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New Post 5/2/2008 5:15 PM
User is offline [ily.]Blue.Ranger.
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World With No Air- New Thread 

Hey. It's Christine, on Jade's account. Jade is my distant cousin. :D. So.. as you know, my current fanfic wasn't working. So I've decided to start a new one on this acc. Before I update, I'll post chapters one to three. Then we can start where we left of okay? :D.


Hello. My name is Jadelyn.. and I'm the YELLOW ranger<3 The yellow ranger loves the blue ranger<3 But she also loves the red, green and white rangers<3 She LOVES the PURPLE ranger too<33 Photobucket ||Thanks to Molly for the first one, Starbound for the second & third.. :D. Photobucket
 
New Post 5/2/2008 5:26 PM
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sounds good to me.... lol


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New Post 5/2/2008 5:31 PM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread 

sounds good to me too.


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New Post 5/2/2008 5:31 PM
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sounds awesome =]


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New Post 5/2/2008 11:56 PM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread [[Chapters One-Three]] 

[[Chapter One: Joe's POV]]

I sat there on the floor with my brothers Kevin and Nick. We were swamped with letters. More like poems. We all agreed to do this contest where you had to submit a short poem and we'd each choose the number one poem we liked best out of the millions and thousands of others. We'd then go out on a date with them. "Hey! I like this one!" Nick said pulling out a small envelope. He read it aloud.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
You're the best, i love you

I rolled my eyes picking up an envelope and skimming through it quickly. "Gee Nick, you really want to be with Marni that bad don't you?" I asked. He nodded. "Pick another one buddy" Kevin said. I picked up an envelope and began to read it.

Perfection Is A Lie

You can't erase what's already been
You can't erase what you've already seen.
Don't try to be who you're not,
Cos it's hard to feel your insides rot.

Change happens so fast,
Bad thing is you can never change that past.
Returning to happiness is filled with doubt,
So just open up, and let your emotions out.


"Hey! I think I found one!" I said excitedly. I read it out to my brothers. "Wow" Kevin said breathless. "That was short, yet so deep and emotional". I nodded. "But there's no name!" I said worried. I looked at the back and all over. No name. "Then we can't have that one" Nick said. "We need a name Joe" he added. "And besides, you haven't read any others yet" he said. I sat on the couch looking at the crumpled, tear stained poem in my hands. "I think Joe's in looove!" Nick teased laughing. I glared at him. "Am not. I'm dating Katie" I said. I got up. " I have a new idea for a song" I replied. Kevin cleared his throat. "Your idea for a song?" he repeated. I rolled my eyes playfully. "Okay.. reading this poem has just given me the greatest idea ever. With a little music and a bit more lyrics, I think I can make this better" I said. I ran upstairs to my room and closed the door.

I got out my blue scrapbook and began to write the poem down.


Perfection Is A Lie

Verse One:

You can't erase what's already been
You can't erase what you've already seen.
Don't try to be who you're not,
Cos it's hard to feel your insides rot.

Chorus:

Change happens so fast,
Bad thing is you can never change that past.
Returning to happiness is filled with doubt,
So just open up, and let your emotions out.


I added some stuff to it.

Verse Two:

When our smiles meet,
I know I am complete.
My heart soul is lost and no one can find the plea me,
Is that how you feel? Do you agree?

Chorus:

Change happens so fast,
Bad thing is you can never change that past.
Returning to happiness is filled with doubt,
So just open up, and let your emotions out.


Bridge:

Will you ever rescue me? I want to be me free.
You can try to break us apart, But we'll be strong just like from the start.

"I've done it!" I exclaimed. "I've created a song!". I wrote on the piece of paper in blue pen Lyrics by: Joe Jonas & unknown girl. Music by: The Jonas Brothers

I wanted more. I want more poems. Reading those words takes my breath away. I can relate to everything. What is she saying? Is she trying to tell me something? Why was she crying? I was now determined to find her. I was determined to find the girl that created and arranged those wonderful meaningful words.

---------------------------------------------

La-la-la.. :D. That chapter didn't have much going on.. but it was a starter.. more will happen in the next chapter. I promise. And yes.. I did create that poem. Just now. Like from the top of my head. Hope you guys like it. And the'll be more poems later on.. :D.

 

 


Hello. My name is Jadelyn.. and I'm the YELLOW ranger<3 The yellow ranger loves the blue ranger<3 But she also loves the red, green and white rangers<3 She LOVES the PURPLE ranger too<33 Photobucket ||Thanks to Molly for the first one, Starbound for the second & third.. :D. Photobucket
 
New Post 5/2/2008 11:57 PM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread [[Chapters 1 & 2]] 

[[Chapter Two: Christine's POV]]

I was at my desk writing another poem when I heard my parents arguing with eachother for the tenth time this week. I knew my mother was tired and fed up with the house smelling like alcahol everytime. She was tired of finding empty beer bottles and burnt out cigarettes everywhere. I swallowed the lump in my throat and slowly walked to my door. I creaked it open and listened. "You have six children to think of!" my mother shouted. "Don't you care!?". I think my father threw an empty beer bottle at the wall. "Shut up! I never liked your first seventeen year old brat!" he cried. I bit my bottom lip and tried to hold back my tears. He was talking about Jordan. "She's eighteen!" my mother shouted back. "And if you were paying attention to your children you'd know!"

