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New Post 4/16/2008 12:31 AM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) chapter 10 up! 

new readerrrr.  :]  i just caught up, and i love it!  it's adorable! 

freaking sarah ... she needs to go jump off of a cliff.

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New Post 4/16/2008 4:37 PM
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pms!!!

if only sarah knew...........lol

love it, love you!

<3 Nora

 
New Post 4/16/2008 8:29 PM
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New Post 4/17/2008 4:15 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) Chapter 11 up!!! 

 

here's chapter 11! I'm sorry it's so long, the end is my favorite personally, but I kinda felt like the beginning before the concert was necessary, even though it's kinda boring. 

hope you enjoy!

comment!

<3 Kate 

 

Chapter 11

 

“Neither a lofty degree of intelligence nor imagination nor both together go to the making of genius. Love, love, love, that is the soul of genius.”

Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

 

 

Turning off the main road, we drove down a series of dark alleyways. Finally we pulled up in front of the back door of a huge brick building.

 

          “We’re here!” Joe called in a high-pitched sing-songy voice as we all piled out of the car. Once inside the building we walked down the hallway.

 

          “ You girls will wait for the show to start in here.” Nick told us as a security guard led us into a room.

 

          “Have fun, but not too much fun without us.” Joe winked at all of us, but I think he was looking specifically Emily.

 

          “See you after the show!” Kevin told us as he and Joe began to walk away. “Have fun.” He flashed an encouraging smile at me.

 

          “Good luck!” I called to them. Emily and Sarah said something along the same lines as well.

 

Nick started backing slowly away. “Remember, the surprise.” He smiled and then turned around and ran to catch up with his brothers.

 

I smiled as I watched him walk away, excitement building up inside of me. I could see Sarah staring at me out of the corner of my eye, her gaze burning a hole in my head. I ignored her and followed Emily farther into the waiting room. It was an empty, plain room, with white walls. A lonely, black leather couch sat up against the far wall.

 

          “Sweet room. I can tell they love us.” I linked arms with Emily as we plopped down on the lone couch.

 

          “I know, isn’t it obvious?” Emily said laughing. “But oh well. The show will start in a half hour anyways, so whatever.”

 

          “This is how it always is.” Sarah told us as she sat down next to me. She seemed to be trying to surreptitiously rub her experience in our faces. Yet, even while she did it she still sounded extremely friendly.

 

          “Do you go to a lot of their shows?” Emily leaned forward, trying to see around me. This was not a good set up for conversation. I stifled a heavy sigh. Emily was asking her exactly what she wanted, so she could flaunt her relationship with the boys in our faces one more time. But Emily was just trying to be polite.

 

          “As many as I can.” She smiled and looked forward, as if reminiscing on good times. “They’re some of my best friends. I come and visit with them as often as I can, and obviously a lot of times I can meet them someplace closer when they have a show. It just works out that way, you know?”

 

          “That’s cool.” Emily smiled at me. A knowing look passed between us.

 

The rest of the time we just made small talk. Sarah’s voice continued to drip with sugary sweetness, and it continued to make me sick. I was beginning to get the vibe that she didn’t really like me either. Still both of us were polite and friendly, and anyone who didn’t know us might actually think we were friends.   

 

Finally some people came in and escorted us out into the audience. They wouldn’t let us stay backstage, but they did put us in a special section near the front. As we waited for the boys to come on, I looked around the theatre. They weren’t lying when they said it was a small show. It was a fairly small sized room, especially compared to what they had played at on their tour, full of screaming, hysterical girls. Occasionally, I would see the one guy or dad standing awkwardly still, stone-faced, forced there by his daughter or girlfriend. They stuck out like a soar thumb, and it cracked me up. Poor guys.

 

Suddenly all the girls went crazy as the lights dimmed. Emily pulled me around.

 

          “Nat, it’s starting!”

 

After about five minutes of hysterical screaming in darkness, lights began to flash and the boys came out onto the stage. We joined in the screaming, except this time it felt like my cheering meant more. The last time I had been to one of their concerts I hadn’t known them. It was different now that I did. I felt like I was more encouraging and supporting them, and that I was there for their benefit, rather than them being there for mine.

 

They began to play the familiar beginning to S.O.S and the girls around us began to jump up and down and flail around. When Nick’s voice filled the room, we all began to sing along.  The concert was much more low-key than their tour was, more singing and less entertainment, but because of popular demand Joe and Kevin had a dance-off, and Nick did his “Nick J is off the chain”. I don’t think they had planned it, but the crowd wanted it, and they were having fun. 

 

When Nick sang A Little Bit Longer he gave no speech at the beginning. All he said was, “This is for the brokenhearted out there.” When he played I could tell he was pouring his heart out onto the stage, his head bowed, leaning into every note he played. After he was done, his beautiful, intense gaze looked out into the crowd so respectfully, so humbly. I wanted to run up onto the stage and hold him close to me, to hold him and never let him go.  Kevin and Joe walked the guitars off stage and came back holding only a microphone. They sat down on the riser on stage while Nick stayed seated at the piano.

 

          “How many of you saw us on Oprah?” Nick said, adjusting the microphone. The room erupted in screams. He laughed. “Good, then you’ll know this next song.” He paused, looking thoughtfully out at the audience. “You know, when you meet someone, and in that split second they change your life forever? And you know that even though you pretend like nothing happened, you know something did and you can’t ignore it?”

 

 He began to softly play the opening of Dream Angel as he continued. “And when you’re with that person, you have so much fun, and you feel so completely--safe. Well this is for the person who makes me feel like that.” He looked over in our direction; he looked at me. I smiled at him and I could feel the tears filling my eyes. I laughed, as I tried to blink them away.  He winked at me and then began to sing.

