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Okay so this is my first ff. Not sure if its good so I'm just gonna post a little and see what you all think! okay soo here we go!
Chapter 1
It was completly silent. All you could hear was the pitter-patter of the rain softly hitting the windom pane. She galnced quickly around the room. Ok what is taking so long! She thought. Soon after that a cold hand touched her shoulder. She quickly spun around. " AHA GOTCHA!" screamed a tall blonde behind her. "No you didn't." replied the other girl. "Oh come on Alexa, you know you were scared. ADMIT IT!" said the blond in-between laughs. "I could," replied Alexa,"but then I would have to kill you! And we don' wanna kill a nice girl like you Brit do we?" She paused looking coldly at Brit. "Well maybe in YOUR case I should." Alexa said laughing at her own joke. "Ha ha very funny. You should be a comdien!" Brit said sracasticly. "Okay can we PLUHEASE get on with this dumb letter, beacuse if I have to hear one more word about the Jonas Brothers maybe IT WOULD be best if you kill me!" Brit replied. That was one thing Alexa LOVED about Brit she told it like it was. Alexa was by now pretty used to Brit making fun of her obbession with the Jonas Brothers. It wasn't her fault Nick Joe and Kevin were PERFECT! They just are. Alexa was soon pulled out of her train of thought by a loud crash coming from dwonstairs, followed by loud foot steps. Both girls looked at each other with fearful eyes.
Okay so thats it for today! Tell me what you think. I'll try to post more tomorrow! Love Caitlin Leeann
YAY FOR NEW/FIRST FF! =]
Post more!! =]
that waz very funny =]
pms!
that was kinda spooky and eerie. but at the same time, it was soo hilarious. lol. well i cant wait for more. ily! xoxo!
KaYbUgGiE
ps~ go chk out my ff, "morals or love"
bummmmppppp!
I shall post more soon. In the meantime comments are loverly! ;]
Okay so here is your update from the day!
Chapter 2
Alexa and Brit exchanged worried glances. Alexa motioned toward the baseball bat in the corner of the room. Never in her life did Alexa think that she would be thankful for her annoying little brother's habbit of leaving his baseball stuff everywhere. Brit quickly grabbed the bat and postioned herself to attack the inturder. The girls watched silently as the firgured moved slowly up the stairs. Brit was ready to swing the bat, and Alexa ready to dash to the phone in the next room and dial 911. "Hey guys!" exclaimed a familar voice. " Oh my god! It's only Shane!" breathed Brit. Yay! It's Shane! thought Alexa. Without thinking she slightly smiled. " What are you smiling about over there?" asked Shane. "And why are you holding a bat?" he asked looking in Brit's direction."Oh well um you see. ... never mind" she said as she blushed and quickly put it back in the corner. "I heard about the whole Jo Bro letter thing and thought I would come over and supervise the letter and you know make sure it isn't to mushy or anything." he said nonchalantly. Both Alexa and Brit knew by "supervise" he meant sit on her couch watch MTV on her home theater system, and eat the entire contents of her fridge. Both girls giggled at the thought, Shane looked at them questionly then just shook his head. "Okay can we get this started before the whole neighboorhood comes over please!?" Alexa replied breaking the silence that had now fallen between the 3 of them. "I sure hope Julie doesn't get hers done first. God she wins EVERYTHING!" groaned Brit. "I thought you didn't care?" Alexa asked sarcasticly. " WELL I don't it just that..... well.... I don't KNOW! Why are you wasting TIME?!" replied Brit. Alexa and Shane both rolled their eyes. Shane knew that Brit was falling for the oldest Jonas Brother, Kevin, I mean Brit WAS his little sister. But he was surpised Alexa hadn't picked up on it yet. Shane sighed at the thought of her name. Alexa, brown haired, green - eyed Alexa.
Okay so that it for today! I will post when I get at least 5 more comments. bye!
this is really good. Cant wait for more. But the colors are really bright!
aha srry! having fun with the colors! lol and thank you!
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