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okay, so... i just started watching the KOREAN version of my sassy girl... i only watched like ten minutes of it and i feel inlove. =) so i wanted to start a FF based on it. Im debating whether or not to put auditions. we shall see. any who , heres the prologue.
My Sassy Girl
- PROLOUGE -
The heavy grey sky hovered over the small hill. Joe stood there waiting for her next to the nig oak tree which had their names engraved in it. Exactly two years ago, She promised him that they would meet in that place today. She has yet to come. Joe stood under the same place where they burried the time capsule together. In that time capsule, contained all their tangible memories of their relationship. For hours, he stayed their reflecting on the past few years...
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OKAY so i know it needs.. A LOT of work, but eh i wanted to get the idea outta my brain. so please tell me what you think. i need some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM. tel me if i should continue or not ... be honest. =]
mucho love - Jennilyn
Aww, Poor Joe!
SHES IN THE STUPID TIME CAPSUL! DUUHH!
xP
Hhahahahaha
well,
this is AMAZING, as always! =P
PMN!
Oh, and gal for Kevin....?
and the two shot.....
ooooohhhh...i like it....i def think u should post more!!! i'm not very good at giving consrtuctive criticism, sooo...uhhh..yeah.... POST MORE!!!
(oh, is the spot for joe's girl already taken??? or are you gonna have auditions 4 that 2??)
♥♥jonas fanticcccccccccc loooves the jonas brothers sooo verrry much!!!
UH...You should definitely continue. That may have just been the prologue, but I'm already hooked!
SO, PLEASE CONTINUE!!
yep , i`ll probably post up some auditions .. after i finish watching the movie. Its on youtube if you guys wanna go watch it ..
wow, this is AMAZING so far!
POST MORE SOON!!!
- Julia <3
3/16: BEST DAY OF MY LIFE <3
Great prologue You have made me want to check out the movie. Is it going to be the same or roughly based? Cos I think it would be cool if you made it different, put in your own style =] cant wait for more =D
oh wow, this sounds SO good! i can't wait to read more!
Of course it will be diffrent =p i don`t wanna get busted for copyright infrigment.. or plagarism... which ever. LOL XD
oh yeah ROFL! i got lectured at school for plagiarism, not that i did it or anything its not my fault i speak out, ahahahaha actually maybe it is oops
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