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New Post 4/10/2008 3:48 PM
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The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. UPDATED! 
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Chapter o1.

As told by Adelaide Bates;
I collapsed on my bed, exhausted from the intense surf session that just took place between my close mate, Jocelyn and I. Summer had officially started today. and we were finally free of all educational commitment. Jocy and I met in a line up on the eastern coast, and we've been inseperable every since.

Those off-shore waves captivated my life. I spent each and every day, sunrise to sunset, out catching them. And Jocy had always been right by my side. It wasn't until this summer that her and I decided to share this obsession with the world. We finally agreed to teach a few children the beautiful sport, for a reasonable price of course. 

Despite the sesh we just took part in, it was still fairly early, and in about thirty minutes we were suppose to meet the novice boarders down on the north shore. I shook off my aches, and shimmied on some fresh board shorts. 

Jocelyn still looked pathetic, lying on my bedroom floor panting. I giggled at her over-dramatization. 
"Alright Joce, rise and rickett!" I commanded as I reached a hand out for her.

She groaned before taking it.
"Ad, you are aware of the lack of patience we both have, savvy?"
"Yeah. Yeah. But money is money." I reminded.

Before long we were loading our boards in the back of her old pick-up truck and making our way down to a low-key beach.
Fourteenth, Fifteenth, Sixteenth, Seventeenth, I counted the streets off in my mind, up until Twenty-second. 

I walked reluctantly, bumping hips with my best friend, as we made our way off the deck to a rather busted looking bunch.
Two young girls, one much younger boy, and three suprisingly older looking blokes.

"Ello all." I greeted, stuffing the tail-end of my longboard into the sand, "My name's Adelaide."
"And I'm Jocelyn."
"We've been surfing for about thirteen years." I informed, looking to Joce for some clarification.
"This may be cliche, but why don't we go around, and say our names."

"I'm Delia." the littlest brunette said, giving a small wave. She reminded me alot of, well...me at her age.
"Brooke." the cheerful seven-year old piped. Boy was she going to be a bubbler.
"My name is Frankie." the young bloke introduced, beaming, revealing his missing tooth.
"I'm Kevin." the boy's hair was suprisingly probably one of the best do's i've ever seen.
"Yo, I'm Joe." the middle aged of the three eldest attempted to rap.
"Nick."

The last boy was peculiarly shy. I had a soft spot for his kind. I felt like they needed this more than anyone. Surfing was the perfect way to branch out, and get in touch with others.

Jocy and I spent a little one-on-one with each person, just getting to know them better.

Delia, was a sweetheart. Her pink wet-suit reminded me that even though you were out here giving it all you got, you'd still have time to do it your way. I already admired the little shelia. I knew she'd probably be the quickest learner. She was instinctive and on point.

Brooke was a delight. Her personality shone through everything.

Adorable little Frakie, would be the one to make me smile. He was cheeky, no doubt, but definitely comedic.

I'd come to realize that the last three were a popular American band. I wasn't up on all that, but it was surreal none-the-less knowing I had met a celebrity. I mean it hadn't topped meeting Kanai Baker, but I was still stoked.

The drills were the hard part. Fake paddle-outs, and running in sand probably wasn't what thet were expecting. But it was all completely necessary. Nick lagged behind in the running, and I'd often have to drop back and push him to hustle.

I couldn't even tell if he wanted to actually be there. During the paddle-out, I pulled him aside.

"What's up?" he asked, squinting his eyes from the bright sun. His curls were set perfectly atop his head, and my eyes traveled down to meet his gaze.
"Why are you here?"

Ok, so I hadn't meant for it to come out like that. But it did. As the words escaped my lips, I wanted to swallow them.

He furrowed an eyebrow, in slight offense.
"Excuse me?"
"I meant, it doesn't seem like this is what you want."
He shook his head, either at my statement, or that this truly was against his will.

