luckieCrystal323 [the yellow ranger loves the white ranger] wrote aww that was sad and yet so cute. and i loved the whole cornpops thing. i love this story Lindsey. and i can't wait to read more. post more soon please.

thanks

i wish more people would read, but oh well

I'll work on the second chapter probably tomorrow

xoxo

Lindsey

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Hey, Stephani!(Impregnandosi nel suo amore. Ti amo♥) wrote this totally has nothing to do with your story but i posted your one shot today :)

I read it!

emmy-kins wrote Hi!!! This story is realllllllllllllllllly good so far! please post more soon! <3 emily

thanks!

and I'll be working on another chapter!

Chapter Two: This is Really Great David!

                          I stood at the front of the stage, not moving, not my normal hyper self. I looked around the audience, smiling happy smiles while my eyes were full of sadness. It had been a year since his death, but I knew it was my fault that he wasn't here with us right now. I saw a girl and a boy dancing around, the girl was about 14, and the guy who must have been her brother was about 16. "Thanks for bringing me here! This is really great, David!"

                        I stopped singing. David. I dropped to my knees as tears began to well up in my eyes again. I looked up through blurred vision and looked around the audience again.

                       I saw a sign that said, "I want the old Joe Back." in big letters and then underneath it in smaller letters it said, "I loved him." I wiped my eyes, looking closer at the girl .Brown hair, blue eyes, about 16. Then I finally realized. That girl was Demitria Devonne Smith.

                      Demi.