I heard a chair being thrown around. Now I wished that I'd gone with Jordan to the mall. All my siblings were out exept me. The livingroom was very quiet suddenly. Then, I heard the door slam and a car engine driving off in the distance. Thinking it was safe, I opened the door and slowly crept downstairs. I found my mother on her knees crying. "Mom?" I asked softly. She looked at me with red blood shot eyes. 'Christine?" she asked softly. "You're still home? I thought you went out with Jordan" she replied. I shook my head. "Where's daddy?" I asked softly. I had never called my father 'daddy' before. I thought it was just too childish. She gulped. "We're divorcing Christine" she said quietly. My heart skipped a beat. Divorce? What? Maybe I heard her wrong. "What?' I asked. She sighed. "We're divorcing. Seperating for good" she repeated.

I felt tears in my eyes. I knew my parents argued alot. And my parents have always said that one day they'd have a divorce. But I never thought it was true. I always thought they were kidding. "You've lived with a father for eighteen years now honey" she said. "It's going to change from now on". I couldn't find any words to say to her. Instead I just ran off managing to slip on my black flats. "Christine!" I heard my mother call. "Come back!". I ran and ran ot able to stop. I was always a good athlete at my school so I could run pretty fast. I bumped into someone's arms and looked up. It was my boyfriend, Max. "Christine?" he asked worriedly.

I buried my face in his chest and began to cry. He wrapped his arms around me embracing me in a hug as he did what he could to comfort me. "Is it that bad now?" he asked softly. I nodded. "They're divorcing Max" I said quietly between sobs. "Were you on your way to my house?" I asked my tears still in my eyes. He nodded. "I was on my way to.. nevermind" he said quickly. I looked up into his brown eyes and smiled. Max could always put a smile on your face no matter what. Like me, he was a serious athlete. He was on the football team as star quarter back. We've been going out for a year and a half now and nothing could seperate us. Our love was endless.

I heard someone call his name and looked to find a girl running towards us. I was free from his grasp as my eyes met hers. "Maxie" she said smiling. I felt my heart slowly breaking. Maxie? No one ever called him that exept me. What was going on? Who was she? Max sighed. He knew he couldn't hide forever. The tall brunette haired dark skinned brown eyed girl looked at me. "Christine" he began as he wrapped his arm around her waist. My heart instantly broke. "Meet my girlfriend Larina" he said. "Lar-bear.. meet my.." he stopped. "Meet Christine" he said pulling me in for a hug. I resisted his arms. He looked down at me confused. I wanted to cry. I really wanted to. But I couldn't. I guess I'd been crying for so many years now, I was out of tears. "Chris? You okay?" he asked softly. I shook my head. "You said you loved me" I said. "What does she have that I don't?"

Larina gave me a disgusted look. "Maxie.. let's go" she said. I could tell she was mixed. Puerto Rican and Italian. Max nodded and looked at me. His eyes were pleading for my forgivness. "We can still be friends right?" he asked kissing me on the cheek for the last time. I didn't answer him. No. "Bye Chris" he said before walking away with Larina. I didn't know Larina. But I've seen her around the neighbourhood. She's been flirting with Max when we were still going out and my friends reported to me that he's been flirting with her behind my back. I wanted to ask him if it was true, but I couldn't find the time to. I decided to walk now, since my feet were killing me. I had run two blocks already and was pretty close to the park. Once I got there, I sat under the tree I usually sat under when I felt confused or lost. I laid my head against the bark and closed my eyes allowing the tears to roll down my cheeks.


Hello. My name is Jadelyn.. and I'm the YELLOW ranger<3 The yellow ranger loves the blue ranger<3 But she also loves the red, green and white rangers<3 She LOVES the PURPLE ranger too<33 Photobucket ||Thanks to Molly for the first one, Starbound for the second & third.. :D. Photobucket
 
New Post 5/3/2008 12:02 AM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread [[Chapters 1 & 2]] 

this was still good the second time around.

i love this story and i can't wait to read the next chapter.

post more soon please.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 5/3/2008 12:09 AM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread [[Chapters 1 & 2]] 

still awesomeee<3333


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New Post 5/3/2008 12:12 AM
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Re: World With No Air- New Thread [[Chapters 1 & 2]] 

agreed.. still love the poem!


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