"No. No. I just...you don't think this is akward? Teaching us how to surf?"
"No. Do you think this is a little groager?"
"Come again?" I laughed at his americanization.
"Weird."
"Well, I wasn't expecting people my age."
"Don't sweat it. I've seen more dreadful novies."
He arched an eyebrow.
"New kids." I giggled.
"Well lessons are almost over...." he drawled.
"Indeed they are. What are the plans for tonight?" I implied.

I had to admit, at this point, my confidence was suprising even me. But hey, this 'Nick Jonas' was a straight-golder. I was in no position to pass him up.

He chuckled warmly, and shrugged.
"I dunno. What do 'Aussies' do around here?"
"There's a bush tally tonight, down by the boardwalk. If you and your brothers are up for it."
"Bush tally?"
"A roast?"
No response.
"Campfire?"
"Oh."
"You should all head down there about seven."

He smiled at me, as if that was a response, and I jogged over to Jocelyn, who was packing the sack.
"What was that about?" she questioned.
"Just seeing why he's lagging behind. I invited him and the others to the roast tonight."
"You sure its a good idea to get snagged with the lot of him?" she cautioned.
"I know."

I girnned cheekily. Joce was right. I knew my limits. Dating a colleague was out of the question. Hanging out with him wasn't.
"He's cute though."


Summer can be so cruel...
An lovers can be so foolish.


 
New Post 4/10/2008 3:53 PM
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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

Yay! I knew this story was going to be a good idea.

I can't wait til the next chapter...Sheilas.

Ha.

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New Post 4/10/2008 3:56 PM
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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

Dana, you never fail to amaze me. This was phenomenal! Totally ace! Holey mooley, I love the Aussie slang, I can feel the whole Australian vibe, though I've never been there. Well it's my turn, isn't it? Time to get going, and I am stoked :]

Peace and love;

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New Post 4/10/2008 4:03 PM
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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

 Loes wrote

Dana, you never fail to amaze me. This was phenomenal! Totally ace! Holey mooley, I love the Aussie slang, I can feel the whole Australian vibe, though I've never been there. Well it's my turn, isn't it? Time to get going, and I am stoked :]

Peace and love;

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oh, you flatter me. 
haha. :]



 
New Post 4/10/2008 4:24 PM
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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

Loes is typing the next chappie as we speak.
words do not even begin to describe how stoked i am.

her writing is blissy.

keep rocking, reading, and commenting.
we love the feedback.

hang loose (haha)
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O&A or Dana.



 
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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

Circulating in Jocelyn’s mind;

I looked around all the new students, struggling out there during the paddle-out. Leaning against my surfboard I searched off the whole coast line. I noticed Adelaide had taken Nick aside, I wondered why. I really didn’t have too much time to ponder about that, seeing one of the eldest seemed to be a real larrikin goofing around as it seemed he was pretending to be drowning. I couldn’t help but roll my eyes as I got in the water with my board, paddling over there.

 

“You ‘right mate?” I questioned as I tugged at his hand, pulling him up.

As his head rose up from the water, he grinned foolishly. “Oh yeah, I’m fine.” He said as he climbed back up on his board, grinning in triumph.

I had to admit I was a little agitated, I didn’t really have time to deal with blokes fooling around while the other ankle biters may actually need my help.

“Alright mate, just give it another burl. You’ll do fine.” I assured him calmly, keeping my cool as he friskily nodded his head, shaking his head around so the water from his hair flew around everywhere. This bloke had spunk, though he acted like a real dill. “Burl?” Joe asked raising an eyebrow.

“Another shot, try whatever you blokes call it.” I replied with a shrug searching the rest of the waters to see how the rest of the lot were doing.

 

The sweetheart of the group, Delia seemed to be having a lot of fun as she paddled out there by herself. For a little kid like herself she was doing ace!

 

The bubbly little Brooke was truly the spirit of the group. She was swimming along side Kevin, who was helping her back on her board. At least one of these Jonas boys was putting a little effort in helping us Sheila’s out.

