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New Post 4/4/2008 10:56 PM
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She's Just The Girl I'm Looking For [Chapter 12- 5/24] 
Modified By ♥Ali  on 5/24/2008 9:08:14 PM)

 

here's chapter 1 guys... hope you like it... comments would be amazing!!!
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Chapter 1

*Ali’s POV*

“Good Morning Metro Area!  This is Elle, and its FRIDAY!  You all know what that means! THE JONAS BROTHERS ARE IN TOWN!!!  That’s right girls! Your Kevin, Joe, and Nick are here for their concert tonight at the Millennium arena.  So for you lucky fans that get to go, here’s a song to jump start your day!”

I told you I made dinner plans…
For you and me and no one else…

My radio was blaring as I shot up out of bed like a rocket.
“Lexi! WAKE UP!”  I hit her with my pillow. “I’m up!  I’ve been awake all night! I couldn’t sleep cause I’m so excited!” She said grinning from ear-to-ear.

I began rummaging through my closet, trying to chose an outfit.  I looked at her, “What do you think about this?”  I held up a pair of jeans, a silky pink top and a white jacket to go over it.

She smiled, “I love it! It looks kinda like what I’m gonna wear!  Except in blue!”

When You Look Me In The Eyes
And tell me that you love me…

I smiled, “Whoops, that’s my phone! Hello? Hi Marni! Yeah, we’re getting ready now. What time do you want us to meet you there?  Spencer know? Ok, sounds good.  See you at 6!”

Soon enough we had arrived at the venue.  Screaming girls everywhere.  I looked around, “Hey Lexi… Do you think we overdressed?”  She looked at what we were both wearing and then around to the other girls, “No, just because we don’t have anything Jonas on, doesn’t mean we are overdressed.  We don’t want to look obsessed with them!”  I immediately spotted Spencer, “Hey Girl!”  She greeted Lexi and I with hugs.  Marni did the same.  We walked inside, showed them our tickets and were off to find our seats.  Lexi spoke up, “Ok guys, where do you want to meet after the show?”  Marni giggled, “How about by the bathroom?”  “I told you not to drink all that water!  Now look at you!  You have to go again don’t you?” asked Spencer swooning over her Kevin Jonas poster she just bought.

Marni spoke again, “Time go and find our lousy seats.  Who knew that the radio station would give such crappy ones as prizes?”  Lexi looked at her, “You are 6 rows from the stage on the side, quit complaining!”  “Yeah, just because you can’t stare Joe directly in his eyes doesn’t mean you have to be bitter!” I said jokingly.

We left them and I turned to Lexi, “Ok our seats are in row H seats 5 and 6.”  We headed down to the floor and took our seats.  The look in her eyes was priceless, “This is amazing! Look how close we are! How did you get these?”  I laughed, “It’s called getting up at 4am and standing in line at the box office!”  The lights went out and screams filled the arena.  I couldn’t believe this was happening.

*Nick’s POV*

“Joe, for the millionth time… GET UP!!!”  I was getting impatient with him, he always does this.  Kevin came over with his coffee, “What’s wrong bro?”  I motioned over towards Joe, sleeping like a baby, sheets pulled over his head.  “I got this…” Kevin smiled quickly.  He walked over, grabbed the end of the sheets and pulled them off the bed revealing Joe in his Barney pajamas.  He then threw me the camera and I took a picture, “This is going online if you don’t get up, Joe!”  And wouldn’t you know he jumped right up, “Good morning guys! Lovely day we’re having!”

Megan, our assistant, stuck her head in, “We’re leaving for the venue in ten minutes.  Joe better be up, because I’m not coming back here again.  Don’t make us go through another morning like yesterday.  I mean it.”  Kay came in and started bouncing on the bed I had slept in, “I’m surprised Joe got up so quick!  What’s the occasion?”  I laughed, this girl knew everything about us.  As she should, we’ve been friends since we were old enough to walk, “I’ve got blackmail material on him now.”  She grinned, “Nicely done Nicholas!  I knew you had an evil side!”  Heading towards the door I answered her, “It was all Kevin, I just went along with it.”

We got to the venue, ran through sound-check and had our meet & greet.  One thing is certain, I could never get tired of all this.  It was now time for the concert.  I walked over to my platform that would raise me up onto the stage, Kevin and Joe did the same.  Frankie came over and handed me my guitar, “Thanks Bud! You’re awesome!”  I said messing his hair up.  He shot me a smile, “Don’t mention it!”  He brought Joe his mic and Kevin his guitar and stood back to watch us go up.  He waved excitedly to us like he did every night.  It was then that I knew that I had the most amazing little brother.

Screams were erupting as the lights went out and fog spilled across the stage.  I shot Kevin and Joe a quick glance and counted off… “1…2…3…4” the band began to play as the curtain dropped to reveal thousands of fans going crazy.  And that’s when I saw her.


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New Post 4/4/2008 10:59 PM
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i <3 it can't wait for more!


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New Post 4/4/2008 11:15 PM
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<3 i love this.

post more soon please.


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New Post 4/4/2008 11:16 PM
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OMJ Girlie! tis awesomes!

and i cant wait till monday for more... yeah i said monday

because my moms boyfriend is a major Butt Face and wont let me take his computer.... el jerko is all i hafta say... grurrrrr

but yeah...

im just upset right now so im sorry my comment is like... crappy...

i loves u!

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New Post 4/5/2008 1:49 PM
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bump!!

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New Post 4/5/2008 11:21 PM
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Re: She's Just The Girl I'm Looking For [Chapter 2] 

Wow, I guess no one likes this... Is it really that bad guys???
Hopefully, maybe some of you like this next chapter... I worked hard on it.
Enjoy!!!
Let me know what you think!!!

