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New Post 3/18/2008 2:39 AM
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We where apart and not so inseperable.You come back and say you'll stay,is it just words or more?(nj 

Flashback

Name:Colene many jardin

Age:15 years old

home:wyckoff ,new jersey

apearance:black hair,purple eyes

personality:outgoing,shy,smart,sporty,melodramatic,emo at times

I was fixing my hair getting ready to ride my bike to Nick's house.He called earlier for us to hang out.We've been best friends since we where 2 and now we're 10.He's been doing Broadway and I could hardly hang with him at all.He was so dedicated about it that he forgot to ask ME,his best friend,about him acting and practicallly being famous.He told me he'd ask me before he does anything but he never does.

He went out with girls even though he's only 10.Most of them where my enemies and he knew it.But he didn't know I liked him.I practically fell in love with him when we where 6.I walked in on him while he was singing in his backyard's porch.He had an amazing song and even sang another for me.Things weren't like that anymore ever since Broadway.

I brushed my hair one more time,grabbed my keys and phone and walked downstairs.I wrote a note telling my parents where I went since its 6:00 in the morning and they are still asleep.I taped it to the fridge,grabbed a chocolate milk box,and ran out.I locked the door and felt the cool breeze gently touch my skin.I went to the garage and got my blue vintage bike.I unlocked it from its hanging spot and grabbed my helmet.

I paddled out the garage and rode to Nick's house.He only lived 2 blocks away and I went there everyday.It was practically my second home.

Nick is too perfect for me to even know him.He's talented and very handsome and he doesn't even know it.He worries about the silliest stuff like his teeth and how shy he is.I laughed at that thaught.Thats why people love him of course.I was glad he's currently single.Another girl broke up with him cause he doesn't kiss,compliment,hug,and call too mich or he didn't bring enough money or chocolates.It was the same reason all the time but he does it again and again.

I was so lost in my thoghts of NIck that I almsot passed his hosue.I rode into their drive way and parked my bike.I went up their porch and knocked on their door.

I didn't hear anyone but then there was a loud THUD! in the living room.I realized I had a key to their house so I opened the door.NIck had smashed his first guitar.

"What's wrong with you!?Does this guitar mean nothing to you!?We baught this with our own money Nicholas!"I said grabbing the broken guitar.

He was crying.His eyes where red and puffy.I dropped the guitar and kneeled down beside him.

"What happened Nicholas?"I asked as I hugged him trying to get him up.

"Wanna walk to the park?This is gonna sound a bit harsh."He said seriously but in a caring way.

"ummm...alright."I said not sure what was about to happen.

We walked to the park holding hands not saying anything.When we go there we sat at the swings.

"Are you gonna tell me what's wrong now?"I asked.

"The reason I broke the guitar was because I needed to forget about you."He said not looking at me but at his shoes.

"wh-wha-why?"I asked hurt.

"be-because!"he said sobbing and angry.

"because what nicholas!"i said following his tone.

"because your not important to me!your nothing but-but-bu-but crap!ive been using you and i just felt bad for you thats why i hung out with you."he said but I knew he was lying.

"right.cause i never cared that you dated my enemies,never cared that you'd never like me,never cared that you never hung out with me,and never cared about my opinion!your not being honest nicholas and i know it!"i said letting it all out.

"wh-wha-what?what does that have to do with anything"he asked confused

"i LIKE you.scratch that i am in LOVE with you but you never noticed.we hardly hang out anymore like we did before!i miss the old you and now your dumping it all on me like i was a landfill!"i said screaming,"what's up nicholas?!"

"I'm moving."He said and started sobbing,I did too.

"where,when,why?"I asked.

"Los Angeles,tommorow,because I have a record deal."he said answering all my questions,

"bye nick."i said,if he was never gonna confess everything other than the fact of him leaving then i had to forget about him and not hear another word.

"where are you going?"he asked looking up at me as I stood up.

"home and away from you."i said.he slipped something into my hand.i ran away after that holding whatever it was in my hand.

it was a locket saying:keep in touch.sorry for not hearing you out.i'll miss you and i love you more than a friend.remember me with this.

it was a picture of me and him on top of my roof,having our first kiss.my last words to my love was"home and away from you"

~End of Flashback~

Here I was staring into his eyes once again.

"Hi"He repeated.

"Bye"I said turning around walking away.

He grabbed my elbow and made me turn towards him.He smirked.I laughed evily at his face then glared.

I hate family reunions.HE'S NOT EVEN FAMILY!WHY IS HE HERE!

we haven't talked in 5 years but I kept the locket and wore it everywhere i went even now.

he looked gorgues but I know I need to play hard to get.

"ouch'he said playfully.

"i know!OUCH!"i said stomping on his foot.

he let a breath of air escape his mouth and then closed it back again.

He looked me in the eyes and leaned in.

Everything for some reason went in slow motion.AAAAAAAH!what should I do!

SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT?I THINK THIS STORY WILL BE NICE BUT I NEED TO KNOW PEOPLE LIKE IT AND ARE READING.GIVE ME ATLEAST 1 comment!!!!



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New Post 3/18/2008 2:54 AM
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Re: We where apart and not so inseperable.You come back and say you'll stay,is it just words or more?(nj 

I REALLY like this so far!

POST MORE SOON!!!!

- Julia <3


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New Post 3/19/2008 7:45 PM
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Re: We where apart and not so inseperable.You come back and say you'll stay,is it just words or more?(nj 

yay!!!!i got one reply!im such a desprate dork.anyways,please tell me what you think,should i write ANOTHER chapter???

I couldn't move.For some reason I knew I wanted this.

He leaned it.I waited for his lips to touch mine but...they passed it.

His cheeck brushed up against mine then he leaned in over my ear.

"Yah Miss me?"He said.I felt a smirk spread accross his face.

I pushed him making him stand up straight.

"why are YOU here?Your not family?!"I said crossing my arms.

"i may not be family but I am a performer and as a preformer,I'm here to perform.Now answer my question.did yah miss me?"he asked a little hurt and hopeful.

"welll...yah.you where my best friend so of course i missed you."i said looking him in the eyes.

"correction.AM your best friend.i missed you a lot colene.did-did you keep the locket?"he asked with a warm smile.

"of course.I have it right here."I showed him the locket.

"you don't know how much this means to me."he said and hugged me.I hugged him back.

"nick.I'm sorry."i said.I've been keeping it in for 5 YEARS!

"for what?"he said letting go of me and looking confused.

"I am sorry for leaving you like that and-and for your diabetes.I'm sorry I wasn;t there when it all happened.I told myself I'd be with you all the way and...i blew it."I said trying to hold back the tears but they where falling down slowly.

"no.no.no.its my fault for TRYING to forget you.I never did and its not your fault i have diabetes.Now that we've seen each other again,you can make it up to me and re-promise yourself to do that again.i'll do the same"he said smiling at me and trying to make me calm.

"I'm so happy for you and your brothers.I think I should say hi to them properly other than just stomping away."I said with a nervous giggle.

"right."he said holding my hand.we walked back in the buffet.

Everyone was eating and having their own conversations.

My hand was trembling at the fact of meeting them all over again after what I had done and the fact that I was still in love with him.

As i aproached the table,I saw a boy.Scratch that...a man!He wasn;t part of the Jonas' but he was handsome.

As i aproached their table,he stood up and grabbed my hand.

He kissed it and said"Hey.Joe and especially Nick told me lots about you.I'm Bret.Bret Harrison."

I was smiling at him when he kissed me but when he said his name...my smile turned into a frown.

I felt a pair of jelous eyes on me but I ignored it.

Bret Harrison?That guy is an actor.I had a huge crush on him when he was on Grounded for Life but knowing I have no chance with him made me sad.He's 25 and I'm 15.Why was I even caring about this?

 

I know what your thinking...why the hell is brett here?!well,he's NIck jonas' little competition.I didn't wanna use Joe...YET.i need atleast 2 replies!!!!this chapter sucked but the whole series will be AWESOME!!!!

 



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New Post 3/19/2008 7:57 PM
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hey chickie. that totally did not sick and yea. i thought it was frickin awesome. oh yea! and hey. i know this might sound dorky and all, but do ya gots a girlie for joe?? well ily! xoxo!! post more!!

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heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
New Post 3/19/2008 9:24 PM
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Re: We where apart and not so inseperable.You come back and say you'll stay,is it just words or more?(nj 

AH! This is great (whenever I read stories about Nick and a made up character, I picture myself as the girl - so this is TERRIFIC! lol). Please post more soon!



mufasa mama
^Thank you^ Fluxthing
Nick Chick ^Thank you^ Ari
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^Thank you^ Molly

Nick Chick... Danger Girl... Mufasa Mama...
how are you supposed to choose?
Yeah, I'm indecisive...
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New Post 3/20/2008 4:06 AM
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Re: We where apart and not so inseperable.You come back and say you'll stay,is it just words or more?(nj 

ME TOO!lol.i do not have joe's girl yet but tell me if you want to be and give me your deets.

"Is there something wrong?"A little boy asked,staring up at me.

It was Frankie Jonas.

"Oh..umm.Nothing.Hey there buddy.I'm Colene.you must be Frankie Jonas."I said knealing down until I was at his level.

"Yes I am.Your the girl in the pictures Nick has in his room!Your really pretty in person.Want to be best friends?"He asked quickly while hugging me.

"Of course and thank you Frankie."I said."Pictures?Of me?On your wall?"I asked turning to face NIck.

He blushed,I laughed.I ENJOYED making him embarassed.

"How did you even get any?"I asked standing up facing him.

