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New Post 4/7/2008 5:30 PM
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Re: That Summer. (New FF!) 

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New Post 4/7/2008 11:37 PM
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Re: That Summer. (New FF!) 

its getting lonley :( oh well, ill post the next chapter anyways. This fanfic isnt turning out too great. it was my first one so i didnt really know what i was doing. lol oh well. i had fun writing it....

and btw it gets a lot better by like the 6th or 7th chapter. so just hang on till then!!!!

 

 

 

Chapter 4

 

“You are-…..I mean you- … and the concert, and your brothers and-.” I burst out into tears again.

There he was, Nick Jonas. For real. A person that mattered right in front on my face. I just about died. No I guess I pretty much did because when I woke up I was lying against him and his hand was on my forehead. “Well look who came back from the dead” He grinned.

“Sorry I’m just kinda well….surprised. So that isn’t really the right word. More like astounded.” My breathing was still hiccupy and short, but at least I had almost stopped crying. “How did you get here? Why are you here?”

“My Grandparents live here. And yeah, they go to this place too. We are here visiting, there is a break in the tour for like two weeks” He said.

“Well why did you follow me” I questioned him.

“I’ve been watching you all night” he said.

Uh…Why?

He seemed to know what I was going to ask. “Well you just seem different, than the people here and I could tell there was tension between you and the people you are with so when you ran away I figured-“

“You would find my behind the building crying my guts out”

He laughed.

“Why don’t we go for a walk?” He suggested

Nick helped me up off the ground. My face was still red and blochy and I pretty much looked psychotic. My eyes were red and my face was tear streaked. My hair was a big tangled mess, and my white dress was dirty and wrinkled. I did my best to straighten myself up then we started walking and talking. I pretty much told him everything, the story of my life. No one had ever listened to me in the way that he did. It was pretty much amazing. I heard a beeping noise, it was Courtney texting me. “Oh I guess they are looking for me, it’s been...2 hours!?!?! O crap they are gonna be so freakin mad!”

He laughed a little “So I guess this is goodbye?”

“Yeah” I said biting my lip. “Goodbye” I looked into his eyes for a minutes and he looked back into mine. I felt something I had never felt in my entire life. I don’t know what it was, but it was the best I had ever felt.

 

Nicks POV:

I watched as Bailey ran towards her family. They really don’t deserve her. I started thinking about everything she had told me. About Cassie, about her family, about her feelings. I don’t want her to have to go back there, I really don’t.

The car ride home seemed like forever. I just wanted to write some music and sort out my thoughts.

All night I couldn’t stop thinking about her. I really liked this girl. But I would never see her again anyway. I sighed and sat on my bed with my guitar. I should have at least given her my number! I sat up all night thinking. Finally I drifted off to sleep only to be awakened by yelling. Joe. “Shut up!” I mumbled and then went back to dreaming of me and Bailey…..

 


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New Post 4/7/2008 11:47 PM
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Re: That Summer. (New FF!) 

Wow, sorry I didn't comment earlier and such. 
This is cute. Nick looooves her! 
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New Post 4/8/2008 5:54 PM
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Re: That Summer. (New FF!) 

thank you!!!

yeah i dont really know where im going with it yet though...i kinda deleted 20 chapters than started over.

BTW im reading you FF about the girl whose dad had cancer and wrote to the JB about his daughters birthday.  ive only red the 1st chapter so far, but its really good!


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New Post 4/8/2008 7:40 PM
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Re: That Summer. (New FF!) 

 Sunnie*Soleil wrote

thank you!!!

yeah i dont really know where im going with it yet though...i kinda deleted 20 chapters than started over.

BTW im reading you FF about the girl whose dad had cancer and wrote to the JB about his daughters birthday.  ive only red the 1st chapter so far, but its really good!

Oh. Well I think you should post more soon. 
And thanks. Minus meeting the Jonas Brothers, the prologue is completely true, unfortunately, yet not. Cause I got a mysterious phone call one day, but the person never called back like they said they would. dun dun dun! haha.
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