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New Post 3/18/2008 10:02 PM
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Choose Me. Love Me. [[ completed epilogue -6/15]] LINK UP FOR SEQUEL!! 
Modified By Kate  on 7/5/2008 8:20:18 PM)

When I had met him, I was only one out of a million. A girl who had gone to his concert, and who came to the meet and greet afterwards. There is nothing extraordinary about me. It would not be a difficult task to find a girl prettier than me, and there are plenty of people with more self-confidence, more poise than I could ever wish for. He could have almost any girl he ever wanted, so what would he want with me?

Yet, something strange--something unexplainable happened when I touched his hand. Something right, and good and wonderful. I gave him my heart when I touched his hand, and I think he gave me his.

At first it surprised me. I looked up at him shocked at the sudden burst of feeling. I had just met him, I'm not even sure if I had told him my name yet, yet something was completed in that split second. I could see by the look of surprise and confusion in his beautiful, smiling eyes that he felt it too.

In that split second of contact I had lived a million lives.

Then it was over. Another girl pushed me out of the way. I didn't even get to tell him my name. As I was pushed backwards I tried to keep my eyes on him, but before long too many people had gotten in between us. Panic washed over me. I needed to see him again. He had kept my heart with him when I left, and as I got pushed out of his life I had taken his. We were connected until the end of time, no matter how far apart we were.

 I have never felt before nor have I felt since anything even remotely close to what I felt in that split second.But if I knew only believed in one thing, it was that no person, no object, no circumstance could ever even think of stopping true love.

 

 

 


 

What do you guys think?? should i keep going? is it worth it?? comment please =]]


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New Post 3/18/2008 10:05 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

Wow! That was very nicely written! I love the line, In that split second of contact I had lived a million lives. That one really hit me for some reason.

Yeah, I think you should post more! You have a way with words.

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New Post 3/18/2008 10:15 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

hey chickie. that was amazing. it blew my mind. i think i might need some duct tape to put it back on. lol. *inside joke with my besties*. and yea. it was so awesome. perfectly perfect. nahh. that couldnt even describe that. but please continue. ily! xoxo!!

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New Post 3/18/2008 10:33 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

this is a really good start! you're ability to flow with words is really good! cant wait until you PMS!! :)


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New Post 3/18/2008 10:41 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

aww thanks!!!

I'll try and post more tommorrow if i have time.

Either that or I'll make time. lol


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