocolaty brown eyes that this boy was pissed, and there was no doubt about that. I’m pretty sure my eyes were giving him the same vibe. We stared at each other for a very long time, until Jennifer broke the silence by saying, “Come on Shanna let’s go. Forget about it.”

            I was definitely not about to forget about this. This boy, whatever his *CENSORED*ing name was; was undoubtedly going on my, “most hated” list. Once people cross me the wrong way, there’s no getting out of it. You are going to be hated for the rest of your life by me.

            As we made our way out of the store, I couldn’t help but look back at the jerk and give him my evil eye. I just wanted him to suffer for calling me a hoe for me bumping into him.

            But when I turned around, instead of seeing the boy that just called me a hoe, and was extremely mean; I saw a very cute, brown, curly haired boy that looked nothing but hurt.

            In that instant, my hatred for him turned back to sympathy. He looked up at me, and he looked like he was on the verge of tears. Right then and there, I felt as if I could sense his pain and he could sense mine.

There was no doubt in my mind that I would be running into this kid again sooner than I thought.

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Author's Note: So what did ya'll think? 2 comments and you get a chapter 4!! XD i really hope ya'll liked it! I wanted to wait a while until nick came in the story, but it was driving me too crazy, so i just went ahead and have them run into eachother like this. COMMENTS MAKE ME HAPPY!




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New Post 3/10/2008 12:34 AM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

new reader!! whoop whoop!! oh yea!! omjaj!! i have a ff bout rape too, but i ended up preganet. haha. yea, well please go read it and comment. "morals or love"!! yea, well this is awesome! please post more! ily! xoxo!

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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

new reader!! whoop whoop!! oh yea!! omjaj!! i have a ff bout rape too, but i ended up preganet. haha. yea, well please go read it and comment. "morals or love"!! yea, well this is awesome! please post more! ily! xoxo!

KaYbUgGiE

lol thank you soooo muchachoness for the comment!

when i get home i think im going to read your fanfic since your reading mine XD

it willl be like...ffc4ffc (fanfic comment 4 fan fic comment) XD

well luv yah muchachoness XD

thnx again for za' commento!

-Dusti




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New Post 3/10/2008 3:19 PM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

a-freakin-mazing.

why did nick say that. im mad at him.

wooooooooo.


& dont forget to
hold back your thoughts
and live like robots.



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New Post 3/10/2008 3:23 PM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

a-freakin-mazing.

why did nick say that. im mad at him.

wooooooooo.

eeep madison!

i haven't talked to you on AIM since friday

i feeel baddddd

we should deff talk after skool today on AIM

deal?

DEAL

lol

i love your comments.

oh, and nick said that bcuz he is a BAD BAD BOY

roflmfao

chappy 4 should hopefully be up tonight.

**hint hint***

its going to be in

Nicky koo koo kins P.O.V. XD




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New Post 3/10/2008 3:24 PM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

 Dusti [ I'm burning up, for NICK JONAS ] wrote

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

 

a-freakin-mazing.

why did nick say that. im mad at him.

wooooooooo.

 

eeep madison!

i haven't talked to you on AIM since friday

i feeel baddddd

we should deff talk after skool today on AIM

deal?

DEAL

lol

i love your comments.

oh, and nick said that bcuz he is a BAD BAD BOY

roflmfao

chappy 4 should hopefully be up tonight.

**hint hint***

its going to be in

Nicky koo koo kins P.O.V. XD

well stupid mads has play rehearsal til 7. then gymnastics right after til 9.

pooooop. but tmrw!!!!!!!

go to this website in school: www.meebo.com

:]]


& dont forget to
hold back your thoughts
and live like robots.



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New Post 3/10/2008 3:27 PM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

 Dusti [ I'm burning up, for NICK JONAS ] wrote

 

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

 

a-freakin-mazing.

why did nick say that. im mad at him.

wooooooooo.

 

eeep madison!

i haven't talked to you on AIM since friday

i feeel baddddd

we should deff talk after skool today on AIM

deal?

DEAL

lol

i love your comments.

oh, and nick said that bcuz he is a BAD BAD BOY

roflmfao

chappy 4 should hopefully be up tonight.

**hint hint***

its going to be in

Nicky koo koo kins P.O.V. XD

 

well stupid mads has play rehearsal til 7. then gymnastics right after til 9.

pooooop. but tmrw!!!!!!!

go to this website in school: www.meebo.com

:]]

omj that sux buttox lol

okay then

tomorrow XD

what play are you doing?

oh, and meebo is blocked too.

yah i know

GAAAAAAAAAAY

lol




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New Post 3/10/2008 3:28 PM
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Re: The 10 Rules...Of Love (New Nick Jonas fan fic) 

 Dusti [ I'm burning up, for NICK JONAS ] wrote

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

 

 Dusti [ I'm burning up, for NICK JONAS ] wrote

 

 MADiS0N x PAiGE wrote

 

a-freakin-mazing.

why did nick say that. im mad at him.

wooooooooo.

 

eeep madison!

i haven't talked to you on AIM since friday

i feeel baddddd

we should deff talk after skool today on AIM

deal?

DEAL

lol

i love your comments.

oh, and nick said that bcuz he is a BAD BAD BOY

roflmfao

chappy 4 should hopefully be up tonight.

**hint hint***

its going to be in

Nicky koo koo kins P.O.V. XD

 

well stupid mads has play rehearsal til 7. then gymnastics right after til 9.

pooooop. but tmrw!!!!!!!

go to this website in school: www.meebo.com

:]]

 

omj that sux buttox lol

okay then

tomorrow XD

what play are you doing?

oh, and meebo is blocked too.

yah i know

GAAAAAAAAAAY

lol

HAHAHAHHAA. high school musical. remember? :] unless that wasnt you.

i think it was. blahhhh schooollllllls over


& dont forget to
hold back your thoughts
and live like robots.



how long will i be waiting to be with you again?
03.09.07 - 03.22.08 - 08.10.08 <3
 
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