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New Post 7/17/2008 10:38 PM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.11 7/17 

Sorry I haven't posted in so long...I've actually had this chapter done just didn't post it...I pretty sure there's maybe one or two chapters left till the end.

Chapter 11

~Nick's POV~

I woke up the next morning trying to be careful not to wake Jenna up,we had gone to bed late after having a long talk about everything that was going on,I slowly walked down to the kitchen where Kevin and Lizz were sitting and talking.

"Listen I'm telling you Joe hasn't been telling us the truth about the renovation project they were doing on that studio ."Lizz said softly shaking her head"His dreams dead,he got involved with some bad people."

"What?"Kevin said raising his eyebrow a little.

"The city got him on fraud or whatever."She said"Cut off his loans like a month or so ago so technically Joe is really broke."

"And you think it has something to do with mom?"I asked as I sat down beside them.

"No but I think it should be something we look into."She said softly"I need you guys to go and visit this official named Douglas because he'll know who Joe got mixed up with."

"Why aren't you going?"I asked.

"Because I have some other things I need to do."She said softly.

~Jenna's POV~
I woke up the next morning and Nick was gone along with Kevin not even bothering to leave me a note.Lizz wouldn't tell me where they had gone either and it was really starting to get on my nerves.

"Where is he Lizz?"I asked for what seemed like the hundredth time since I had gotten downstairs.

"I told you I don't know."She said anger hinting in her voice"Now will you stop asking."

I took a deep breathe as I quickly got up grabbing my stomach as I felt a sharp pain.

"Ah!"I yelled.

"What's wrong?"Lizz asked her eyes getting big.

"I think it's time."I said taking a deep breathe.

Before I knew it I was being rushed to the hospital.

"Everythings seems to be fine Ms. it's normal for someone to early contractions."The doctor said as he looked at my charts"You'll be free to go home as soon as you want to."
I nodded my head as I looked at Lizz.

"Please don't tell Nick that we had to come to the hospital."I said softly.

"I can't promise you anything."She said softly"He's my brother."
~Nick's POV~

I didn't why I was the one that always got dragged around these things.I waited with Kevin in the parking garage.

"That would be him."Kevin said as a guy came walking out.

I quickly followed behind him.

"Councilman Douglas."Kevin said as we got to him"The names Kevin Jonas and I believe you know my brother Joseph."

"Apparently, you were the one who got his business shut down, right?"Kevin continued when he didn't say anything.

"This is not the proper venue for an appeal."The man said shaking his head.

"I'm afraid that's not what we're concerned about right now."Kevin said"I heard that my brother got mixed up with some hoodlums."

"I can't help you."Douglas said shaking his head"Now if you'll excuse me."

The guy pushed past as he walked to his car it would only be a matter of time before he realixed that we had drenched it with gasoline.It took a bit persuading but the guy finally gave us a name after Kevin agreed not to lite him on fire.

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I sighed as we walked into the bowling alley to find Lizz who was sitting at the bar with Jenna right beside her.I raised my eyebrow I didn't remember telling Lizz to involve my girlfriend in this.

"What's going on Lizz?"Kevin asked as he looked at Jenna.

"Hey Kevin."Lizz said with a little sigh"Word around town in that Joe owed alot of people some money."
"What are you talking about?"I asked.

"Regonze that dude over there with the fat head?"Lizz asked.

"Yeah that's Trace Cyrus."Kevin said with a little nod of his head"He used to be an alright kid,him and Joe used to hand out all the time."

"Yeah well he works for that guy named victor sweet."Lizz said shaking her head.

"You guys are coming up with this pretty quick."I said shaking my head.

"Yeah well we should have been cops."Kevin said as he turned and look at the guy.

"What are we doing here Lizz?"Kevin asked turning back to her.

"Guys why is Joe here talking with that guy?"Jenna asked causing us all to turn and watch as Joe handed the guy an Envelope.

"I found out Joe got a big insurance check after mom's death."Lizz said.

