I love it!!! Continue writing so I can write chapter 1. (from Catherine)

Yeah, I really like it.... you should post more soon, I will read and comment!!!!

Chapter 1

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I slowly peeled open my eyes. The Saturday morning sun

gleamed in my bedroom. I heard Radio Disney on the other

side of the door. Is that Lauren on the computer again? She

 always goes to this Jonas Brothers fan website while

listening to Radio Disney. (She mostly reads fan fictions.

Maybe she'll make one some day.) I walked to the door when I

 heard Lauren yelling. "OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH!

CATHERINE! GET UP! QUICKLY!" I opened the door a crack and

she instantly started yelling. " I won the contest! The contest

to win tickets to the Jonas Brothers concert!" Then I boringly

responded, "I don't care, WHAT!"  "Yeah, I have five tickets.

 I'm inviting you, Megan, and Maddy. And I wouldn't be able to

 go if I didn't invite Mom.Oh yeah, we also have backstage

passes." Annoyed I said "You could have told me this when I

was more awake.But while I'm here,what other news do you

 have?"  "You know how they had that tour around here. They

liked this state a lot. They also like quiet places.So they are

moving to this area. In our town. In White Hawk. Catherine,

 that is about a mile away and you haven't even screamed

yet." I was almost to shocked to reply to her. I somehow said,

"I'm going back to bed." I opened the door to my bedroom and

 calapsed into my bed.

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Never mind what I said earlier, I feel like posting. Please comment if you like it.- Lauren

Chapter 2: "Bonus Jonas Concert"

The night of the concert came like the blink of an eye. The only unpleasant part about it was getting the tickets and passes from Lauren. She planned to hide it where no one would go, her music drawer. It was filled with songs she wrote and it is a huge disaster. Spiders live in there, that how little she's used it. It was gross work but after 15 min. I got everything out. I was wondering why she could'nt get the tickets out so I asked, "Lauren why can't you get the tickets out?". She told me she would be to freaked out to do it herself. She really hasn't freaked out so much considering we're leaving 3 hrs. early even though it's a 1 hr. drive. We finally were able to get in the car and leave. "So, I can't wait to meet them! Did you know they're moving to Crown Point in 2 days? Maybe we'll see them around town. Maybe Nick will go to school with us Catherine!"Lauren said. My mom was annoyed. "Lauren calmed down". She turned on the radio and we heard "When You Look Me in the Eyes" starting. "Great" mom said sarcastically. Lauren and I sang at the top of our lungs to the music. Luckily we left early because we were stuck in traffic for an hour and a half. We got to the arena and in our seats just before the concert started. We all danced and sang to the music. On the very last song, Frankie, the boys' brother came out and was dancing around on stage. After the show,we met the Jonas Brothers backstage. Frankie and Madison were playing tag with Megan. Mom waited outside while Lauren and I went to meet the boys. They were really nice and fun to hang around with. "Guys, we have to pack up soon"called Mr. Jonas. "Come on girls,we have to go" mom said. We said our goodbyes and then left. 

Catherine wanted me to post this next chapter. Is any one reading this, because no one is commenting.PLEASE comment so we know if we should continue!- Lauren

Chapter 3: New Student

Madison's POV

Mommy drove me to school because I was almost late. I ran down the hall and put my stuff in my locker as they did the pledge. I got in the classroom during attendance. Strangely, they weren't doing it on the computer like always. Mrs. B. said "Noah,Madison,Ayah,Joella,Jesse....". Everyone was here. At the end she added another name. "And the new student," she gestured to the door, "Frankie". "Um,Frankie what?" she asked. He went up to her and whispered something in her ear. "Oh, just Frankie,right. Where would you like to sit?". Frankie saw me and stared. "Over there, at that table,"he said pionting to my table. She got a desk from the janitorand put it at table 5. Frankie said "Hi Maddy!". I wondered how he knew my name, so I asked. "You don't need to know," he said. Frankie stared at me at me a lot that day. At lunch, he started talking to me and at recess, he played with me. By the end of the day, we were best friends. We walked home together to my house.

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