Chapter 2

*Lexi’s POV*

I couldn’t believe how close we were.  It was like something out of a dream.  It was a few songs into the concert when I noticed Nick kept looking in our direction.  It looked like he was staring at someone near us.  “Al, switch spots with me real quick.” I asked.  She looked at me like I was nuts, “What?! NO!”  I pulled her shirt, moving her with it, “Just do it!”  After the song it became obvious.  I looked at her, “Nick is staring at you!”  All she did was laugh, “Yeah, and Joe is dating Marni.”  “Al, I’m being serious!”

She still didn’t believe me.  I texted Spencer: Nick is staring at Al.  She quickly texted back: Yeah, sure he is! Why was no one believing me? Was I even sure of what I saw?

*Nick’s POV*

We came out and I saw her.  This girl, she wasn’t like the rest.  She was dressed to kill, more beautiful than anything I have ever seen before.  Her smile was amazing.  I knew I had to meet her.  I locked eyes with her, and for the first time in a few years, I was a nervous wreck.  So nervous that I dropped my guitar pick.  Crap.

I pulled one off my mic stand and continued.  The things that this girl did to me were unexplainable.  I ran backstage during the intermission and grabbed Megan, “Hey look I need you to do me a favor.  There’s a girl in the audience I wanna meet.  She’s wearing a pink top, medium length hair, kinda curly.  8th row on my side, seat 4 or 5 I think I counted.  Will you do this for me?”  She smirked, “I’ll try my best.”

Joe ran over laughing, Kevin not far behind, “Dude you’re crushing already?”  Busted.  “I wouldn’t call it a crush man.  I’d call it love at first sight.”  Kevin looked at me, “You’ve got to show her to us when we go back out there.”  I blurted out, “Oh no you don’t, I saw her first.  Back off.”  For some reason I was becoming very territorial over this girl, I wanted no one else to have her.  Joe tried to calm me down, “Nick, she’s all yours.  We just wanted to see what she looks like.”  I nodded back, “Alright, when we go back out you and Kevin can come over to my side, and I’ll casually point to her.”  “Sounds good man” he responded heading towards the stage.

We walked back out on stage and my stomach tied itself in a million knots.  I immersed myself in everything about her.  I memorized her like a song.  What she was wearing, where she was sitting, how she seemed oblivious to all the screaming girls around her.  She was taking pictures, so I made it a point to look at her when she took one of me. 

Finally we began to play “Burnin’ Up”.  During the bridge I sang to her, Kevin and Joe had made their way over to me.  Joe threw his arm around me as I sang, “Walk in the room, all I can see is you…” and I pointed right at her and shot her a smile.  I looked at Joe afterwards, he smiled and mouthed the word, “Nice”.  Kevin glanced at me and nodded approvingly.

*Ali’s POV*

I refused to believe anything that Lexi had said.  There were thousands of girls here thinking the same thing she was.  The girl next to me was going crazy, I thought I was bad… I was nothing compared to her.  Singing at the top of her lungs during every song, bouncing up and down, it was getting annoying. 

I pulled out my camera and took some pictures.  About halfway through their new song, all three brothers were standing on Nick’s side, right in front of us.  I zoomed in as Nick sang, “Walk in the room, all I can see is you…” and he pointed in my general direction, smiling.  Joe then glanced our way, followed by Kevin.  Weird.  Then it clicked… They noticed the psycho girl next to me.  That explained everything.

After the song Lexi nudged me, “Nick totally pointed at you!”  I screamed in her ear, “He was looking at crazy girl to my right.”  She chuckled before continuing, “No my dear, He was staring at you.”  She could believe what she wanted, I knew the truth. Or so I thought.

The concert ended and a girl had made her way over to us.  She was carrying a clipboard and had on a headset.  She quickly glanced at me and Lexi questioningly before turning to maniac girl next to me, “I’m sorry to bother you, but Nick has requested that he meet you.  If you could follow me please.”  She squealed, “Are you serious?”  The young woman looked surprised, “Yes I am, your name sweetie?”  The girl smiled following behind her, “Katie”.  “Ok, Katie please follow me.”

I looked wide-eyed at Lexi, “No way.”  She looked back at me angrily, “That was supposed to be YOU.”  I rolled my eyes, “Yeah ok.”  We proceeded to walk up the steps and met up with Marni and Spencer, “Let’s go guys.  My house.  We can look at our pictures.”  We walked to the parking lot, piled into the two cars we had driven and left the venue behind.  After months of waiting, my perfect night finally came and ended, leaving me speechless.

*Nick’s POV*

I was so nervous after the concert about meeting this girl that I was pacing.  Joe and Kevin noticed and tried to comfort my nerves, “Dude sit down before you give yourself a panic attack.”  Kevin spoke up, “He’s right Nick.  Calm down, she’s just a girl.  You’ve done this plenty of times.”  But I couldn’t explain to them that she wasn’t JUST A GIRL, she was THE GIRL.  I began to grip the water bottle in my hands so tightly that I began to crush it.  There was a knock at the door and Megan walked in, “Nick, someone to see you.”  I looked up at the girl and my heart sank.  Something had gone terribly wrong.


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New Post 4/6/2008 2:31 AM
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i like it!!!

so bump <3


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New Post 4/6/2008 10:11 AM
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ahhhaahaa a.lynn. this is so cute

am i the crazy girl next to them?!?!?

sweet.

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aww poor nick! this is really good=]

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Modified By ♫♪Spence♪♫ {MD Hollywood &hearts; }  on 4/6/2008 2:35:54 PM)

another bump for ya!

<3

pms!!!


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