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4/18/2008 12:35 AM

	bre♥jonas
2215 posts

Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

Dear Mr. Jonas

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember me?
The day we first locked eyes,
You told me the heart never lies;
That it wont fail, until the day it dies.
And that when I smile your heart flies,
Even when it shies;
You told me my heart was open like the skies,
Even when it cries,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas
Do you remember when we first kissed?
When you took me in your arms, and said your feelings could never miss;
A smile forms as I remiss,
And though I told you that choosing me was amiss,
The light brush of your lips was my complete bliss,
My mind has revolved around that kiss,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember when you said you loved me?
But I told you we could never be,
My heart was bound, but your's was free;
But I listened when you'd plea,
You said I took your heart to a new degree,
That even when we'd disagree,
You'll always be there for me;
You told me I was all your heart could see,
You promised you would never hurt, never harm, never leave,
That our love will never cease,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember when you broke that promise all to soon?
You left for tour at half past noon,
You might as well have been on the moon,
You weren't there to hold me, protect me, to make me swoon;
You used to call every afternoon,
But now I'm tired of waiting by the phone, looking like a loon;
When you'd call, I'd hear the same 'ol tune,
"I love you, I'll be back in June,"
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember when you didn't come back?
I loved you, but now that feeling is lack;
I should have known when I saw you pack,
You put my pictures in a paper sack,
But in your safe suit case, there was your plaque.
I'm sure you wouldn't want that to crack,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember those rumors you'd face?
The ones about you dating someone else that made my heart race,
I have to calm myself with my own embrace,
I can't compete with those celebrities, its not a fair race,
I want you back, but your too far to chase,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember when you appeared on my front step?
When you told me you've barely slept,
When you told me of the promise that you always kept;
When you told me that when you heard the sound of my voice, your heart leapt;
And with more of your words, I've learned to accept,
That with the power of our love, nothing can intercept
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
Do you remember the accident in the car?
The anniversary present by driving me afar,
After the date, the flowers, and you on guitar,
We were hit by guys who came back from a bar,
After many flips, the car settled on tar,
As I looked over, I could just see a bright star;
The light was so close, but yet so far,
Do you remember?

Dear Mr. Jonas,
I write to you from a better place,
I miss you; but you were in a better case,
All I want is to see your face,
You said that nothing could make your memories erase,
Although that hit has left your mind in space,
So Mr. Jonas, I ask of you one thing,
Do you remember?

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So, this is my first poem I have ever written so please tell me how I did! Either you like it or you hate it, thats all I need to know.

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4/18/2008 12:47 AM

	luckieCrystal323 [is hoping her dad finds a new place soon♥]
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Re: Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

that was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

i can't believe that that was your first poem.

i loved it.

i loved how it told a complete story. and i love it even though it ended on a sad not. but still.

that was incredible Bre.

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4/18/2008 12:55 AM

	DJdangerISlove
2359 posts

Re: Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!

that was amazing!

i really really love it.

like seriously

just brilliant

Love is love.

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4/18/2008 1:07 AM

	kaybuggie♥jonas
1700 posts

Re: Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

uhh. wow. whoa babyy. dang girl!! wowzers. ha. that is soo awesome. i mean fo real. i thiink i read it like four or fivr times. bc it was soooo sweet and then sad and depressing and then all romantic again. and then it came to a tragic yet blissful end. when you were in heaven and there you stood asking mr. jonas if he ever remembered all those memories you always cherished. please please please write more of these. they are always refreshing. it shows the true love people can have. fogetting the fame. forgetting the cameras. forgetting everything. letting the world revolve around you two. that is how love should be. always there for you to come back to. never leaving you alone in this cold dark scary place we call our world. ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

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4/18/2008 1:23 AM

	Meg [Straight Up G's]
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Re: Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

OH MY LANTA!
That was the most amazing thing I've ever read.
So sad at the end, but trully amazing. I loved it so much!!!

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4/18/2008 8:40 AM

	Melissa
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Re: Dear Mr. Jonas {Poem}

BRE! THAT WAS AMAZING!
Your first poem, are you serious?! That was...gah! And it rhymed so well, it was so touching, so sad, so perfect! Wowww! I seriously loved that. Wow wow wow! Beautifully done.