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New Post 3/18/2008 10:09 PM
User is offline JB4ME
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Smile One Last Time For Me. 

Alright once agian i am starting a new fan fic.I hope this one is a good one because it sounds good to me right now.Hope i get some readers!So if you like it or hate it comment and tell me.

I sat there twirling the ring on my finger as i breathed.

"Danny its ok."Nick said

"No its not.I can't go up there Nick."I whispered.

"Yes you can i'm right here for you."Nick said as he grabbed my hand.

"No Nick i can't."I said as the first tear fell from my cheeck.

Nick reached up and whiped it away.But the tears kept falling then.I hadn't cried not once and now i finally was.I started shaking.

"Danielle you can do this i'm right here for you and i always will be."Nick said

And those words they hit the spot.Nick didn't mean to he didn't even know they hit the spot.

"Nick i half to go i cna't go up there and talk tell them i'm sorry."I said

Then i stood up and let go of Nick's hand.I walked down the aisle and as i walked heads turned and starred.But i didn't care i needed to get out of there.I threw open the doors of the church then i broke into a run.As i was running i kicked off my shoes i didn't care if i never found them again.I didn't care if i ran till my feet were cover in stones.I didn't care about anything except getting away from there.

I ran and ran and then i finally realized where i was.I quit running and walked inside the cemetery.I stood there at the already dug hole.I let the tears fall from my face.

"Charles Dean Green."I said

My dad.

I heard cars pulling up and i walked away from the grave and walked over by a tree i walked out of sight of everybody and sat down and cried.

"Anybody have some last words?"The pastor asked

I walked out from behind the tree.I looked at everybody and saw the looks on there faces.

"I do."I said

I walked over next to the pastor and looked at everybody i looked at Nick and he was starring at me.

"everybody probably knew my dad as the friendly neighbor the great co-worker perfect husband and loving son.Well i saw him as more my friend best friend.He always was there whenever i needed to talk to someone he even listend to the things a dad leaves to the mom.He encouraged me to do the best i could.He also got me to love running.I was like every normal girl i looked up to my dad and thought nothing could hurt him.But then he got sick.But he still said nothing could hurt him and that he would never leave me.And then he did though.I knew he would but it still left a mark.He was my life my best friend my buddy and my dad.I love him and miss him may he rest in peace."I said

I looked at everybody and everyone was crying.I walked away then i didn't want to look back because by now they were lowering the casket.

I walked out of the cemetery and started walking down the road.

"Dannie."I heard someone yell i looked over my shoulder and saw Nick running towards me.

"That was great."Nick said

I shrugged my shoulders and kept walking.

"He would have loved it.That was what he wanted."Nick siad

"You don't know that!You don't know what he would have wanted!"I yelled at Nick

He looked at me then he turned and walked away.I couldn't belive i had just yelled at Nick when all he was trying to do was comfort me.

I took off running once again though i needed to get away.I ran to the park and once i was there i quit running i walked over and sat down on a swing.I sat there crying.I sat there till the sun was setting and it begin to rain.But i couldn't move i felt numb and lifeless.

I heard footsteps behind me but i couldn't move.Then a warm jacket was wrapped around me.I glanced sideways and saw Nick he had changed his clothes.Instead of his black tux he was wearing a black t-shirt and jeans.He sat down on the swing next to me.

"You going to alright."He asked me

"I don't know."I said

"We need to get you home."Nick said

"I don't want to move."I said

"Ok then."Nick said

Then he stood up i thought he was going to walk away but instead he picked me up and began to walk.He started walking towards my house.

"No i don't want to go home."I said

Then i wrapped my arms around his neck and he walked towars his house.

We got to his house and he walked in the door.His family was sitting down to dinner.

"Nick?"Denise asked

She walked out of the dinning room and saw Nick holding me in his arms.

"We have dry clothes of hers upstairs in the guest room."Denise siad

I used to be over here and stay all the time.

Nick walked upstairs with me we went into the guest room and he set me down on the bed i sat up.And Nick handed me some pajamas.I grabbed them and stood up slowly i made my way to the bathroom and got changed.I walke dout and Nick was sitting down on the bed.He looked at me and smiled.

