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New Post 3/30/2008 1:29 PM
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Chapter 8

 

That night at the club went by perfectly, or at least that’s what Becka thought of it. To her, it was almost like a wonderful fairytale. She wore her cutest and skimpiest outfit to the club, and on stage, she danced her heart out. She twirled around the pole gracefully and seductively. The guys who were watching her hollered and whistled, throwing money at her. She smiled sweetly at each of them, though her eyes were on Derik almost the entire time. He was right beside the stage, watching her with a huge grin on his face. There was nothing more she could have asked for. She never wanted it to end.

 

Of course, her show had to come to an end as the next girl walked out on stage, but that was not near the end of the night for her. After her performance, she immediately rushed back out into the crowd of people to find Derik. She ignored all the looks and whistles that followed her as she pushed her way through. Her only goal was to find the guy she had been dancing for that night. Finally, she found him beside the bar.

 

“Hey,” she said, sitting on a stool beside him and ordering herself a drink.

 

“Hey,” he replied. He was still smiling brightly. “You were amazing tonight.”

“Thanks.” She could feel her cheeks burning, and the smile on her face was stretching from ear to ear. She had never felt so happy. The bartender returned with her drink, and she took a small sip of it. “I’m glad you were able to come.”

 

“I’m glad I came too,” he replied, and Becka just blushed even more. “How about you show me some of your dance moves on the floor?” He asked, standing up and holding out his hand.

 

“I would love to,” she replied and stood up, grabbing his hand. He dragged her out into the middle of the dance floor. The rest of the night passed by quicker then Becka had expected. They spent their time dancing, laughing, and drinking, pressed up against each other because of the huge crowd around them. But, neither of them complained. Before they knew it, it was almost 4 in the morning, and they were both exausted.

 

Derik drove Becka home, even though she had told him many times that she could take the bus, but she wasn’t complaining. Her cheeks were still flushed from all the dancing, and the car ride was quiet, but it was a comfortable quiet. She looked out the window at all the city lights and sighed happily.

 

As they got to her apartment, Derik walked her up, acting like a gentleman.

 

“I had so much fun tonight. We should do this again sometime,” Becka said, as she fumbled with her keys to open her door. She was slightly drunk, so she was having problems finding the right one.

 

“Yeah, it would be great. Or, we could –“ Derik started to say, the leaned forward and kissed Becka. She immediately responded and deepened the kiss, running her hands through his shaggy brown hair. He pushed her up against the door as she kept on fumbling with her keys, trying to open her door. She finally was able to open it and they both stumbled in to the room, still kissing, slamming the door shut behind them.

 

The next morning, Becka woke up in her room, the light shining in brightly through the window. She heard a light grunt and some shuffling beside her. She looked over to see Derik sleeping soundly beside her. She smiled as she remembered the events of the previous night. She looked back out the window and thought, You see Kathley. I don’t need to change my life. It’s perfect just the way it is.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm sorry if it took so long, and I'm sorry if this isn't the greatest chapter, but I've just been extremely busy lately and I have had absolutely no free time to work on my fanfics. I promise I'll try my hardest to update more regularly (after Kary posts her chapter, of course).

Thank you so much for all of your comments! Keep them coming!

 

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New Post 3/30/2008 1:36 PM
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Really good Mel! I'll have to start writing the next chapter now. :)




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New Post 4/3/2008 9:16 AM
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Chapter 9
 
Kathely had stayed at Kevin, Nick and Joe’s the pass couple of nights. She had to move out of her apartment. She was still making money at her job, but not enough to keep her own place. The boys had been nice enough to let her stay in their spare bedroom. They had been really nice to her over the past few months, but she was getting bigger and bigger, and she didn’t want to stay there when she actually had the baby, it would keep everyone up in the middle of the night. But that wasn’t for about 3 or 4 months from now, she was only 5 and a half months pregnant now. She woke up in her room, it wasn’t very big, but it was just the right size she found. She got changed into some maternity clothes, though she didn’t really enjoy them, then she walked out of the room. She made her way to the kitchen where she found Nick and Joe.
 
“Hey Kat.” Joe greeted her happily as he saw her walk in. “Morning.” Nick added. She took a seat on one of the chairs at the counter with them.
 
“Hey guys, where’s Kevin?” She yawned. “Still sleeping, that’s my guess.” Nick answered. It wasn’t very early, Kathley always woke up and found all three boys in the kitchen, it wasn’t really normal for Kevin to sleep in that late. But, she didn’t really care about it, he was tiered last night. They all had there breakfast and started to clean up, though Kevin was still not there.
 