"Forget Joe will find him later."Kevin said as he turned and headed towards the bowling alley"Come on."

"It's alright."I said softly kissing her lips before I walked towards where they were talking to him.

"What's in the envelope?"Kevin asked the guy when I got there.

"What envelope?"Trace asked.

"You really want to play that game with me right now?"Kevin asked stepping forward a little and showing him the gun he had.

"Are you really going to do this here?"He asked.

"Right here right now."Lizz said.

Trace quickly reached into his back pocket and then handed the envelope to Kevin.

With that we all headed out of the bowling alley,Jenna meeting us at the door.


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New Post 7/17/2008 11:21 PM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.11 7/17 

that was awesome Heather.

i absolutely love this story. and i'll be sad when it's over.

post more soon chica please.


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New Post 7/18/2008 12:08 AM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.11 7/17 

*GASP*

I can't believe you updated this one too! YEY HEATHER!

PMS! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

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New Post 7/18/2008 8:38 AM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.11 7/17 

new reader...well not really...i just wasn't a member yet so i couldn't post, but i've been reading ur story from the begging and it's awesome!!!!

Sarah....pms!!!!


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New Post 7/19/2008 10:52 PM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.11 7/17 

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New Post 7/22/2008 10:25 AM
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New Post 7/23/2008 8:59 AM
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New Post 7/24/2008 11:20 AM
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New Post 7/25/2008 2:02 AM
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Re: Take A Breath[Nick FF]Ch.5 5/1 

Ok so I really disliked writing this chapter...WARNING it does have a sad ending....the next chapter is going ot be the last.

Chapter 12

~Jenna's POV~

Nick and I walked up to his room that night knowing that what was coming in the morning wouldn't be good.Kevin had called Joe telling him that he wanted him to come over in the morning and Joe said that he would be there.I watched Nick as he pulled his shoes and shirt off and then layed down in the bed not saying a word.I slowly changed into my pajamas before I walked over and sat down next to him,he looked up at me and I slowly leaned down and kissed him trying to get his mind off of his brother.He slowly sat up and let me lay back on my back so that I wasn't hurting my stomach as he slowly deepend the kiss placing his hand on my stomach gently as he did that the baby slowly started to kick causing me to start laughing as Nick pulled away.

"Looks like someone doesn't like you kissing their mommy."I said softly causing Nick to smile and shake his head.

"Well they're just going to have to get used to it."He said as he leaned down kissing me once again.

~Nick's POV~

I woke up the next morning frowning a little when I realized that today was the day we would be finding out what was going on with Joe.I looked over at Jenna and slowly leaned over kissing her on the lips,her eyes slowly fluttered open and she smiled up at me.

"Morning beautiful."I said softly.

"Morning handsome."She whispered as she sat up a little and kissed me again.

I slowly got up out of the bed and went to take a shower.

When we had both gotten dressed we headed down the stairs to eat breakfast.After breakfast Kevin had us all sit in the living room because Joe would be coming in at any minute.

Jenna and I sat down on the couch when we heard a car door shut.Kevin hid in the kitchen somewhere and Lizz sat down next to me on the couch as Joe came walking through the back door.

"What?"He asked when he got to the living room.

"You know what you did."Lizz said showing him the money.

"No you don't know what you've done."Joe said shaking his head as he started to turn"Where's Kevin."

Before anyone could say anything Kevin came out of the kitchen and punched Joe in the face,Jenna gasped and I reached over taking her hand.

"What are you hiding Joe?"Kevin asked as he held him down on the ground"I swear if I find out you had anything to do with what happened to mom I'm going to kill you right here."

"No Kevin no."Crystal said coming from upstairs.

"Lizz is going to ask you a few questions and if we find out you've been lying it's over."Kevin said standing up.

"We know you've been lying about your business and the fact that you got mixed up with some gangsters."Lizz said shaking her head and I knew she was trying hard not to cry.

"Now hold on a minute..."Joe started to get up.