Then he grabbed my hand and he lead me to his room.

"Lay down you need to rest."Nick said

"Ok."I mumbled.

I layed down in his bed.

Nick kissed my forehead then walked to the door.

"Don't leave me."I said

Nick walked back over to my side.I scooted over and he layed down next to me.I layed my head down on his chest and fell asleep.

 
New Post 3/18/2008 10:16 PM
User is offline kaybuggie♥jonas
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Re: Smile One Last Time For Me. 

that was awesome. omjaj. that was soo deep and so moving. the title is what really caught me. but please keep on writin this. i luv it. please n thnk u. ily! xoxo!!

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New Post 3/19/2008 9:27 PM
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Alright not many readers at the moment but i hope i'll have some soon if i'm going to post the next chapter i need at least three readers just three!So if u like the story and want it to continue then help me get three readers.

 

When i woke up Nick wasn't there anymore.I sat up and looked around the room.It was 9:00 at night.I climbed out of the bed and walked over to the mirror Nick had in his room.I pulled my hair up and walked out the door.I walked downstairs and stopped outside the door to the dinning room the whole family was sitting down and talking.

"I called Dannies mom."Nick said

"Thats good what did she say?"Denise asked

"Not much just maybe its good for Dannie to be out fo the house for awhile.And also that maybe i can finally get her to smile since the last time she smiled was Monday and now its Friday."Nick said

"Nick have you told Dannie that we are leaving tomorrow?"Joe asked

"No and i don't want to i don't want to leave her."Nick said

"Nick you have no choice its to late to back out."Kevin said

"I know but why do we half to leave now why can't it be another time a time when she dosen't need me as much?"Nick asked

"I don't know honey but i'll keep an eye on her while your gone."Denise said

"Thanks mom.Love you but i better go check on her."Nick said

I heard him push his cahir away from the table.Then i turned and ran up the stairs.I got into the room and jumped onto the bed.I layed back and closed my eyes.Then the door opened and Nick walked in.

I sat up and he smiled.

"Your awake."Nick siad

"Ya."I said

Nick came over and sat next to me.

"You ok?"Nick asked

"Not really."I siad

"I'm sorry."Nick said

"Its alright."I said

"I half to tell you something."Nick said

"What?"I asked

"I'm leaving tomorrow on tour for five months."Nick said

"Oh."I said

Then i looked down at my hands and started to cry.

"Hey why are you crying?"Nick asked

"Because everyone is leaving me."I said

"Its ok i'll be back."Nick said

"You better be."I said

Then i gave him a hug and stood up.

"Where are you going?"Nick asked

"Home."I said

"Ok i leave tomorrow morning at 8."Nick said

"Alright i'll be here to say goodbye."I said

Then i left i walked home and walked in the door my mom was sitting at the table.

"Hey."I said

"Oh hi honey."My mom said

"Hi."I said

"How are you?"My mom asked

"Fine i think i'm just going to go to bed."I said

Then i walked upstairs.

I walked into my room and layed down on my bed and fell asleep.I woke in the morning and it was 7:07.I climbed out of bed and walked into the bathroom i did my hair and put on some makeup and changed my clothes.Then i walked to Nick's.

I got there and they were all standing out front.

"Hey."I said

"Oh hey i didn't think you would be coming."Nick siad

"Ya i know sorry woke up kinda late."I said

"Dannie can i ask you something?"Nick asked

"Ya."I said

"Will you smile like one last time before i go?"Nick asked

"Nick i don't feel like it."I said

"Please i haven't seen your smile in so long and i miss it.And it hurts not seeing you smile."Nick said

"Ya well Nick i'm hurting inside here and your leaving just like he said he said he would be fine and wouldn't leave and you said you would come back and what if you don't."I siad

"I will i promise."Nick siad

"Thats a big promise."I said

"I know but your worth it."Nick said

"Thanks."I said

THen he wrapped me in a hug.

"I'll miss you."NIck siad

"I'll miss you too hurry back."I said

"I will."Nick said

Then he kissed my cheek and walked away.

                                                5months later                                    

Nick was going to be back today and i was so excited he said he had a suprise for me.

