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New Post 5/2/2008 8:38 PM
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Just Listen. [updated 5/5] 
Modified By green-bright   on 5/5/2008 4:55:54 PM)

 

so this is the new version of just listen, you might ask WHY i re-did the entire fic, well I don't know what to write so I got a new idea. HOPE YOU LIKE IT! comments are GREAT!

 
chaper one;;

    The door slammed shut behind me. I was on the road to hellville.     I rolled down my window trying to catch a glimpes of my estate before it was too far gone. I sighed,
    "Calvin?" I said. Trying to see his shadow through the darkend window in the front of the limo.
    "Yes?" he spoke calmly, rolling up the window, I sighed.
    "Where are we going this time?" I rolled down the side window feeling the tears roll down my face. I wasn't ready to leave this beautiful place already, not yet.
    "Los Angelos." I gulped, Mom. I knew he would get rid of me before school started. I knew I wouldn't be able to count on him. I beleived him though; every stupid word. Change. he said, he need some change. I was only there for two months. He couldn't have gotten that tired of me. Yet here I was, at the back of my limo. It seemed like I spent more time here than at any of my real homes. I had one in New York, and one in Los Angelos. I spent more time switching homes than kids changed their clothes. Both of my parents had numerous homes they could put me at. I spent most of my time with my mom though, a year max. Then my dad would decide he wanted a kid again, but would send me back in two months.
    "Your taking a cruise," Calvin said. "that's what your mother told me."
    I sighed, my mother was cool. She was a lier though, she spent most her time in front of the camera then parenting. I usually took care of myself. If you haven't guessed it so far, i'm Malou. The one with the famous acting mother and famous bussiness man father (aka, practically owns every record company in the biz, including hollywood records.) My life was pretty cool, when I was with my dad. (when he acted like one of course) or when I was with my mom (when she was around). I opened my cell phone and texted my three best friends Sammy, Brandi, and Crystal telling them about how I will be back in LA soon. They lived in LA, I met Sammy and Brandi because they are actors and worked with my mom a few times and I met Crystal because she's cousin's with the Jonas Brothers and accidently walked in on a meeting when the Jonas Brothers just started recording in Hollywood. So yeah. I heard my phone ring seconds after, it was Crystal.
    "Malou you couldn't have picked a BETTER time to come home!!" she screeched.
    "what?"
    "NICK, JOE, AND KEVIN BOUGHT A YACHTE!" she screamed, I've never met them. Mostly because Crystal refuses to let us go all googly on them. Although I'm pretty sure we already are.
    "uhh..okay?" I said, trying to figure out why she was so excited, it's not like she or any of us haven't been on a yacht before.
    "well about two months ago they were apparently talking about how much kevin loves to go on cruises, so all of a sudden apparently kevin wanted to learn how to drive those really huge boats so he could buy one when he was older well they went out and kevin learned how to drive them so after that they bought one and yesterday they were talking to me about how they are taking the yacht out for a week for vacation, it's a fairly smal yacht only 5 bedrooms and they asked me if I had a friend who would like to go so I immediatley told them, that I had three but one of them wouldn't be able to so they said yeah okay but now I can tell them that you can come! You can come right?"
    "yeah! So are we going with the parents or anything?" I asked curiously.
    "well they are bringing Frankie but they said they trust them enough to go by themselves..plus we are just going back and forth on the coast for a week, nothing big like mexico or something." she laughed.
    "I wouldn't go then, we might get lost." I giggled and hung up.


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New Post 5/2/2008 8:49 PM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 

haha that was great. and i'm related to the JoBros. i'm happy about that but also a little sad. haha cuz it's wrong to crush on family. haha.

so i am so glad i'm not related to them in real life.

but this was great. and i love it already.

can't wait to read the next chapter.

post more soon please.


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New Post 5/2/2008 9:19 PM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 

omg! im an actor? no way no way no way!

eeeeeeeeeeepers i love love love this story. haha i wanna go on a cruise with three i mean 4 hot guys. cant forget about frankie! ahaha lol

And yea, that would totally suck if they were actually related to her. then she wouldnt be able to date any of them or it would be really awkward to have a crush on them. ahahah

Kevoooo....here comes Sammy!

*love love*

~Sammy

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New Post 5/2/2008 10:13 PM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 

Yay! I've always wanted to be an actress and now I am one (...almost...)

And I'm (kind of) going on a Jonas cruise driven by Kevin (should I be scared)

Remember what I said about loving Joe's library card line with his license!

