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Comment or I stop writing [UPDATED CHAPTER 4] Take A Breath...Because Guess What?  
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Alright. I'm new to the whole Fan Fiction thing, so I want you to be totally honest about how good or bad it is. Please leave some comments. Especially if you want more chapters. By the way, it's mostly a Nick fict.

 Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams.

 

Chapter 1: Welcome to the Fabulous Life of Margaret Williams

     I opened my eyes, and saw the fabulous walls of my room. Since I'm a girl thats in high school, I really didnt have a "wall". it was more like a poster paradise. just like any other normal 15 year old, my walls were plastered with no other than the amazing Jonas Brothers. You know? Those super cute rock stars?! Yeah, well, they were all over my walls.

     That meant, every morning I wake up to Nick Jonas' beautiful smile, eyes, hair, just about everything! Anyways...I got out of bed after about 10 minutes of daydreaming. I tend to do that a lot. I walked over to my mirror and checked out my fierce, morning 'bed head' hairdo. I must admit, it wasnt a very pretty sight. My short, brown hair was sticking out every which way. Man, i really hate getting up in the morning.

     i got to my morning routine. Shower, get dressed, brush and straighten hair, eat breakfast, and brush my teeth. I've been doing this routine forever! You would think that I'm used to it right? Well, I normally find better things to do.

     Today I got my routine done really fast. Today was the last day of summer vacation. greaatt. I have to wake up at 6AM tomorrow. Joy. Well, better make the the best out of it. Right?

     Tomorrow was the first day of sophomore year. That means only 2 more years of high school! Scoree! that also means 2 more years of me boyfriend-less. I dont think im that bad looking! Im about 5"5", brown hair, glasses, and only weigh about 120!

     Oh well, I'm pretty used to it. Anyways! Back to the last day of summer! After eating breakfast, I ran back upstairs to my room. I grabbed my cell phone and plopped down on my bed. Who to call....who to call. That is the question. I chose to call my best friend in the whole wide world. Lexi. lexi had been my BFF since kindergarten. We have been close ever since "the incident". I really dont like talking about it. But then again, is is how we became best friends.

     Ok. Wel;, back in kindergarten I wasnt the brightest kid. I thought it would be an awesome idea to stick two crayons up my nose and try to write the ABC's. I got as far as G and had to stop because I got in trouble. Attempting to yank the blue crayon out, it broke in my nose somehow and I really couldnt get it out. I had to go to the nurses office. Ms. Weston picked a random person to take me to the nurse. Lexi. I remember Lexi had a huge smile on her face as we walked through the halls. IShe looked over at me, smiled, and started a conversation. I clearly remember her talking about butterflies and flowerrs. They were the kind of things I liked, back then, too. She was there with me when the nurse pulled the crayon out my nose. I bet it wasnt pleasant to watch. After that, we started sitting together at lunch and all that. We became best friends. So thats that.

     These days, Lexi and I really dont care for butterflies and flowers if you can imagine. Lexi is about 5"3", short blonde hair, and amazingly smart. She is also a huge Jonas Brothers fan. great isnt it?

     As I was saying I called up Lexi. The phone rang about 3 times. Then i heard her preppy voice on the other line.

"Hello?" lexi asked into the phone.

"Hey Lex! It's Meg!" I practically screamed into the reciever.

"Oh hey girl! What's happenin?"

"You know. The usual. Bored as heck, just starin at my wall" i replied swinging my feet in the air.

"no surprise there" she replied "whatcha doin today?"

"Absolutly nothing" i said kind of upset that i didnt have any plans.

She laughed. " Same here sista! Want to hang out or something? you know, go shopping for some outfits for tomorrow!"

Great! Shoppin wih Lexi. That was an offer I couldnt turn down. Lexi may be smart and nerdy, but that doesnt mean she dresses like it!

"Totally!" I told her. Yes! Plans! I didnt have to stay home today! "Where do you wanna go? How about the mall?"

"Well, DUH! Where else would we find fierce outfits?!" she giggled. "I will meet you there at 5."

"Alright. I will be there!" I told her.

"See you then!" Lexi screeched.

The Line went dead.

5:00. That gives me an hour and a half to get ready. I can totally do that. I got off my bed and changed into something that was appropriate for the mall. I chose a blue tank, dark blue jeans, and my converse. After I finished getting ready it was already 4:30. Dang an hour goes by really fast. I ran downstairs to ask my mom to drive me. I probably should have tought of asking before I told Lexi I could go with her. I guess I will just have to put on the puppy face. I walked into the kitchen where my mom usually was. Just as I thought. She was sitting at the table reading the newspaper. I slowly approached her not wanting her to yell at me for running in the house.

