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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 13 !*!*!*!* ]  
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HEY GUYS! I'm back, and my trip was very nice :) I have chapter 13 done...its a bit uneventful...but I'm writing chapter 14 and 15 and hopefully posting one if not both of them tonight to catch up on things. Sorry that the events happen kind of slow....hahaha, anyways, I'd like you all to know that I support Miley Cyrus allll the way, she is one of my role models and she is quite amazing, but in this story...she is not so amazing, but I just want to let all you Miley fans know that I think she is great...just she has to be mean in this story...hahaha, Well, anyways here is Chapter 13, I hope you like it. I am so happy to be typing again, I was having JBF withdraw, believe me ;)

Thanks sooo much for the bumping and comments YOU GUYS ROCK!!

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Chapter 13

 
 
 
A rush of prickles sped throughout my body as I yawned deeply and turned to face the back of the couch. Bringing my knees closer to my body I softly smiled at the sound of Kati’s giggle in my mind. I locked my eyes closed determine to get more sleep before the band went out to do something that night. Taking a deep breath I bit my lip playing every event that happened last night in my head. Noting that all I had been thinking about since last night was Kati’s beautiful smile and her deep blue eyes, I convinced myself that everything Joe said about Kati and I was true. I was head over heals for her, and even though I didn’t want to be…I couldn’t stop it. Kevin’s faint voice whispered in the background as I sunk my nose deeper into the satin pillow of the couch.
“I don’t know, I’m just worried about him,” Kevin whispered to someone in the room.
“Well, if he really likes her I think he’ll be fine, he can handle himself,” Faye softly said. It took me a little while to figure out that they were talking about me.
“But what about last time, he was incredibly hurt, and I don’t think I can see him like that again, and I barley did anything to help, if only I watched out for him more maybe I could ha..,” Kevin was interrupted by Faye as I heard him sigh and relax onto the chair next to me.
 
Suddenly I don’t like where this conversation is going
 
“Kev, it’s not your fault, it’s just…” Faye’s sweet voice paused as I could envision her running her finger through Kevin’s hair while she leaned up against the back of the chair.
 
            Don’t say it, Don’t say it, Don’t say it…
 
“It’s just that Miley wasn’t right for Nick,” Faye continued
           
Too late…
I cringed at the name. For one night I had forgotten all about Miley and what she had done to me, the lies she told me, the things she called me. Right then I wanted to break down completely and sprint out of the room. I couldn’t have one night without thinking about Miley while I was probably tossed out of her mind the minute we left from the ending show of the tour. Water encased my eyes and I quickly shut them hoping the thoughts would be scribbled out of my mind forever. Even the thought of Miley strangled every muscle in my body, and yet I could never get her out of my mind that is until I saw Kati.
“Yeah, but what if Kati is not right for Nick either, what if she is just like Miley and will only use Nick, then ditch him, what if…” Kevin’s whisper faded. I could feel his eyes on me and I froze, determined to not let them know I was awake and listening.
“Okay, number one, Kati isn’t Miley, we’re not talking about some power craving teenage girl that doesn’t care for anything or anyone, and number two, let Nick take a chance, if he feels this is right then let him go with it. Let him get to know her, and maybe just maybe, something good will happen…I have faith in Nick,” I felt her eyes on me too, and I kind of wished I was asleep, not hearing any of this. Although Faye was trying to help me, the conversation only made me think of how little chance of actually hitting it off with Kati…at all. I crunched my eyelids together and prayed that they would stop looking at me so I could move again. I wasn’t loving having to freeze like a popsicle just so they could observe the pathetic boy they were talking about.
            “I guess you’re right…and I think Nick deserves to have a night or two without thinking about Mil...”
 
You never ever leave my mind
My sweet, sweet Madeline
Every time I look into your eyes
I feel like I'm alive
And I can barely make a sound
Whenever you're around
You can find me hiding in the crowd
Next time you come to town

Every time I want to say hello
Every time I want to stay I go
Can't ever find the words to let you know
Sometimes you plague my min..
 
I hesitantly swept up my phone from the side table keeping my body facing the back of the couch and clicking the “Open Message” choice on my iphone to stop the music.
            “Ni...Nick? Did you hear all that?” Kevin asked I heard him stand up and walk closer to me. I tucked my face farther into the pillow as I cradled my arm up to my chest and glanced at the text message on the screen. I felt my muscles drain when I read a number I didn’t name on the screen. Smiling slightly as I figured it was Kati’s number, I flipped over the phone so Kevin wouldn’t see the name on the screen- otherwise I would have to answer questions, which wasn’t exactly on the top of my ‘want to do’ list.
            “Yea, uh, I have to take this…” I said springing up from the couch almost colliding with Kevin. I squeezed past Kevin and Faye speed walking across the cream carpet into the third bedroom of the hotel suite. Quickly swinging the door closed, I collapsed on the bed and held my phone up to stare at the message with unending excitement, but suddenly I felt every speck of energy wisp out of me when I read what was written.
           
