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New Post 3/31/2008 10:53 PM
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Every Little Thing (Part Two of Three Shot) 
Modified By Nickolle  on 4/2/2008 6:35:29 PM)

Ok, heres my three shot called Every Little Thing, hope you like it!

 

Every Little Thing

 

Remedy sat on her front porch, looking at the photographs, and memories.  There was just so much there that had not been touched before.  She sifted through the photos, thinking how everything had changed.  There she was a little girl, holding Mickey Mouse’s hand, while gripping a bag of cotton candy.  She had been only a small girl of about five.  Everyone had said she had grown up for the better, yet she didn’t think so.  There in those photos, she had been loved by her parents; she had been cared for everyday, unlike now.  The person taking the pictures were usually her mom or dad, but now they wouldn’t be behind the photos, they would be in heaven smiling down from above.  The way they had subconsciously token all of the pictures, with smiles plastered on their faces, made her feel even worse.

Getting exasperated, Remedy carefully closed the book of memories, and set it to the side of her leg.  The pain was just too hard to bear, everyone was telling her that it was alright, that even though she had to live on her own and care for herself, she would be alright.  What do they know, Remedy thought, wondering how she could be able to take care of herself without her parents, a mere nineteen year old.  She knew she could manage, if she ate small amounts, went to her job and got promoted, and went to her classes at night.  Still, she was so used to being cared by someone else, yet she also knew that many other teenagers like her cared for themselves.

She felt the cold night time breeze fall across her shoulders, and then pulled the light sweater on her tighter.  The warm coffee in her hands wasn’t helping that much, except for keeping her up later to think more about her situation.  The full moon was shining, bright in the midnight sky.  The wind started to pick up, making her hair blow wildly across her porcelain face.  She looked around herself at her surroundings; the ones she had known for a long time were gone, now she was forced to move into the small two bedroom apartment in the middle of LA.  The house she had once known was gone, for someone else to take as their own.  The familiar faces around her neighborhood were gone, making her feel uncomfortable as a tall, lanky man strode up the staircase, and made his way to his room.

Remedy shook all of the dire thoughts from her head, and grabbed the silky cover of the photo album, and stood up from her position on the tiny porch of her apartment.  Her muscles ached from sitting in the uncomfortable position on the wooden porch.  Shaking the feeling from her legs, she walked swiftly back into the empty apartment.  The air was crisp and freezing, visibly saying that the heater was not on.  She set the book down deep inside the crevices of her bag, and grabbed a pair of pajamas.  The bathroom was down the hall, due to the large amount of people, everyone had to share it.  There was a women’s restroom to the right, and a men’s restroom to the left.  They both intersected and then took their separate paths.  There was a young man walking out the men’s bathroom, swiftly running the towel through his glossy brown, curly hair.  The way his hazel eyes shimmered next to his bright complexion, made Remedy’s heart stop for a few seconds.  She stopped dead in her tracks, and gapped, mouth wide open, eyes bug eyed.  He was just so beautiful, everything about him was perfect.  The small fact that she had lost feeling in her hands made her drop her bag of toiletries.  Everything went on the hard tile ground, right in front of the perfect boy who just walked out of the restroom.

He stopped dead in his tracks, and looked down on Remedy, who was trying her hardest not to hyperventilate.  Remedy’s cheeks flamed, and her ears turned a bright cherry red.  She bent down on her knees and started to force everything into her little bag, all the time her hands shaking.  The boy, who looked around her age, bent down next to her and grabbed a couple of the things she had missed.  And handed them back to her.

“Sorry about that,” the almost man said, smiling a gorgeous grin in her direction.  Just seeing him pulled on her heart strings, yet hearing his voice made her feel like she was going to faint.

“No, its ok, I am naturally clumsy,” Remedy said, forcing a smile onto her face.  She grabbed up her bag, but he stood up before she even got a chance to move.  He offered her a hand up, which she gladly took. 


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New Post 3/31/2008 11:25 PM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Three Shot) 

Bump and Comments?!


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New Post 4/1/2008 9:44 AM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Three Shot) 

I LOVE IT =D

post the next part of the three-shot like

NOW.

your writing skills are like BAM! amaaaaaaaaazing :D

 
New Post 4/1/2008 6:07 PM
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 DEEEEE♥ wrote

I LOVE IT =D

post the next part of the three-shot like

NOW.

your writing skills are like BAM! amaaaaaaaaazing :D

Haha maybe later!! Thanks!


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New Post 4/1/2008 8:38 PM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Three Shot) 

BUMP!

BUMP!

You definitely need to post more. If I know those hazel eyes and that curly brown hair, then it has to to be Kevin. Yippeee, another Kevin one-shot. I love one-shots. They are the best and you have awesome writing skills.

- VBryantKYUSA

 
New Post 4/1/2008 11:27 PM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Three Shot) 

Haha, you guessed right, couple more comments, then I will post the next part!!


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New Post 4/2/2008 6:54 PM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Three Shot) 

Bumppp!!


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New Post 4/2/2008 7:39 PM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Part Two of Three Shot) 

 

Heres Part two, hope you like it!!