"Your-your parents mailed them when ever your school pictures came in."He said nervously.

"Stalker!Nah!I'm just kiddding.I have 2 posters of you and 3 of you and your brothers.I think we're even"I said cheerfully.

*cough*

I turned and faced Joe.

"joseph!I missed you Coco!"I said ,while hugging him.

"I missed you Choco!"He said in reply.

We gave each other chocolate Nicknames.

"God Joe!You need a haircut dude!"I said messing up his hair;

"Woah woah woah!The ladies likey and when did you suddenly became a surfer 'DUDE'?"he said imitating a surfer dude's voice.

"haha.I call everyone that.i guess I'm no lady cause I don't likey!"I said pinching his cheek.

I turned to Kevin."Yo!Kev-o!"

I hugged him."Is it Halloween cause you went from angry woman to surfer chick to little girl to a gangster."

"haha.very funny.well I am sorry for stepping out like that.I was just suprised to see you all here."I said now talking to the whole Jonas Table.

"Its no biggy."Mrs. JOnas said."come on sweety,sit here."She said gesturing to the seat next to Nick.

I sat down and smiled at him.He did the same.

Mrs. Jonas got another waiter to come take my order.

I ordered lasagna,mac and cheese,chicken tenders,clam chowder,beef with rice.I was SUPER hungry.

"woah!You eat a lot!fatsy!"Joe said pointig at me.

"Its not nice to point Joseph"I said mimcking Mrs. Jonas' motherly voice.

"You do it just like her!hahaha!"Mr. Jonas said.

"Oh I almost forgot.Hey  Mr. Jonas!"I said waving to him on the other side of the table.

"Hello sweety.Your as bubbly as ever hun!"he said laughing at me.

"The reason I'm eating so much is cause I was supposed to stay fit for my modeling portfolio and I lost too much pounds so I'm eating more!"I said while taking a sip from my iced tea.

"That's very intresting.You look beutiful tonight sweety.Right Nicholas?"Mrs.JOnas said,turning towards Nick.

He froze.I snapped my fingers in front of him.

"Right Nicholas?"I said batting my eye lashes.

"No."He said in a serious face.

Everyone gasped,my cheeks turned red.

"She looks stunning,gorgues,and a well fitted woman."He said smiling at me.

But of course this made me blush even MORE.

"Hey look!Colene's a tomatoe!"Frankie said while pointing a finger at me.

I made myself relax and turned back to my normal shade as everyone in the table laughed.

"So colene,is there things your into.any hobbies?"bret asked.

I almost forgot about him.The waiter brought my food ad I started mixing the lasagna.

"I write my own songs;I play guitar,drums,and piano;I take singing lessons;I like painting on canvas;in school I'm in the theatre troupe so I act in performances;I recorded a demo album;I like to write and print mini pages for a book I'm working on called "The Strangers You Can Love" about a girl who ims a boy she doesn't know and turns out to be this boy who acts and plays music.Is that clear enough?"I said quickly and then quickly stuffed pasta into my mouth.

"wow.you've got lots on your hands.so your parents pay for all that?"mrs.jonas asked.

"umm actually no.i have an art scholarship so all that painting,acting and musical stuff are free for me."I said nodding.

"thats really cool!did you know Nick wrote a song for you called 'Still In Love With You'?"Frankie said not really paying attention for what I said.

Nick thumped Frankie on the head and turned to me.He was 45 shades of red.

"really!?I loved that song so much.Who knew it was for me?1"I said smiling at him.

everyone raised their hand,everyone at the table.

"i wasn't really asking.you know..."i said.

"do you want to go out?like just walk around.before all the dancing and before I have t perform?do you wanna walk?"Nick asked standing up.

He held his hand in front of him.

I grabbed it and we both went for a walk outside.I didn't finish eating but a walk.alone?with nick?how could I say no to that?

We went outside of the hotel.and walked toward the rose garden.

Kinda like his song.

I started laughing.I was really random.

"What's so funny?"he asked looking confused.

"Yah know!'I've been making lots of plans like picket fence and a rose garden'?i said sining part of Just Friend's chorus.

He chuckled a little bit.

"Is there something wrong nicholas?"I asked picking up his chin for him to face me.

"do you want the truth?"he asked

"yah sure."I said.

"but we BOTH have to be honest and deep."He said sitting me down on one of the benches.

"okay.shoot."

"Colene,I...

 

 

CLIFFHANGER!give me atleast 3 comments for the next chappy!if u want to be joe's gf then tell me and ur deets.hope ya like it.this chapter also sucked.its long...SOWWY!tell me if i should continue and what ya think!



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New Post 3/20/2008 4:10 AM
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come on ppl!its been a minute since ive posted that last chapter!reply!reply!haha.im so weird.



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New Post 3/21/2008 10:13 PM
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AWESOME chapters!!

POST MORE SOON!!!

- Julia <3


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