~Brandi~


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New Post 5/3/2008 3:08 AM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 

Wow that was so amazingly great!!!! I absolutely loved it!!!

Pleeeeeeease post more soon!!


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New Post 5/3/2008 8:52 AM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 
Modified By green-bright   on 5/4/2008 11:25:52 AM)

THANKS!



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New Post 5/3/2008 9:34 AM
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bump - post more soon!


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New Post 5/3/2008 9:40 AM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 
Modified By green-bright   on 5/4/2008 11:26:24 AM)


chapter two;;


    "You can take care of yourself a few weeks can't you? I'm off to London to shoot my new movie."
    Those were the first words she spoke to me when I walked through the door. The fact is I knew alot about the movie bussiness; probabley as much as her. It didn't take a few weeks to shoot a movie; more like a few months.
    "Yeah, I'll be fine." I wasn't going to tell her about the boat; I knew she would be gone by tommarrow.
    "Here." she said handing me a card - a credit card. I smiled so widley I though I might die. A credit card. I know what you're thinking. "she probabley already gets everything she wants." No, I don't. I ask my parent for something, they ask me what I need it for and If I get a good enough excuse they will let. It's not that they don't have the money to buy me everything I could possibley dream of; they just are too lazy and they are supposibley 'teaching me the value of money' which I think was a bunch of crap because they both grew up in rich families. They wouldn't know the value of a dollar if it hit them over the head.
    "Buy what you need; This is a test Malou, a test to see if you can live without buying unnessacery things. I wanna see if you can live by yourself." This was such a big joke that I had to cover my mouth to sheld the laughter exacaping it. She had a maid for christ's sake; was that a 'nessacery thing' No it wasn't. The giant house she is living in isn't, the pool in the backyard isn't, the 33 inch flat screen tv's in every room isn't. Nothing in this house is 'absolutley nessacary' She's just trying to get me to not spend every last drop of her money; which is pretty impossible considering she's has way too much already and is going to be getting checks from my father. Which I'm sure he linked to the credit card I just got.
    "Yeah okay mom." Ben our butler came over.
    "Do you need these taken to your room, Malou?" I nodded at Bedn he was only about 26  and was extremly cute. I'm sure that's why he was hired. Among other reasons of course.
    "Remma will make you dinner tonight; unless you would like to go out with your friends." Remma was our maid/cook, before I met Sammy, Brandi, and Crystal. Ben and Remma were the only friends I had; Ben started out when he was 18; he had been working here 8 years and Remma has worked here, well sense forever. She was about 58 and was litraly the nicest woman in the world.
    "Okay mom." I said walking to the kitchen. I smiled at Remma who was standing sweeping the floor with a wooden broom.
    "Malou!" she screeched, when she saw me. Giving me a big hug. She smelled (like always) of coffee and brownies. She often would make me brownies when I got home from my dad's estate.
    "I'm making you brownies! How come you never call me to tell me your coming home? So I can have the brownies when you get home!" Brownies started a few years ago; when my homecomings to LA were a mess, I was crying and she made me her famous brownies. The tears got bigger and now she always made me brownies.
    "No, No. That's okay, I think I'm just going to get ready for my-" I whispered. "boat trip." She smiled. She for some reason always incouraged me to do fun things; "if you have the money" She would often tell me. "You might as well have enough adventure so all the average people in the world have something to be jealous about, other than the money."
    "Good for you, get out of your mommy's shell. Now who are we going with? Boys? Are they cute atleast? Nice? I don't want to have to pick you up at jail."
    "Yeah Remma, their nice. I'm going with Sammy, Brandi, and Crystal. Also with the Jonas Brothers." she smiled.
    "Really? You know while you were gone they were on Ellen. They were offally polite, you make sure you bring them to me and Benjy before you go around dating one of them alright?" I smiled.
    "I doubt I will date them Remma; but I'll bring them if I do." When my mom was away or here Remma and Ben(jy) were more of parents then my real mom; or espicially my dad. We would go out places. Even when it was a bad time because the paperazzi would be out alot. Everyone knew though; I mean everyone in this world knew they weren't exactley the best parents. That was okay with me though, I had my best friends, and Remma and Ben. That was all I needed.

 

there you go;

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New Post 5/3/2008 9:53 AM
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Re: Just Listen. [new ff] 
bumpp.

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New Post 5/3/2008 9:59 AM
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Eeeeeeeep!

That was so amazingly awesome!!! I loved it so much! This is so awesome!!!

Please please PLEASE post more asap!!!


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