"Mommy?" I asked with the puppy face on.

"no." my mom answered before I even got the chance to ask my question. i hate when moms do that. They think they're so funny, when the truth is its really annoying. She laughed "what do you want?"

"Can I PLEASE go to the mall with lexi? I already told her I could go and i have to be there in 25 minutes!" I told her, still in the puppy zone. She sighed "Sure why not. I already have to drop terrance off at Nate's house."

"OMG thank you SO much!!!" I said giving my mom a hug. Thank goodness for older brothers. Sometimes you cant stand em. But then, there are the ocasional times, like this, where you are thankful for them.

Ok. Thats chapter one. Please comment. I already have up to Chapter 6 done, but I want to know what you think before i post the rest. Thanks!   -ALittleBitLonger01


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New Post 4/20/2008 4:23 PM
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
New Post 4/20/2008 4:48 PM
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

yeah this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!! yeah if you need another friend or whatever i'm here chicka!!!!!!! lol pms!!!

 

~madi!~


Photobucket emo doesnt mean your bad...so dont treat me like i am
 
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!

Thanks! Yup they are in it. Trust me.I might post the second chapter later. you will have to be patient my friend lol! They will be in it soon enough! =]   thanks for the comment

 


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 Xxjonasbrothersrock!(NLT+JONAS BROTHERS=LOVE<3 I HAVE OJD!!!)xX wrote

yeah this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!! yeah if you need another friend or whatever i'm here chicka!!!!!!! lol pms!!!

 

~madi!~

 

thanks for the comment!

:D


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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!

 

Thanks! Yup they are in it. Trust me.I might post the second chapter later. you will have to be patient my friend lol! They will be in it soon enough! =]   thanks for the comment

 

haha. ya are welcome! and gahh. what if i dont wanna wait? huh huh?!?!? jay kay. well ily! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!

 

Thanks! Yup they are in it. Trust me.I might post the second chapter later. you will have to be patient my friend lol! They will be in it soon enough! =]   thanks for the comment

 

 

haha. ya are welcome! and gahh. what if i dont wanna wait? huh huh?!?!? jay kay. well ily! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE

 

Im gunna post Chapter two in a few pminutes. Can you wait that long? lol

xox- alittlebitlonger01


nick jonas Siggys made By The Amazing ARI! I love you!! Thanks So Much! The avi was made by her too! :)
 
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 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!

 

Thanks! Yup they are in it. Trust me.I might post the second chapter later. you will have to be patient my friend lol! They will be in it soon enough! =]   thanks for the comment

 

 

haha. ya are welcome! and gahh. what if i dont wanna wait? huh huh?!?!? jay kay. well ily! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE

 

 

Im gunna post Chapter two in a few pminutes. Can you wait that long? lol

xox- alittlebitlonger01

i guess ill have too. haha. well i cant wait. ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
 
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

 ALittleBitLonger01 wrote

 

 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

 

i hate this! just kidding! haha! i really really luv this!!! its really different. ha. i wonder whats going to happen. and ya are making me wonder how JB will come in. i guess ill just have to wait and see. huh? well ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

and if ya need another name. im here!

 

Thanks! Yup they are in it. Trust me.I might post the second chapter later. you will have to be patient my friend lol! They will be in it soon enough! =]   thanks for the comment

 

 

haha. ya are welcome! and gahh. what if i dont wanna wait? huh huh?!?!? jay kay. well ily! xoxo!!

KaYbUgGiE

 

 

Im gunna post Chapter two in a few pminutes. Can you wait that long? lol

xox- alittlebitlonger01

 

i guess ill have too. haha. well i cant wait. ily! xoxo!! peace!!!

KaYbUgGiE

ha lol yeah i guess we'll have to!

 

~madi!~


Photobucket emo doesnt mean your bad...so dont treat me like i am
 
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Re: Take A Breath...Because Guess What? You're What I Go To School For. You're the Girl of My Dreams. 

Alright. I have nothing better to do, so heres Chapter 2. =]

Chapter 2: The Amazing Mall Experience

Mom dropped me off right on time. I walked into the mall with my Jonas Brothers bag over my shoulder. I swear I cant go anywhere without something that has the Jonas Brothers all over it. As I walked around the mall, I finally found Lexi. She was sitting on a bench looking perfect as always. She was wearing a purple shirt that had lime green stripes on it, jeans, and flip flops. I hadve to admit, it was quite an amazing outfit. She jumped off the bench when she saw me. "Hey Meg!" she shreiked, pulling me into a hug. I hugged her back laughing. "Man, someones excited to see me." I said.