 

Part Two

 

When she took his soft, big hand, feeling the warmth radiate from his hand onto hers made her almost lose her breath.  After she got on her feet, and regained her balance, she felt a little better. 

“I am really sorry about that,” the boy said, “my names Kevin.”

Putting a name to the face made Remedy feel almost excited about meeting him.

“Its fine, all of my stuff is floor proof,” Remedy said, realizing that she still was holding his hand, let go immediately, causing a small smile from Kevin, “My name is Remedy.”

“Wow, that’s a really unique name,” Kevin said, “Remedy,” he said, rolling the sound of it on his tongue. 

“Well, I’d better get going, I need to take a shower by tonight, and spilling things on the floor takes up my time,” Remedy said, a small smile spreading on her face. 

“Yea, sure, well I guess I’ll see you around sometime,” Kevin said, uttering a laugh.  Gosh, when he laughed, his features on his face sparkled, and it seemed every girl walking out the bathroom stopped dead in her tracks.  That laugh was contagious; anyone who heard it was mesmerized by him. 

“See you later,” Remedy said, lightheaded.  She waved goodbye to Kevin, and made her way to the inside of the bathroom.  Wow, was all she could think, she was a regular girl, who just met a really amazing guy.  No guy in college, or high school could compare to him. 

Work the Next Day

 

Everyone was bustling around the pool, making sweat form on the edges of Remedy’s face.  Little kids were running around on the deck, even though there were clearly may signs that said to Do Not Run On Deck.  Remedy got up from her position on the life guard chair, and blew her whistle.

“Kids, don’t run on the deck,” she yelled.  Her voice was diminishing, a side effect of all of the yelling she had to do, just not to get fired.  She sat back down on the hard, plastic chair that was set just right on the side of the pool that she could jump in at a moment’s notice. 

There were old grandparents swimming in the shallow end of the pool, trying not to get ran over by the toddlers who were aimlessly floating around on their blow up floaties.  Teenagers were doing fancy flip- turns, and watched the opposite gender swim.  The girls sat at one edge of the pool just dipping their feet into the water and smiled shyly at the boys sitting on the opposite side. 

Remedy dug into her small bag that sat on the floor, and got out her cell phone.  She’d better call her parents and tell them that she was going to be late, seeming that the place was emptying out, and afterwards she could take a nice long swim.  She felt a spot in her chest nag, and then she felt like crying.  She finally felt like crying after holding off for the five days after her parent’s death.  The realization that her parents were dead swept through her like a hurricane.  And then the tears started to roll like fat logs down her cheeks.  She gripped her stomach and rolled off to the side, the pain was setting in and nothing could make this better.  She quickly looked up and saw that the crowds had gone away, and it was just herself and the pool. 

Remedy took off her jacket and pulled off her sweats, and set them to the side of the pool.  The only thing there was her red life guard swimsuit, herself, and the pool.  She gracefully dived off the edge of the pool, and then swam towards the center.  She ripped out the elastic that was holding her hair, and let it float up around her face.  The cool, chlorine filled water felt good around her hot body.  And the way she could hear the humming of the generator next door made her feel peaceful.  She turned around from her floating position, and stood up.  After doing breast stroke all the way to the other side, she turned around, and found Kevin Jonas. 

“What are you doing here?” Remedy asked, quickly whipping the tears that were around her face, hoping to hide the evidence. 

“Just coming to the swimming pool like I always do,” Kevin replied with a soft smile, he took off his shirt, and jumped into the pool.  After swimming over to Remedy, he looked over her swim suit choice.  “So, are you the lifeguard here?”

“I think it would be apparent by my swim suit,” Remedy said with a laugh, one that sounded different than the other day.  Kevin must of realized it, because he looked at her in a strange way. 

“You sound kind of off today, and you look like you just cried,” Kevin said, taking a concerned look at her, and then brushed a stray tear off her cheek.

“Oh, it’s nothing really,” Remedy said, her voice wobbled a little bit.

“I can tell it’s something, tell me please,” Kevin said, his eyes pleading with her.  He was starting to sink in the water a little bit, so he kicked his legs a little bit so he could get lifted up more.

“Well, my parents were going to a wedding, well my cousins wedding, they were on the way there, and then a drunk driver was on the road.  He ran into my parents car, and killed them,” her voice cracked at the end of the explanation, and then she couldn’t hold it in any longer.  She bursted out with the tears, they fell down swiftly, more than before.

“Remedy, they are looking down from heaven, and want you to succeed in life, they want you to be happy, and carefree,” Kevin said, and then he came closer to her making waves gently from the crevices of his arms. 

“They are dead Kevin, I have to live by myself in that little apartment,” Remedy was breaking down little by little in front of the gorgeous boy who wanted to help. 

“You can’t feel bad for their death,” Kevin said, and finally closed the distance between their bodies, and held her in his strong arms.  He wrapped his arms around her body, and held her close, trying to close the wide gap that was in her chest.  The gap that was tearing her apart every second. 


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New Post 4/3/2008 10:01 AM
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Re: Every Little Thing (Part Two of Three Shot) 

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Gosh, is it that bad!!??


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