            Hey Nick-er-roo,
Kati won’t text you. I tried all morning to get her to text or call you or something…she won’t and she’s trying to distract me from nagging her. Sad for her, her plan is not working since I got a hold of her phone. This is her number and I suggest you call her cause at this rate she’s not going to call you. Adios my famous amigos.
-         GABBY
 
I like Gabby in all but that isn’t what I wanted to hear. If fact, I was a little irritated at the fact that she actually told that Kati didn’t want to text me. My energy was completely drained at the thought. Being rejected in a text message by a completely different person wasn’t exactly ego boosting. I crunched my eyes shut and drew in air to my lungs attempting the refuel my body. Relaxing my arm that was holding my phone, I flung it down on the bed beside my num body. Attempting to fall asleep again and forget about everything, I embraced the silence of the room…until I heard ringing. My eyes snapped open.
            What was that?
 
Lifting my body off the mattress I looked at my phone to see I had pressed ‘Call Number’ on the open text message.
 
            Oh, crud…
 
My stomach twisted as my head felt as if it was filled with air, making me dizzy.
 
            How could I do something so stupid?
 
Suddenly, the faint click of Kati’s phone being picked up shook me out of my trance as I jerked the phone up to my ear. A round of faded squeals sounded in the back ground as I could hear Kati softly breathing.
            “Hey…Kati?” I asked wondering if she was waiting for me to say something. I bit my lip wishing I could hang up, but my arm wouldn’t budge to move my phone away from my ear.
            “Hey Nick,” Kati lightly said. The sound of her voice echoed through my body as my stomach churned once again. I kind of wished my stomach would stop that. Another round of light squeals filled the background. I figured she was around other girls, but it was kind of awkward to know that they were listing to me talk to Kati. Suddenly another voice echoed from the back ground, breaking the silence that Kati and I had sunk into.
            “Girls? What are we do…” The phone snapped shut and the line was dead silent.
Water filled my eyes slightly before I shook my head and leaped off the bed to jerk the door of the room open.
           
Kevin is right, she’s just another Miley

 


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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 13 !*!*!*!* ]  
Modified By Faye[izzle]<3<3<3  on 5/18/2008 11:08:49 PM)

So ya that was pretty darn amazing! Welcome back Madeline! We've missed you!

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OMGOSHHHH!!! You're BACK!!! Ahhh!!!! I'm glad you had such a good time.

And with another AH-MAZING chapter. Oh how I love you!!! <3 You're so good to us readers :D :D

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! That faye/kevin conversation was so heartbreaking yet sweet. Aww they really do care for Nick. Grrr Miley (the character). NO Nick, Kati is nothing like Miley!!! She really does like you!!

I hope she calls him back!!! Gabby is such a sweetie- great bff :)

Fantastic chapter- I really don't mind the slow pace...at all!!

Can't wait for the new chapter!!! :D

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omg!!! that was ah-mazing!!! really! NIck!! she's not another miley!! dont listen to your brother!! lol. pms!! please!!

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Aww Julia, don't tell Nick not to listen to his brother. Kevy was only trying to help.   Anywho, they're both right, Madeline. The chapter was irresistable! Post more soon!

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omg madeline.. this is amazing... Nick... is such a lost puppy.. or mayb its just me.. lol

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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 13!*!*!*!*]  

Hola Amigos that comment'o on my story'o! I have to dash off to some end of the year awards or something...sooo, I will be writing chapter 14 when I get back and posting in, then contiuing w'/ my homework. Sorry I didn't post ch. 14 last night, I was out like a light the minute I sat down. Well, anyways, thanks for commenting you guys are beyond awesome :) Thanks!

 

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Modified By G-Mad{s}eline♥  on 6/24/2008 1:39:35 PM)

Hey guys! I'm up late again, just for you, I still have homework to do, but I figured I could do it in the morning :) I went to my end of the year awards thing...it was kinda stupid...I think we're the only school that does it hahahaha, but I actually won a couple of very highly honored awards for english! I was like...woah! I wasn't expecting that! it was pretty sweet! HORRAY! NEways, here is chapter 14, ....its a bit short and only from Nick's POV again, BUT I like it alot and I laugh at it because what Gabby does is exactly what real life Gabby would do [ no way! hahaha] So, heres chapter 14 and I think I'll catch some Zs, hope u like it!

THANKS U GUYS! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!

<3 Madeline

 

Chapter 14
 

 