 

Both Adelaide and I weren’t familiar with their music, as it seemed they were very famous in the back of bourke, there in America. It was a little exciting to be teaching blokes as famous as this lot, but I wasn’t going to let my little excitement get the best of me. I had to focus, I was here to teach – not to play .. well not too much.

 

My eyes then shot towards the youngest bloke out there, who was striving to climb back onto his board but kept falling back in the water. Poor lil ankle biter. I dove in the water from my board, swiftly swimming over to him as I wrapped my arm around him firmly, placing him back on the board. “You alright ankle biter?” I asked as he appeared to be a little scared and spitting the dummy over his little slip up. “Ah don’t spit the dummy mate, this is your first burl it’ll turn out alright. Frankie looked up with a little hopeful smile etched on his face as I patted his back. “Atta boy. Now go get ‘em tiger.” I encouraged as Frankie nodded placing himself on the board, lying on his stomach as he started to paddle towards Delia, maybe the little ankle biters could teach each other something.

 

I got out of the water, packing up some of the things. “Alright mates. Time to get out now!” I called out to the water seeing heads turn around as they started to slowly, but surely paddle back to the coast. I subtly glanced over to Adelaide who seemed to be having a nice conversation with the spunky bloke. While I continued packing up the sack Adelaide jogged on over. "What was that about?" I questioned arching an eyebrow out of curiosity.
"Just seeing why he's lagging behind. I invited him and the others to the roast tonight." Adelaide replied avidly.
"You sure its a good idea to get snagged with the lot of him?" I asked vigilantly, we really weren’t supposed to be dating our students.
"I know." I heard her reply as I stood up straight, I felt a faint strain in my back from having bent over for a while. “What about that dag out there then?” Adelaide asked as she lightly elbowed me in the side. I raised an eyebrow looking out to the line-up, seeing the spunky dill chase his little brother around. “Joe?” I questioned stifling a laugh. “Well you gotta admit, we should be rapt. The view isn’t that bad.” Adelaide remarked in a hush tone as the students approached, I chuckled with a nod. “Too right, mate.” I quickly responded before turning towards the students.

 

“Right mates, not bad for a first time out there. Some of you really got some skills.” I said openly towards all of them, winking at Frankie who seemed as happy as a Larry. “Well ooroo mates. Until tomorrow.” Adelaide said with a wave. Then Joe walked on over, with a little apologetic smile etched on his face. “Uh .. look I wanna say sorry for acting like such a douche out there. I saw how you helped little Frank out there.” He started to apoligize. “I shouldn’t misuse that..” He added in a muttering tone as he looked up. “That’s alright mate, no drama. How ‘bout you come over to the bush bully tonight?” I suggested with a shrug, seeing as Adelaide invited Nick I thought I’d also invite someone. The bloke looked a little confused as he nodded. “Alright..” He responded cautiously. “It’s a campfire mate.” I clarified as he seemed to comprehend that noun. “See you at seven mate.”

 

I walked over to Adelaide who had gone over to the spot they were setting up the bush bully. “You asked him, didn’t you?” Adelaide asked with a smirk spreading across her face. I casually shrugged. “What’s the harm? He’s just another bloke.”

“A bloke we’re teaching.” Adelaide corrected.

“No drama, he’s a dill anyways.” I said shrugging as Adelaide stifled a laugh.

No time to worry about spunky blokes though, it’s time to have some harmless fun around the roast. It was going to be totally ace tonight.

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New Post 4/10/2008 4:49 PM
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oh lordy, i dig. :]

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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

I love this.

Already two chapters and the story has only been up for a jiffy. I love this, its so beaut.

That was sure a corker of a chapter and also a rip snorter. Good Onya!!

Wow, I really do feel at home with all this Aussie talk.

lol

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Re: The Only Difference Between Crowd Surfing & Actual Surfing Is The Press Coverage. LOES&DANA JOINT! 

Wow, this is awesome so far!! I'm diggin' the whole Aussie vibe. =]

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