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New Post 8/17/2008 1:04 PM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Argh i cant go to page 55 =\ but im a new reader and i just read all chapters, and they were absolutely amazing!!! i like that they dont start dating before they know each other(: keep up the good work!! pms!!


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New Post 8/20/2008 6:39 PM
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Bumpp.Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Bumpp.

 

Blahh, i'm so crapppyy with this updating =/

I'm so sooo sorry guys, i've been soo busy with tennis and trying to finish up my summer workk.

(Wouldn't want the teachers to hate me first day =[)

and i'm getting ready to go on vacation on sundayy.

i promise to try and update before i leave but there is no guarantees.

once again guys, i'm so sorry =[


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Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
New Post 9/9/2008 12:56 PM
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Re: Bumpp.Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Bummp! i miss reading this ff(:


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New Post 9/14/2008 4:24 PM
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Re: Bumpp.Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

I'm sorry for my lack of updating.

Heres a longggg one =]

Enjoyy!

 

Ashley’s Point Of View:

            That night our whole families went out to dinner.  Our parents sat at one table while the rest of us scattered at another.  Frankie sat at the end, Nick and I sat on one side of the table, and Joe and Kevin were placed in front of us.  The restaurant didn’t have anything diet, and Nick and I found that hilarious.  We both ended up having to order water.  After we ordered our drinks, Nick excused himself to use the bathroom.  When he came back, I found him closer to me then when he left.  He had shifted his chair more towards my side.  I couldn’t figure out if he did it on accident or on purpose.  Whatever reason it was, it was pretty nice.  I really liked having him in such close contact of me. 

            We ordered our food, and within ten minutes it came.  “I’m sorry Joe, but you eat like an animal.”  I told him laughing.  We were walking out of the restaurant.  “Please, have you seen Nick eat?  That kid eats the whole building.”  Joe told me.  Nick interrupted, “Haha, you got that right Joe.  I have a huge appetite.”  I decided I was going to join in too.  “So do I, don’t worry Nick.  We can be pigs together.”  We both laughed, and Joe just looked at us.  “You guys laugh at the stupidest things, like its not even funny and you laugh anyway.”  He shook his head in shame.  “You’re totally killing the meaning of humor.”  Nick and I kept laughing.  We couldn’t stop laughing when we were together.  We were just so happy.  Joe and Kevin decided to take Frankie and run ahead of us.  Our parents were scattered a few minutes behind us talking.  “Are we that bad?”  I asked Nick laughing.  He shook his head no.  “Joe’s such a freak.  If you haven’t realized by now.”  I laughed and shook my head yes.  Nick and I seemed to be walking closer together.

            It seemed like we were fitting in together.  We were walking side by side.  It would have been a perfect moment.  I wanted to grab his hand and lace fingers with him, swinging arms.

Nick’s Point Of View:

            It was such a perfect moment; I wanted to grab her hand and lace fingers.  Swinging our arms side by side.  I couldn’t help but wonder if she felt the same way I did.  Did she think the same way I thought?  So many things just ran through my head, and I just wanted to ask her or tell her. 

            “I don’t think we’re doing anything for the rest of the night, I think our parents are going out.  Maybe we could get your to conjoin with them, and you can come hang out with me.”  I figured that would be a good idea, it would finally be my chance.  “Great idea Nick.”  She smiled at me.

            When we finally got back to our hotel room, turns out both our parents had such a great time together.  They ended up wanting to go out together anyway.  We didn’t even have to say anything to her.  Our parents left, and Kevin Joe and Frankie had gone to the pool yet again.  It worked out perfectly because we were left together again.  I loved being with her.

Ashley’s Point Of View:

            I ended up going back to Nick, Joe and Kevin’s hotel room.  Both our parents had gone out together, we figured they’d be gone for a while.  Nick and I were again alone together in the hotel room; Joe, Kevin and Frankie had gone down to the pool.  I think they were trying to leave us alone.  Haha looks like I wasn’t the only one trying to get us together.

 


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Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
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New Post 9/14/2008 7:18 PM
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Re: Bumpp.Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Bumpingg this up <3


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And Id Swim The Ocean For You
Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
New Post 9/14/2008 9:36 PM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Bummppp


Baby, ill respond to your text messages
And Id Swim The Ocean For You
Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
New Post 9/15/2008 12:12 AM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

Bumping again.

make a wish =p

11:11!


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And Id Swim The Ocean For You
Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
New Post 9/15/2008 8:13 AM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 
Modified By ♥MaddieCullen♥  on 9/16/2008 2:54:52 AM)

Yaaaay! That chapter made my day(: Finally you post again. Thnx Ashley :]

my sweet 16 tomorrow! today!