 

…You’re my dream angel

You’re the one who

 Walks me through the night…

         

          “Oh, Nick-“ I heard Sarah’s voice. Turning, I looked at her, not really comprehending what she said. Then as soon as I looked away it hit me. I looked back at her, with my mouth wide open. She was standing with her hands over her heart, and she was crying. I crossed my hands over my chest and took a deep breath to control my growing anger.

 

She really thought it was about her.


"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." --- Mark Twain Photobucket http://www.jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/362168/scope/posts/Default.aspx
 
New Post 4/17/2008 7:06 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) Chapter 11 up!!! 

wow...can sarah get anymore full of herself? seriously....haha but its kinda funny! anyways, i LOVED the chapter and please PMS!!!!! :]


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New Post 4/17/2008 8:34 PM
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bump =]

pms.


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New Post 4/18/2008 3:52 PM
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i LOVE it!

pms

 
New Post 4/18/2008 11:59 PM
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sarah is a butt head.

 

PMS!!!!! and by soon i mean like NOW!


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New Post 4/19/2008 1:44 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) Chapter 12 up!!! 

 

Thank you guys soo much for the comments!

Here's chapter 12, hope you enjoy!

comment!

<3 Kate

 

 

Chapter 12

 

 

"The most difficult thing to explain in life is the simplest truth called love."

Ramanathan Srinivasan 

Once the concert had ended we were led back into the empty waiting room. My throat stung, raw from all the screaming. I coughed, trying to clear it, but it only made it hurt worse. Emily and Sarah plopped down on the couch, leaving room enough for me, but honestly that was the last place I wanted to be. I excused myself and went to find the bathroom. In reality I just wanted to be alone to recollect my thoughts, to calm myself down and I figured the bathroom was as good a place as any to accomplish that.

 

 I wandered down the hallway; trying my best to give the impression that I knew where I was going. I thought I remembered seeing a bathroom somewhere down that hallway. I kept on, peering into room after room, following the route we had taken to the auditorium earlier that day in hopes of running into my supposed bathroom.

         

          “There’s got to be a bathroom around here somewhere.” I muttered under my breath. “These people have to pee sometime.” With my luck in finding bathrooms, I should have never been allowed to go alone.

 

I turned down yet another long hallway with a million doors, each one containing the possibility of being my much sought-after bathroom. Finally, I decided that the bathroom was non-existent and that I might as well give up while I still knew the way back. As I turned around and began to walk back I accidentally bumped into a woman who was hurrying out of one of the rooms. She lost her grip on the multiple coffee cups in her hands, splattering the hot contents everywhere, namely on me. The hot liquid soaked through my Capri’s and shirt easily, burning my skin. Wincing I tried my best to pull away the wet fabric.

 

          “I’m so sorry!” I apologized as I hurried to help her pick up the spilt coffee cups.

 

Her gaze looked me up and down and I could see the disgust in her eyes. “I bet you are.” She didn’t seem to notice the fact that her burning hot coffee was covering my entire front. “No fans allowed back here. I suggest you leave now, unless you enjoy being arrested.”

 

          “Uh, I don’t think you understand, I-”

 

          “No, I don’t think you understand.” She folded her hands over her chest. “ I don’t want to call security, but don’t think that means I won’t.”

 

          “I think you misunderstood, I know the Jonas Brothers, Joe invited me and-”

 

Once again her nasally voice stopped me. “Oh no, not another one of these.” She rolled her eyes and took a hold of my arm. “The Jonas Brothers do not want to marry you. Why don’t you get your tweeny butt home and go bother boys you actually know.” She tried to lead me down the hall towards the exit.

 

          “No, I really know them, seriously, just ask them.” I refused to move.

 

          “Are you asking for trouble girly?” She let out a heavy sigh and began to drag me down the hall.

 

          “Let go of me!” I tried to pull out of her grasp but her spindly fingers held on. “Look, I’m Natalie! Kevin, Joe and Nick invited me to this concert. Just go ask them. If you go ask them they’ll tell you. Please!”

 

          Suddenly the woman pulled out a walkie-talkie and began to speak into it, her nails still dug into my arm. “Hey, yeah we have a resistant, potentially threatening fan here who won’t leave.”

 

Potentially threatening?  I just wanted to go to the bathroom! “What?” I cried. I couldn’t believe what was happening. “I’m sorry I ran into you, but I promise you if you just go ask-”

 

          “Save your breath, dear.” She continued to drag me behind her. Just as she was about to pull me around the corner, I saw Nick being escorted down the hallway in the opposite direction.

 

          “Nick!!” I called to him, as loud as my sore voice would allow. “Nick!!” He turned and we made eye contact just as I was pulled around the corner.

 

The lady brought me up to two men wearing black shirts with “Security” written on the back. I guessed that they worked for the theatre because they looked different from the ones who had been following the boys around. Each one took my arm and together they overcame any fight I tried to put up with ease. They led me out into the packed lobby, and told me that they “suggested I leave unless I want to get into trouble.”

 

 Before I realized what was going on I had been enveloped into the mass of girls pushing towards the merchandise table and exits.  I tried to push my way through the mess to get out of the mob of people, but there was no use, it felt like I was a fish trying to swim up stream. Finally I gave up and soon found myself outside of the theatre.  I looked down at my coffee drenched clothes and felt the mess of hair on the top of my head as I stood alone on the bustling Chicago street.


"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." --- Mark Twain Photobucket http://www.jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/362168/scope/posts/Default.aspx
 
New Post 4/19/2008 2:11 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) Chapter 12 up!!! 

1) i really don't like sarah.  at all.  she still needs to go jump off a cliff.

2) that would seriously suck to get thrown out.  i hope she gets back in!

3) this is awesome.  seriously one of my favorite fics.  you're such a good writer!

post more soon, please!









 
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