"Stay down!"Kevin yelled kicking him and causing Jenna to jump again.

"You think I had something to do with mom getting killed?"Joe asked as he looked at the two of them in shock.

"You just got a check for four hundred thousand that you just so happened to forget to mention from mom's life insurance."Lizz said angrily as she looked at him.

"She took out the policy for Amelia man I didn't have anything to do with that come on."Joe said trying to defend himself.

"You made the payments."I blurted out starting to get angry with him myself.

"Good timing Joe,just when it seems that all is lost with you mom gets shot and you win the lottery."Kevin yelled as he bent down to Joe's level.

"Your tripping because I made insurance payments?"Joe said yelled as he got up off the ground"I paid all her bills."

He pushed Lizz back and then punched Kevin in the face,I was going to jump up but Jenna held me back.

"And where were you huh?"Joe asked shaking his head"How many years did I have to take car of her myself with ya'll doing nothing and your going to tell me I killed her?"

"So why would you pay off a killer like Sweet?"Lizz asked as she got in Joe's face"And what the heck did he do for you?"

"What did he do for me....he killed my life!"Joe yelled shaking his head"I put everything into that project trying to make something of myself,the Vics goons tried to come and get a piece."

"You paid him Joe."Kevin said.

"No I didn't pay him man that's how he shut me down."Joe said.

"Wait I thought the city cut you down."I said.

"Douglas?Come on Nick this is New Jersey."Joe said as he turned to me and then turned to the others"Sweet owns douglas he isn't anything but a gangster in a suit."

I heard a knock on the door and I glanced at Jenna before I slowly got up and went to answer the door.When I opened the door someone dressed in a hoodie was walking away flipping me off as he bent down to the snow.

"Hey man I will kick your......"I was cut off by a snowball hitting my face,I quicklt ran out the door grabbing snow as I went after the guy.

~Jenna's POV~

I watched Nick as he walked off and then I turned back to the guys as they argued with each other.

"Wait a minute."Kevin said looking at the couch and then towards the door"Nick!"
Before I could do anything he was running for the door as a gun shot went off.

"Nick!"I screamed getting up as fast as I could and heading for the door.

"Nick!"Kevin yelled again as he grabbed a gun and headed out the door.

The next thing I know I'm hearing a loud gun shot and then several others as Nick cried out,Kevin and Lizz come running back into the house and Kevin grabs ahold of me as we fall to the ground me hitting my stomach.The next thing I know bullets are wixxing by my head as I lay there on the ground Kevin over me.

"Kevin!"I hear Nick yell and I can fill tears coming to my eyes.

"Nick!"Kevin yells back.

"Kevin!"Nick yells again.

"Nick!"I yell as a sharp pain goes through my stomach and I knew that I was in labor as tears started to fall down my face.

"Crystal give me the gun."I could hear Lizz say before both her and Kevin got up and started to shoot out the window.

I slowly tried to get up off the ground knowing that I had to get to Nick I heard one last gun shot go off as I slowly stood up and walked towards the door where I could see everyone over Nick.

"No."I whispered as I slowly walked down the steps falling into the snow as another sharp pain went through my stomach.I slowly crawled over to where everyone was with Nick.I felt the tears fall faster down my face as Nick looked at me pain in his eyes.

"Jenna."He whispered as I got next to him taking his hand.

"Shhh Nick."I said as the tears fell.

"N..o.....Jenna....I...need...you..to....know....that ...I.....love....you."He said as he coughed"Tell...the...baby...that...I..love...him..too."

"Nick please don't leave me."I said my voice cracking as I shook my head.

"Kevin...take...care..of..her...for...me..."Nick said as he glanced at Kevin and coughed again.

"I promise."Kevin said tears falling down his face as he nodded his head.

Nick looked at me with those eyes and I knew what he wanted me to do.I slowly leaned down and kissed him and as I pulled away his arm fell to his side.

"No."I said shaking my head as the tears fell"No."


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