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New Post 9/15/2008 9:33 PM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 
Oh my god.
Happy birthday!
Heres a happy birthday post for you =]
maybe one tomorrow too.
Tomorrows nicks birthday tooo!
he turns 16!
=DDD
happy birthdayy! to you & nichollass! =]
anywayss, heres a post.
birthday post!
Caution.  This chapter is extremely long, and yes very intense.
be prepared;)
 
 
 
 
Nick’s Point Of View:
            I think Joe, Kevin, and Frankie were trying to leave us alone. I think they wanted us to be together. Looks like I wasn’t the only one.
            “Ashley, can you do me a favor?” Ashley looked at me. “What is it Nick?” I smiled at her. “Sing with me.” She took a deep breath, and decided she was going to.
            I took my Gibson guitar out of its case. It turned out to be my favorite and lucky guitar. I strummed the scale being precise on every night making sure it was correct. She was going to sound beautiful, and I was sure not to mess it up. I took out a piece of paper that looked like it had been torn and been through a lot.
Ashley’s Point Of View:
            Nick wanted me to sing with him. I was pretty nervous, but I knew if I weren’t going to do it now, I wouldn’t ever have the chance to sing with him together. I was a little nervous about hitting my notes perfectly, but I had to give it a try. Figuring I was going on tour with them soon and had to perform in front of millions of people. 
            Nick brought out a piece of paper and handed it to me. “These past two weeks, I’ve been writing this song. I want to sing it with you. We can duet it. For some reason I’ve just had this on my mind, and I decided to write it on paper. Lets just give it a try, see how it goes.” Nick started to strum it on his guitar.
 
“There she goes again, the girl I’m in love with. Its cool we’re just friends.” I took a deep breath and started to sing.
“We walk the halls at school, I know its casual. Its cool we’re just..”
Nick started to sing again.
“I don’t want to lead you on, no. But the truth if I’ve grown fond. Yeah.”
We sang together.
“Everyone knows its mean to be, falling in love just you and me”
Nick sang again.
“’Till I’m on her mind. It’ll happen. I’ve been making lots of plans like a picket fence and a rose garden.”
I joined him in singing.
“I just keep on dreaming but its cool, cause we’re just friends.”
These lyrics were amazing.. I couldn’t help but think. Who was on his mind when he was writing this..?
Nick sang by himself again.
“Small talk on IM, just one word sentences.”
I sang by myself.
“Its cool we’re just friends.”
Nick sang by himself again.
“If I had my way, we’d talk and talk all day. Yeah.”
We sang together.
“Everyone knows its meant to be, falling in love just you and me ‘till the end of time”
Nick sang by himself.
“’till I’m on her mind it’ll happen. I’ve been making lots of plans like a picket fence and a rose garden.”
We sang together again.
“I just keep on dreaming, but its cool cause we’re just friends.”
These lyrics were amazing. I couldn’t figure it out..were they about me?
Nick finally sang by himself.
“Thinking about how, we’re gonna say our vows.”
I sang the background chorus.
“It’s cool we’re just friends.”
Nick sang by himself again.
“She walks down the aisle, seeing my face smile. Cause now we’re more than friends.”
My face dropped, and my heart sank. I couldn’t help but think Nick wrote this about me. Was I stupid for thinking that? Oh my gosh.. I think he felt the same way I did.
We sang together one last time.
“Everyone knows its meant to be, falling in love just you and me ‘till the end of time.”
He sang by himself.
“’till I’m on her mind it’ll happen. Yeah.”
We sang together.
“We’ve been making lots of plans, like a picket fence and a rose garden.”
I dropped out of singing, and Nick sang again.
“Just keep on thinking about how we used to be, just friends.”
I started to sing the backups.
“La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La.”
Nick sang the chorus.
“How we used to be. (How we used to be.)”
I sang my part again.
“La, La, La, La, La, La, La, La”
Nick sang one more time.
“Just friends.”
We sang together for the last time.
“La, La, La, La, La. How we used to be, just friends.”
I found myself nearly not breathing. Nick smiled at me. “Do you like it?” He asked me. I don’t think I was breathing. “I loved it Nick.. You don’t even know. It was amazing..” He looked at me and smiled. “What’s amazing is you.” I smiled at him in shock. I couldn’t believe it; Nick and I had fallen in love. He leaned in, and kissed my lips. His lips were so warm against mine. He ran his hand down the side of my face and rubbed it lightly. He finally leaned back, and smiled at me. “Ashley, you mean so much to me. I’m not trying to sound absurd. We’ve only known each other for such a small time span. But I just feel so close to you, I feel so comfortable.. You just make me feel so..” I interrupted him. I put my finger near his lips to show him to stop talking. “Nick, I do too. I just didn’t think you did.” He smiled at me, and I smiled back. I leaned back and rested my head on his chest. He started to stroke my hair. He wrapped his arm around me and I leaned towards him. We were silent for a couple hours to be exact. Our whole night was amazing together, we were just sitting there with each other. He held my hand, rubbing it. 

Baby, ill respond to your text messages
And Id Swim The Ocean For You
Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
New Post 9/15/2008 11:35 PM
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Re: Baby, I'll respond to your text messages [Nick FF] 

This is by far the worst fanfic i have ever written in my life.

i hate the plot.

i hate the story.

i hate the way its written.

all my fics are much better, especially my joints with mel. =/

i see why you guys aren't reading.


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And Id Swim The Ocean For You
Cant We Just Press Replay?
What The Future Holds
I Dont Want To Cause A Scene
 
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