“Kevin isn’t the type of guy to sleep in like this.” Nick said, looking over at the clock. “Maybe I should go wake him up or check on him.” He said getting up and leaving the kitchen to the hall. “You go do that Nick.” Joe said, putting away a few of the dishes into the dishwasher and closed it up. Nick came back after a minute or so and walked into the living, joining Joe and Kathely.
 
“He was up for a while, found him reading a book.” He said, sitting down on an armchair. “He should be down in a sec.” And as he said, Kevin did come down into the kitchen, put some bread in the toaster and jointed them in the living room, sitting down next to Kathley. “Hey.” He said. They all greeted him back and it was quiet again, no one had anything to say as they watched the TV.
 
“Ok, I got to get up.” Kathley said, lifting herself slowly off the couch with Joe and Kevin’s help. She thanked them and when to the bathroom. “Poor her, it must really suck to be in that state…” Joe said as he sat back down. He turned to Kevin. “So what were you really doing all morning?” He asked him.
 
“Reading.” Kevin replied simply, but his brothers knew he was lying. “Fine, I was only reading when you came in, Nick. I was thinking all morning.” He admitted, getting up to go prepare his toast.
 
“About?” Nick asked him, looking over his shoulder into the kitchen.
 

“Stuff, I don’t want to talk about it right now.” Kevin said before taking a bite of his toast. He didn’t enjoy lying to his brothers or anyone for that matter, but he couldn’t tell them the truth, at least not yet. He had spent all morning thinking, but not about anything that he thought they should now right now, later, but not now. How could he tell them that he was thinking about her? She was really all he could think about lately, and he just couldn’t tell his brothers or Kathley about it.

 

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New Post 4/4/2008 7:25 PM
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Ok, Mel's going to be very busy so we talked and I'll be writing the next chapter as well. She will get her two chapters in a row eventually in the future.

So, I'm starting to write the next chapter right now! (:




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New Post 4/5/2008 10:37 AM
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New Post 4/5/2008 11:29 AM
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Chapter 10
 
Kathley had spent most of the morning in the bathroom. It was sad to see her like this. She finally stopped and went to brush her teeth before leaving the bathroom. Two light taps sounded from the door. “Kat, are you ok?” Joe asked her from the other side of the door.
 
“Yeah, I’m fine. I’ll be out in a sec.” She replied.
 
“Well, not to be rude… but I kind of need to go, so…” Joe started. Kathley finished up and opened the door, letting him in as she walked out. “Thanks.” He said, and rushed in, closing the door behind him. Kat gave a little laugh, and headed down the hallway. She turned the corner and found herself face to face with Kevin.
 
“Oh, sorry Kev!” She said, taking a step back. He shook his head. “No, no, it’s my fault.” He said. Kat smiled, she didn’t know why, but she did and he did too. “This corner’s always been like this.” He said. There was a small pause.
 
“Um, I just came to tell you that the doctor’s on the phone for you.” He said, handing her the cordless phone. She thanked him, and took the phone. “Hello?” She said into the phone as Kevin stood there waiting.
 
Hello, Miss Summers? This is Dr. Adams, your test results are in. We thought we should let you know that with in a few months you’ll the proud mother of a baby…
 
“Thank you.” She said before hanging up. She turned to Kevin, lightly rubbing her stomach. “It’s going to be a girl, he said.” She smiled looking at her huge belly then up at Kevin. “That’s great news!” He exclaimed. “Why don’t you go tell Nick and Joe?” He added.
 
“Only if you come and help me tell them.” She said, looking up at him. They both went to find Joe and Nick, and told them the terrific news. “That’s great!” Nick said, Joe nodding in agreement. “What to think of naming her?” They asked.
 

Kathley gave a small sigh. “I’ve put a lot of thought into this and I’ve decided to name her… Rebecka.” She said.

Well here you go, it's short, but I hope you all like it!




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New Post 4/5/2008 1:17 PM
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*NEw REader*

INTENSE!!! wow this story is amazing

some symbolic irony there wow

this is great

now i can't wait for your other one kary lol

pasap?


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THanks!

 

Hey, I have to tell you guys about some really good FFs by my friend Mel (xxMelxx). Go check them out (:




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okie day

buuuut i still need more on yers too lol


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Of course!




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