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New Post 5/3/2008 7:35 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ a new JB fan fiction ]  

that was a great first part.

i love the story already.

and i can't wait to read more.

post more soon please.


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New Post 5/3/2008 8:44 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ a new JB fan fiction ]  

Thanks guys! I will be posting Chapter 1[part 1] in a few minutes! Thanks for reading!

 

<3 Madeline



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New Post 5/3/2008 8:59 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ a new JB fan fiction ]  
Modified By *♫*Marni*♫*   on 5/3/2008 8:00:46 PM)

yay im excited!

 

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New Post 5/3/2008 9:06 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 1) ]  
Modified By G-Mads {Madeline} <3   on 5/3/2008 8:07:07 PM)

Okay guys, here is Chapter 1 [part 1]

It is a bit short...well, I think it is, but there will be more coming. Thanks so much for reading! I hope you enjoy it!

<3 Madeline

PS: Oh yeah, Faye you are in this chapter - YAY!

Chapter 1 [part 1]
 
Nick’s POV
 
            “No, No and No!” Joe yelled trying his hardest not to burst out in tears of laughter, “Remember the last time you took us somewhere to spend ‘quality brother time’ when we had a couple days off?”  I started to crack up at the thought of the last time Kevin took us fishing when we had a few days off before our next show in Wyoming.
            “But guys, this time is different. We’ll stay in the car I promise, and Joe, I do remember you were the one that stopped us from fishing at all because you didn’t want to use the hook because they would hurt the fish,” Kevin snapped. I fell back on the cream, hotel couch grasping my stomach and trying not to cry.
            “How manly was that?” I laughed trying to settle down so I wouldn’t suffocate.
            “I didn’t want to hurt the fish! You guys have no heart!” Joe replied trying not to burst out laughing from what he had just said, “It was because of you, Kevin that we all fell in the lake and had to find our way back to the hotel soaking wet and smelling like fish”
Running my fingers through my hair, I sat up as we each took a breath and tried to discuss the matter at hand. We had just got into Colorado Springs and arranged to have a couple of days off before we did our show and continued on with the tour. Kevin wanted to take us up to the mountains, but that wasn’t going to happen on my watch. Every time Kevin wanted us to spend some real ‘brother bonding time’ something went wrong. It wasn’t Kevin, it was usually Joe, but I didn’t want to get into another situation.
“Don’t pick on Kevin, you guys, he just wants to spend some time with you doing stuff that normal brothers do. If you guys can even be normal,” Faye giggled as she came up from behind to hug Kevin. Faye was Kevin’s girlfriend and had been since we had met her during one of our radio show interviews. Kevin turned around to hug Faye tightly back and push some of her soft red hair away from her face.
“But seriously, Kev, if you in any way hurt your self, so help me…” Faye started but she was interrupted by Kevin’s loving tone.
“I won’t, babe, I promise, just make these dweebs come with me,” Kevin laughed as he looked me straight in the eyes.
“Go with him, dweebs,” Faye winked as she nudged us all out the door.
I grunted as a drug my feet across the elegant green hotel carpet and out the door.
This is going to be a long night.


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New Post 5/3/2008 9:12 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 1) ]  

oh no.. hiking... i see joe getting them lost.. hee seems 2 have no sense of direction... lol

but tht was awesomes...

post more soon


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New Post 5/3/2008 9:25 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 1) ]  

 

 

Thanks for the comments Marni :)

I should be able to post more in a few minutes, the 1st part of the chapter should make more since after the 2nd part is posted, and I promise it will get more interesting!

Thanks

<3 Madeline



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New Post 5/3/2008 9:32 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 1) ]  

oh man...hiking. you know something's going to go wrong.

i love the story though.

and i can't wait to read the next chapter.

post more soon please.


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New Post 5/3/2008 9:58 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 2) ]  
Modified By G-Mads {Madeline} <3   on 5/3/2008 9:05:24 PM)

 

Hey Everyone! This is Chapter 1 part 2, I hope you enjoy it! I know it is a bit slow right now, but after this chapter, things should get interesting...I had to explain things first. Keep an eye out for Chapter 2, I should be able to get it up tomorrow. Please comment and tell me what u think! Even if you say :

"OMG MADELINE THIS IS THE WORST FAN FICTION I HAVE EVER READ! PLEASE DO NOT POST MORE SOON!"

I would be very greatful for ur comment because someone would be telling me I was doing something wrong, I would be a bit depressed, hahahah, but hey, what eves!

