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New Post 4/12/2008 10:12 PM
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If Only You Knew... 

tell me if you think I should keep going. I really don't know if it is any good. please comment!!

sorry it's so long....

<3 kate

prologue

 

She squinted out at the screaming crowd, trying to see through the bright lights. Her pretty green eyes held nervousness, but she masked it well. She sat down at the piano and ran her fingers over the smooth ivory keys, calming her nerves. She had already preformed a set of songs, but this one was her favorite, it was special. She was disappearing into her world. Music did that to her.

 Closing her eyes she soaked it all in, the lights the crowd, the smells, everything. This was her dream, and this was something she never wanted to forget.

Slowly she began to play and the crowd errupted in screams. Her clear, smooth voice filled the room. 

You live feeling so alone
Scared to death, all on your own
It's something you had never imagined
To be left there so empty handed
All you want to do is fall to your knees
To give up, you're running out of air to breathe

Suddenly the girls in the crowd went crazy. Their screams practically drowned out the piano as a boy with curly hair walked slowly out on stage. He began to sing as she continued to play.

Come over here, let me dry your tears
Come to me, I know you can't handle your fears
Whoever said you had to do this alone
I will be here with a hand to hold

She began to sing along with him as he walked over to the piano and sat down next to her, looking her in the eyes.

You don't always have to stand on your own
Promise me you'll never try and fight this alone
When ever you fall
And feel like you don't have any strength at all
Remember I'll always be here for you
I'll always believe in you.

Their harmony faded away as she kept singing, in her voice was full of feeling from deep inside of her.

To live is a gift they say
Cherish each moment, remember each day
If this if true, you wonder why
You're still standing, yet you still cry
Why would a gift be so full of pain
You refuse to move on, you can't stand all this rain

The boy stayed sitting next to her, his gaze never leaving her face. He was supposed to get up and sing to the audience, that was what they had planned. The audience was going crazy in front of them, and yet he watched her as her as she closed her eyes and sang into the microphone, pouring herself out onto the stage. She began to play slower, giving him his cue. She looked at him, trying to hide her confusion. He smiled and lifted the microphone to his lips.

Come over here let me dry your tears
Come to me,  I know you can't handle your fears
Whoever said you had to do this alone
I will be here with a hand to hold.........

He looked at her as he sung as if he was singing directly to her. She looked back at him, figuring he was going for the intimate feeling to impress the crowd. If only she knew.....

...Remember I'll always be here for you
I'll Always believe in you

The music faded away and the crowd went crazy. They smiled at eachother and gave eachother a hug, the adrenaline from preforming made them feel giddy. 

"Nora Jacobson, folks!" The boy said into the microphone as he pulled the girl up next to him. "Amazing, isn't she?" 

The crowd went wild, and embarrassed, she laughed and waved at the audience. "Thanks guys, you've been a wonderful audience. " The boy left her side and joined two other boys who were getting ready behind her. "Now, it is my great pleasure to introduce to you, my tour mates and very dear friends, the Jonas Brothers!" 


"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." --- Mark Twain Photobucket http://www.jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/362168/scope/posts/Default.aspx
 
New Post 4/12/2008 10:22 PM
User is offline xXi_cry_myself_to_sleep(jonasbrothersrock! is a little emo girl)Xx
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Re: If Only You Knew... 

no do finish plz this is really good!


Photobucket emo doesnt mean your bad...so dont treat me like i am
 
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