"Well duh! Who wouldnt want to see their best friend the day before sophomore year!?" Lexi giggled.

"I dont know....guys normally arent like that." I pointed out.

"yeah I guess, but the last time I checked, we arent guys" she told me.

"You've got a pretty good point" I laughed.

"So where to?" She asked me.

"I really dont care. You lead the way!" I told her.

When you say "you lead the way" you better mean it around her. She will yank you by the arm and run though the mall until she finds a store she likes. That's exactly what she did to me. We were running so fast I had no idea of where we were going.

Lexi finally stopped in front of Urban Outfitters. I was super excited because I knew this was one of Joe Jonas' favorite stores. Hmmm.....are they in town this week? I thought to myself. Nah...I dont think so. But as we walked into the store, I saw the back of a guy. Someone I thought I would never see.

OMJ! Was that NICK JONAS?! There was really only one way to find out. Lexi must have been thinking the same thing because she had a shocked look on her face. "Is that who i think it is?" I whispered to Lexi. "I dont know. Maybe we should start talking about Nick and see if he turns around or something" she whispered back. I nodded.

"Soooo! Nick Jonas.....Hes one fine man!" I said out loud.

"Hells yeah he is!" Lexi replied.

Dang! The guy wouldnt turn around. So I decided to do the DUMB thing. I cant believe I did this. I ran up to "Nick" and screamed "OMG YOUR NICK JONAS!" The guy turned around....he didnt look ANYTHING like Nick. He wasnt even HALF as fine as Nick. This guy had curly hair (thats what pulled the 'Nick' trigger), lip piercings, eyeliner around his eyes (which made him look like a raccoon), and his breath....REEKED!

I backed up slowly. "sorry" I said. "I thought you were someone else". The guy gave me this look that really freaked me out. It was kind of funny because he ran out of the store right after I did that. Man, I'm such an idiot.

"DUDE! I cant believe you just did that!" Lexi whispered in my ear.

"Me either" I whispered back. "That was pretty retarded wasnt it?"

It took her a second to respond. "umm..yeah." she laughed. "now that thats over....LETS SHOP!" she screamed.

"Alrighty!" I screamed wit h her.

Lexi dragged me around the store. We actually found a couple of cute tops that I actually liked. i am  very picky when it comes to clothes. I dont wear anything that has topo much pink in it. its not like I hate the color....its just not one of my favorites. Lex found a really cool shirt that had a guitar and music notes on it. I was totally wearing that shirt tomorrow no matter what. After we found shirts we headed for the jewlery. Lexi found me a necklace that matched the shirt. It was totally awesome. The store had everything a girl like me would wear. That was a relief. Lexi begged me to get sunglasses, but what would be the point? I never take off my glasses. And when I say never I mean it.

We finished up at Urban Outfitters around 8. We were in there for 3 hours! It was worth it though. We  now have wardrobes that will last about a year. We stopped to get some ice cream before we left. I got chocolate and lex got cotton candy. ICK. Cotton Candy ice cream? it makes me wanna gag. Of course, Lexi started up a conversation.

"SO! Sophomore year tomorrow! Im so excited! We really need to find you a boyfriend." she told me. "You have never had one before! I promise I will find someone for you in the first week. OMG! Im so excited!" she went on.

"That sounds like fun (not) Lex, but I dont know. Guys really dont like me." I told her even though she already knew it.

"Thats not TOTALLY true! What about Frank! He's your friend." she insisted.

Frank. I had totally forgotton about him! I met good old Frank last year. He sat by me in homeroom. Thats how we met. It sure isnt as interesting as how I met Lexi though. he's probably the only guy that even speaks to me. He's a jokester though, thats for sure.

"Yeah but I would never DATE him." I pointed out.

"But still!" Lexi said.

"We will see" i insured her. "Maybe I will meet someone that actually likes me."

"Yeah" she sighed "that would be pretty incredible."

She obviously had no idea how incredible that would be for me. we went home. I set out my new outfit for tomorrow. I changed into my PJ's, brished my teeth, said my prayers, turned my ipod on to the Jonas brothers, and went to bed. After about 5 minutes of trying to go to sleep, I opened my eyes and stared at the Nick Jonas poster above my bed. If only he went to my school.That would be the coolest thing ever, I thought to myself. Psh. Stop dreaming Meg. What happens, happens. So after looking at Nick for the last time, I fell asleep.

 

Ok! Thats chapter 2. Comment please!
:)


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