            “And…this one,” Joe stretched a piece of music out to Patrick so he could put it on the stand in front of him. Soft strums of guitar filled our hotel room almost instantly after Patrick had shuffled the packet of music on the stand and adjusted his guitar. Joe’s brown eyes widened and shifted toward me in reaction to Patrick’s skills, but I kept my eyes glued to the carpet. I wasn’t thinking about the music Patrick was playing or whether he was right for the position of an additional backup guitarist that we needed for our new tour in the summer, I was thinking about Kati and her smile…again. Though she had practically ripped out my heart in a maximum of 8 minutes, I still couldn’t knock her out of my mind. Biting my lip I ignored Kevin’s elbow that was jammed lightly into my rib cage to get my attention. I adjusted my position on the couch that I was crunched on between Joe and Kevin. The constant squeezing and bumping really didn’t do much for my irritable mood. Patrick’s mother sat quietly in the kitchen area of the hotel suite next to Gabby who had asked to come along for Patrick’s informal audition for the band. Both of them stared at the granite counter top engrossed in the guitar notes. Moonlight brightly gleamed through the window and onto Patrick who was perched on the edge of the soft arm chair the sat diagonal to the couch that my brothers and I were sitting on. It was about 8:45 and my brothers and I were finally alone in our suite, well except for Patrick, his mom, and Gabby.   Faye had left to our parent’s room where she would be staying to watch Frankie when needed and help organize the upcoming tour, recently deciding to become an intern tour manager. Although the When You Look Me in the Eyes tour hadn’t ended just yet, plans were still swarming around on what we were going to do next and what was going to happen which didn’t do any good for anyone’s stress level. The sudden stop of guitar strums whacked me out of my thoughts as I jerked my head up to stare at Patrick’s pitch black hair and nervous expression.
            “Dude, you’re amazing,” Kevin said laughing lightly, “I don’t know about anyone else, but I’m convinced you are the one for the job,”

            “I completely agree,” Joe said as Patrick gently set down his guitar to lean up against the armchair. It sounded as if they were whispering, but I figured it was just because I was so deep in thought. I heard a soft intake of breath from the back of the room where Gabby and Patrick’s mom teetered on the edge of their oak chairs waiting for my response on Patrick’s performance, but I was too busy drowning in questions – similar questions to the ones I had been strangeled with for the past 3 hours since Kati snapped her phone shut on me.

 

            Why didn’t Kati come? She’s probably too stuck up to come, too heartless, too self-centered to come…just like Miley…I should just give up girls forever…its not like anyone is going to truly like me….just like Miley…just like Miley…just like Mi-

 

            “Nick?” Kevin knocked on my head causing me to crunch my eyes piercing him with a glare, “anyone home?” I shook my head lightly as if to readjust my focus on the task at hand.
            “Wait, what?” I asked turning my head to see Joe’s black bushy eye brow lifted and his head nudge toward Patrick, “Oh, uh, you’re great man, we still have paper work to do, but I think you are in.” I reached my hand out to shake Patrick’s. Gabby squealed excitedly leaping out of her chair and wrap her arms around Patrick’s neck who was now standing up proud yet humble. Running my fingers through my curls, I turned away from Patrick embracing Gabby’s slender figure. It only made me want to sprint all the way to Kati’s house, grab her, and never let her go. I wanted her to know that I was head over heals for her…even if I had only met her yesterday, but that couldn’t happen, it wouldn’t happen…because Kati was just like Miley. Closing my eyes gently and laying lightly against the back on the couch I cleared my mind of all thought while Kevin stood up with Joe and explain what would happen when they got Patrick the job and what contracts and paperwork he would have to go through. Biting my lip I noticed someone softly sit down next to me on the couch where Joe had been. I wanted to open my eyes to see who it was, but I knew that if I did I might just let Kati back into my mind. Sleeping was my only shield.
            “She really likes you, if you didn’t catch the drift,” Gabby’s voice rang through my ears as I threw the thought out of my mind and refused to listen to it.
            “Yeah, sure she does,” I took a deep breath releasing any final feelings for Kati…but I knew that it was going to take more than a stupid breath to get over her beautiful voice
            “She hung up on you because we were in acting class, and she was too nervous to text you, it’s as simple as that,” I turned my head and slowly unlocked my eyelids to focus on Gabby who was staring at the cream colored wall in the back of the room. I suddenly realized that Gabby knew everything…everything about me liking Kati, everything I was worried about when she didn’t text me, everything I thought when she hung up on me…if you asked me it was kind of creepy.
            “Do you read minds or something…?” I asked laughing slightly and Gabby turned to smirk at me.
            “No, but I know my best friend well enough to know that every time she hears your name, her stomach flips or something cheesy like that, and even though I’ve only know you for like a day, you aren’t to hard to figure out either, rock star, it is pretty obvious you can’t stop thinking about that funny little smile of Kiwi’s” Gabby stood up slowly keeping her smirk plastered on her face. I felt fire rush to my cheeks.
 
            Was it that obvious…wow…nice going, Nick
 
I smiled slightly and ran my fingers through my curls once more.
            “Just hold on, Nick-er-roo, she’s still in love with you, that’s just the way she rolls, you will soon be inseparable and…” Gabby brightly smiled and paused for dramatic effect, “you’ll be more than just friends.”
            “Clever” I said sarcastically flashing her unimpressed expression as she walked out the front door with Patrick.

“I know,” Gabby laughed as Kevin followed them out the door. They were obviously going down to Mom and Dad’s room to discuss the arrangements for Patrick joining the band. I figured I could join them soon, but right now I had to think of a way to somehow ask Kati if she could please be mine.

 

OH! Also, I'd like to reconize Hawk Nelson's lyrics of "Hello" in chapter 13 which is put in as Nick's ringtone - I kinda love that song since it is sweet and it has MY name in it ;) just in case you didn't notice

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Wow. Really amazing Madeline. I think this was one of the best! I really liked the whole lyric thing at the end, priceless. Gabby is such a good friend!

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