Now...i'll stop rambling and present to you the rest of chapter 1

 

 

 

Chapter 1 [part 2]

 
Nick’s POV
 
            “Where are we," I questioned as I lifted my head off of my hand to peer out the window of the rental car.
            “We are in the beautiful mountains, Nicholas, can’t you tell by all the houses?” Joe joked from the front seat as he gave Kevin an evil stare.
            “Okay, so I got a little lost, but I’ll be out of here in no time. Forgive me, I’m only human,” Kevin explained as he kept his eyes fixed on the road.
            “You’re forgiven,” I replied knowing that Kevin really didn’t deserve to be lectured, “But how did you end up in a neighborhood.”
            “Well, you see, Joe said that, well…” BANG PShHHhhhhhhh, “What was that?” Kevin yelled frantically looking through his window toward the tires. I lifted my eyebrows, unbuckled my seat belt, and jumped in between the two front seats.
            “Congratulations, Kev, you just popped a tire!” Joe said in a talk show voice and quickly opened his car door as I wiggled my way to the front seats and out the door.
            “Man,” Kevin said running his fingers through his curly mess of hair, “What do we do now? Mom and Dad are at an amusement park with Frankie, the band is out to eat…”
            “What about you wo-man,” Joe laughed popping his hip out like a girl, “She is supposed to be like superman…except a girl, isn’t she.”
            “She is probably out with the band, and I don’t see you with a girlfriend that can save us,” Kevin replied raising his eyebrow waiting for Joe’s answer.
            “Hey, I am single and proud.” Joe said striking a pose. I rolled my eyes and sighed sharply, “Plus, Nick doesn’t have a girlfriend either, I mean he would call Miley…I mean…” Joe stopped noticing what he was saying. I didn’t blame him, he really didn’t think before he talked. I lowered my eyes to my feet quickly trying to erase the subject from my head.
            “Joe, stop,” Kevin said softly noticing my watering eyes.
The whole Miley thing really hurt me, and, well, I really didn’t like to talk about it. Quickly whipping my head up, I acted like I didn’t hear a thing and stared at the houses.
            “Well I guess we can ask somebody if they have a spare, I mean, we are in a neighborhood,” I suggested surveying the houses around us.
            “That one,” Joe said spontaneously as he pointed toward a simple looking house with red bricks and a white garage door.
            “Okay,” I said leading the way toward the door. I stepped up onto the porch and swiftly rang the door bell.
            “Remember, we don’t know who this could be so be prepared for any…” I was cut off with by the door swinging open.
Whoa
Kati’s POV
 
 
I sighed sharply as Gabby and I collapsed on the blue pillows of the couch in the upstairs playroom. Finally, the house was clean, and I was actually proud. I hated chores - who didn’t? – But now I was done and the weekend was officially starting!
            “YAY! You’re done. So, can Patrick come over now?” Gabby asked giggling shyly as she swiftly texted on her blackberry. Gabby, Patrick and I always hung out as a trio, and even though the house was empty except for me and Gabby, I knew my parents would be okay with Patrick coming over. They trusted him like a son, which was a little odd since he wasn’t even my boyfriend.
            “Sure,” I said taking an enormous breath as I rested my head on the back of the couch, “let me get this vacuum down stairs first.” I jerked my body off the couch as Gabby texted Patrick. I lifted the vacuum cleaner and started the trek down the stairs, Gabby skipping after me.
I carried the vacuum cleaning into the kitchen and set it down gently as I opened the refrigerator. Suddenly a chime came springing from our doorbell just as I pulled a pitcher of Iced tea down for Gabby to take.
“I’ll get it,” I sang excitedly as I pushed the silver refrigerator door closed.
“Okay” Gabby sang back giggling. It was official, Friday had now begun, and the craziness of being Gabby’s best friend was about to begin
“Wow, he must be pretty speedy today” I commented heading for the doorway.
Leaping over the vacuum cleaner, I skipped to the door. Figuring it was Patrick, I swiftly turned the knob and swung the door wide open. I froze in place the minute the fresh Friday afternoon sunlight lightened my face and burst into the dining room.
            That’s not Patrick
I must have looked like an idiot because my lower jaw immediately dropped when the opening of the door revealed 3 guys standing on the red bricks of my porch. 


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New Post 5/3/2008 10:08 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 2) ]  

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Comments Please, tell me what u think ;)



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New Post 5/3/2008 10:09 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [updated - Chapter 1 (part 2) ]  

that was amazing.

i love the story.

and i can't wait to read more.

post more soon please.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
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