I was getting ready i left my hair down and did my makeup i put on a jean skirt and a red t-shirt and i put on some red flip flops.I walked out of my room and went out to my car.I was drivinig to the airport to meet up with the boys.

I got to the airport and sat down and waited for them.Then i saw Joe,Kevin,and Nick.I ran over to them and gave them all a hug.

When i had finished hugging them i looked at Nick.

"So you said you ahd a suprise for me?"Nick asked

"Maybe."I said starring at my feet.

Then i looked up and smiled at him.He smiled back and started laughing.Then i blushed a little.

"I love my suprise.You have no idea how much i have missed your smile."Nick said

"You have no idea how much i have missed all of you."I said

I gave them all hugs again.

"Wait you said you had a suprise for me?"I asked

"Oh right."Nick said then he turned around and walked away then he walked back over holding hands with a girl.

"Dannie this is Mikayla."Nick said

My heart sank and my smile dissappeared.

 
New Post 3/19/2008 9:43 PM
User is offline kaybuggie♥jonas
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hey chickie! this is awesome. please post more.

dun dun dun!! drama mama!! agg. drama sucks. but JB is in this story, and pshh. there will be a happy ending. ily! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE


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New Post 3/19/2008 9:48 PM
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I am HOOKED!

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New Post 3/19/2008 10:03 PM
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WOA!

this is fr.eakin amazing.

post more.

like asap.

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New Post 3/19/2008 11:06 PM
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Ok super excited now because i have three readers so now i am going to post because i am bored.And i will keep posting with this many readers but three more would be nice.HAHA!

 

"Girlfriend."I said

"Ya."Nick said

"Well nice to meet you Michelle."I said

"Mikayla."Nick said

"Right i knew that."I said

"Are you ok?"Nick asked

"No.I mean yes,yes i'm fine."I said

I then turned and started walking towards the exit of the airport.

"Where are you going?"Nick asked

"No idea."I said

Then i walked out of the airport i got to my car and got in.I drove back to my house.But i didn't want to be there so i drove to the cemetery.

I parked my car and got out i walked over to my dad's gravestone.

"Hey daddy."I said."I know i was here early all excited about Nick being back but he brought a girl his girlfriend she's really pretty but like i don't even remember her name i was so shocked by the sudden news.I couldn't think straight and i couldn't even talk to Nick.I quickly left the airport and now everything feels weird.I don't know what to do if you were here i would though.Just help me some how."I said

Then i closed my eyes and tried to remember all my talks with my dad.Then i remember something that my dad told me.

"Just because you like a boy but he is taken it dosen't mean you don't have a chance with him.It means fight like no tomorrow to get him back.And if that dosen't work you can just kick the girls a.ss"My dad had said

I opened my eyes and laughed.My dad was right and he usually was.

I walked back over to my car and got in.I drove to Nick's house.I knocked on the door and Joe answered it.

"Oh here you are.Why did you leave the way you did when we were at the airport?"Joe asked

"Oh no reason just needed to get away."I said

"Ok."Joe said with an odd look on his face.

"Ok Joe stop looking at me like i'm crazy and let me in."I said

Joe just laughed and opened the door the rest of the way.

"Thanks."I said

"No problem."Joe said

"Ok where is everybody at?"I asked

"Well Mom is in the kitchen dad is i don't know and Nick is downstairs with his girlfriend and Kevin is with them."Joe said

"Cool."I said

I walked downstairs and saw Nick  sitting on the couch with his girlfriend(who's name i still can't remember)and Kevin was in the chair.

"Hey everyone."I said

"Oh good there you are i was wondering why you left."Nick said

"I went to see my dad."I siad

"Oh where is your dad?"Nick's girlfriend asked

everyone just starred at her.

"He's dead."I said in a snobby way.It was none of her bussiness and she should have asked in a different way.

"Oh."She said

"Ya."I Said

I walked over towards them and sat down on the couch next to Nick.

"So how was the tour?"I asked

"It was fun."Nick said

"Thats good."I said

"Ya."Nick said

Then the room was silent.

 
New Post 3/20/2008 11:04 AM
User is offline Bonnie [8.18.08]
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Loved it!

Please post more! :)


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